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Published: 2016-02-05 03:15:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 4182; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 86
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The proposed cover and should be coming out shortly in PDF, MOBI and EPUB formats....for free here on DA (209 pages)A story about a Twilek that gets caught up in an adventure she really didn't want.
Over the years I’ve seen many prevalent facts in all fans of Star Wars and in all the Star Wars books.
Consider this: no one looks at the point of view from the citizens of the Empire, those people caught in the propaganda of the Emperor that all is better under his ruling. Or what of the parents that just lost their children to the wondrous Jedi, only to see not some two or three months later The Jedi turned on the Republic and hear their sons or daughters are killed in the uprising. Would you not think the Jedi to be a cult now, that these people deceived your innocent child? Or what happens to the children that ‘act’ up, or are considered disciplinary problems? Where do they go? How are they dealt with?
These are things to consider while reading some of the characters narratives in this story, it is from different point of views, different beliefs, with motivations that are far deeper than the ‘The Jedi are always Heroes’ concept. They have flaws...
Characters to expect: Callissandra, The whole gang from Star Wars Rebels, Barriss Offee, and a few more that I've rendered recently.
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Barriss Offee - Photobombed 2
Special thanks to for Callissandra's Crown
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Looks great! Looking forward to the finished product
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thank and and it will be up in just a few hours.
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thank you. Hope you grab a tall drink and enjoy it!
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This really turned into an amazing story Paul, from its beginnings I knew it was going to be different than the Star Wars books I have read and collected and you didn't disappoint me. I honestly don't think I have read any Star Wars books like this one. Most are third person with the exception of I, Jedi about Coran Horn, your use of a rotating first person style where you see each characters point of view during their part of the story is amazing. You have woven a story that at times will make you laugh, cuss, scream, wonder what is behind the next bend in the corridor and wipe tears of sorrow as well as joy from your eyes. I have read you other two novels and all of the third one you are currently working on in that series, but it is this one that I have to say best defines you as a writer. And not simply because its crack for this Star Wars geek, but because this story shows your range as a writer and your ability to take the reader with your opening words and capture their imagination as they turn each page following the adventure you have set before them. You should be very proud of what you have accomplished with this book.
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Dude! That is one hell of a write up. Thank you! THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
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You are very welcome, I am glad that you have asked me to be a part of your writing and realized I hadn't really commented on your style only what you have done.
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nice art, interesting concept for a story, i look forward to reading your view of the issues
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thank you and I hope you do enjoy the story.
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Oh h h Exciting! Is it done yet? Is it done yet? Is it done yet?
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Yes it, it is done...and collecting dust on my computer. I'm just taking a break, Saturday morning I'll be posting it.
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