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paxtofettel In reply to ??? [2015-06-23 23:02:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
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grayracer83 [2012-11-06 23:16:11 +0000 UTC]
fine work. very fine work.
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paxtofettel In reply to grayracer83 [2012-11-18 21:19:13 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't call it talent. It's more like me just writing something.
I think everyone has the capacity to write. It's all about what you got in your noggin.
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grayracer83 In reply to paxtofettel [2012-11-21 02:13:35 +0000 UTC]
good point. still it bugs me when a writer downplays themselves.
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paxtofettel In reply to grayracer83 [2012-11-21 02:18:24 +0000 UTC]
It's something we tend to do a lot. Lessens the hurt done by really scathing critiques.
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paxtofettel In reply to grayracer83 [2012-11-21 11:01:42 +0000 UTC]
Plus, it also serves to make compliments all the much sweeter.
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flowerpower71 [2012-09-04 02:52:27 +0000 UTC]
What are you talking about? This is not garbage! This is amazing! So much detail! You have an amazing talent.
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paxtofettel In reply to flowerpower71 [2012-09-04 21:17:24 +0000 UTC]
Meh, I'm mediocre. There are way better authors than I.
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Code44 [2012-07-24 20:58:35 +0000 UTC]
Hi !
I made a french transalation for this fanfic. Over here :
[link]
Have a good day !
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paxtofettel In reply to Code44 [2012-07-24 22:51:16 +0000 UTC]
No wait, Merci.
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Code44 In reply to paxtofettel [2012-07-26 08:35:42 +0000 UTC]
No problem, it was a pleasure !
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paxtofettel In reply to Code44 [2012-07-24 22:21:29 +0000 UTC]
Umm, thanks, I guess.
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elr79655 [2012-05-26 02:14:19 +0000 UTC]
This is one of the best fan-fictions I've read except for one small detail: Canterlot doesn't have a Winter-Wrap-Up; they use magic to change the seasons.
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paxtofettel In reply to elr79655 [2012-05-26 02:31:33 +0000 UTC]
I meant in Equestria in general, not just Canterlot.
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Nightshade678 [2012-05-20 21:15:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh. My. Gosh... How DARE you call that GARBAGE?! This is ART in the form of words! I enjoyed every moment!
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BraveryTheHusky [2012-05-10 21:38:31 +0000 UTC]
Very good! I love it! Although I was kinda hoping for a clop scene though.
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BraveryTheHusky In reply to paxtofettel [2012-05-10 22:49:23 +0000 UTC]
Maybe. It all depends on how you depict and describe it. In the case of this great story you've written, it would have to show great passion in their love making, which I think would just further show the great love they have for one another.
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paxtofettel In reply to BraveryTheHusky [2012-05-10 23:43:12 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'll leave it up to the readers to form their own interpretation.
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BraveryTheHusky In reply to paxtofettel [2012-05-11 10:51:13 +0000 UTC]
Good idea. I didn't mean to impose. It's your story, and it's just my opinion. I tell every author to always write how they feel they should, and if they feel like trying something new, to do it. It's entirely up to you how and what you choose to write, and I like that about your stories. I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.
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Steel-Accord [2012-05-07 16:40:56 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful! You're also the first I've read to bring up the Alicorn in the room, Cadence herself. Nopony else seems to realize or at least mention that after this beautiful honeymoon, the bride is going to outlive her husband by . . . well EVER!
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AlexLeep [2012-05-06 17:15:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh. This is so beautiful. You did both characters justice. I commend you for your stellar writing ability. WONDERFUL job.
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AkantiaSolaris [2012-05-06 08:34:00 +0000 UTC]
This was a wonderful little story about these two, I really enjoyed every moment I spent reading it <3
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Thundershink [2012-05-06 08:30:42 +0000 UTC]
really good :3
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Thejboy88 [2012-04-30 20:52:14 +0000 UTC]
After having viewed the recent two-part episode, I, like many people, have absolutely fallen in love with these two characters.
And I must say, you have done their relationship justic here my friend. Everything they say and do with each other in this story is not only appropriate for them as a married couple, but also completely in-character given what we've seen of them in the show.
I don't care if others have done something like this or if you don'ty think you're experienced in writign stories like this. Because frankly, to me, this is a work of art, both as a love story and as a character piece. And is by far the best piece of Cadence/Shining Armour literature I've read yet.
Bravo on a job well done.
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paxtofettel In reply to Thejboy88 [2012-04-30 22:40:20 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's some high praise there.
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Thejboy88 In reply to paxtofettel [2012-05-01 18:06:02 +0000 UTC]
A writer like you deserves it. It's very rare that I've come across a fanfic depicting a married couple that actually SOUNDS like it's abouta married couple.
Most of the time it's just god-awful dialogue or some thin pretext for a sex scene.
But you treat it with the kind of dignity a relationship like this deserves. And for that you deserve the praise.
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paxtofettel In reply to Thejboy88 [2012-05-01 19:38:31 +0000 UTC]
That, that makes my heart swell with pride.
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Darthsylar12 [2012-04-29 21:50:41 +0000 UTC]
This is really well done. I love the concept and you wrote a really sweet scene between the two. I would love to read more like this but there is so little. I really loved this and don't think your a bad writer. I'm an an awful writer. I make way more mistakes than you and I have a terrible grip on grammar. Don't beat yourself up man. I liked it.
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templar127 [2012-04-28 17:06:20 +0000 UTC]
Very well written! Faved!
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Thejboy88 [2012-04-28 16:15:14 +0000 UTC]
Just for this, I'm inviting you to my club.
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Red-Fox14 [2012-04-27 22:55:36 +0000 UTC]
We need more good romance stories like this one.
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paxtofettel In reply to Red-Fox14 [2012-04-27 23:22:53 +0000 UTC]
Trust me, there are better stories than this one.
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ElliotxClaris [2012-04-27 03:34:24 +0000 UTC]
Bad news her official name is Cadance. You probably should edit this.
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TheEnlightenment777 In reply to paxtofettel [2012-04-27 00:01:41 +0000 UTC]
Yes, it was after my house slave stopped carrying my burdens...but seriously, your work is great, I wouldn't belittle it. I seriously kept thinking about it for well after I read it, it really is sweet and just cuddly enough to make even a soulless invading monster like me to appreciate love.
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