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Pechschwinge — Hope for Dawn
Published: 2010-09-20 18:25:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2535; Favourites: 135; Downloads: 108
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Hoping for the dawn is never in vain---------------------
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I just wanted to practicing colors and when I started I was very uncreative and it was very very late so after I loved that piece of her so much I tried to do a familiar picture.
And after all I see some meaning in it. I'm satisfied~
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I think this picture represents the owl wants to fly away into the dawn but can't becuase he has jesses on. ( the straps on the legs)
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wow also ich mag das bild.
vor allem die eule die so hochsieht das sieht wirklich grandios aus ^.^
man möge mir verzeihen, aber was heißt das kurisv geschrieben in deiner beschreibung? *duck*
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schon evrziehen hehe
Es heißt "Es ist niemals vergebens auf die Dämmerung zu hoffen"
Und danke. ich fühle mich geschmeichelt, dass due s magst
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der spruch gefällt mir :3
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Yep, sorry, can't critique because I don't get enough pay for a membership.
Anyways, i think that there is a lot of things going on at once within this drawing, in the best way possible. The negative space is taken advantage of, giving it a nice, open feel to it, like it wants to take to the skies. It was a good call to use some interference in the background, and the feeling of the branch fading in the background establishes a feeling of longing. Plus, the shading's just beautiful.
For the negative side, it's a little subtle. Firstly, the right wing seems to be a lot lower than the left wing, like it's hanging off, even though you can tell the wing is attached. The negative space is so large, that it's difficult to see on most computer screens (mine is 1024x768) and makes a big need for a lot of scrolling. Lastly, I know this is fairly subjective, but the blackness on the dark side is slightly awkward. It might help to put in some ambient lighting, but it might not be worth it. (I didn't make the art, it might have looked bad with ambient lighting)
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Ah yeah I guessed the right wing will be a little problem. I hope to fix it later in any way. luckily changing digital things is easier than traditional x)
hm and I'll try the ambient light too. just have no idea when I get the mood to sit on this piece again x,x
thanks for the helpful critique. I'm always happy about reasonable critique ^^
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thanks for not biting my head off.
but yeah, I'm glad I could be of help.and for, I'm guessing 5 hours, this is awesome.
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x) no artist should ever bite someones head off just because of reasonable critique
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well, thanks. anyways, Godspeed. you're work is really good, it's just a matter of spreading it around. A lot of artists are like that.
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feel free to tell anyone of my art in journals or rl x)) I won't mind x)
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I fixed the wing a little bit. is it better that way?
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If I'm looking at the revised version, then yes, it does help it out. Other than that, not much to say.
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Sehr stimmungsvoll und mir gefällt das im Wind herumfliegende Band.
Doch Schleiereulen haben doch schwarze Augen x3 Aber so hat die Eule etwas wehmütiges an sich.
Das Bild würde sicher ein schönes Leseziechen abgeben.
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jap schleiereulen haben auchs chwarze augen - ich weiß. aber ich zB habe ganz helle blaue augen und ich wollte mich irgendwie darinne personifizieren... x_x mag vielleicht viele verwirren x_x
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Du gehst dann sicher auch den Kinofilm "Die Legende der Wächter" (oder wies heisst) gucken. Da haben die Eulen glaubs auch solche Augen x3
Augen mit Pupille und Iris sind halt schon meistens ausdruckstärker als nur schwarze Augen. Wegen mir musst du dich bestimmt nicht rechtfertigen ^^
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pfbl x) ic erkläre ja nur wieso es so ist 
jop in den film geh ich sowieso. nächsten monat ists soweit wheeeeeee~
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