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Peghan — I Think That....
Published: 2011-06-20 15:00:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1337; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 16
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Description I think that you're....
Really stupid when you're drunk,
In fact, you're really stupid when you're sober too.
I like the way you smile at me,
Yeah
Even that evil grin that only ever tugs at your lips when
You're going to poke me
Or pinch me
Or tease me.
But to be honest I think that's all rather sweet of you.
I even like it when you cry because it proves that
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All your scathing sarcasm and dry wit you're
Human, too.
And that is all why I love you.
I think that.....
The moon and the stars spin in golden circles about your being,
The sun answers to you and only you,
Where ever you go laughter and love follows, spurting up tender
Green Shoots
In your large footsteps.

I think that....
You're too young to die.
That out of everyone, every person, every boy, every man,
It shouldn't be you lying in that hospital bed.
Needles in your arms,
Nightmares in my head.
Both of us, living in terror, of a heart that will one day stop...
Beating....
A cancer that will one day with its cruel bite
Devour
You whole.
And leave me alone, in this world.
Selfish thoughts.

But, most of all, I think that....
I love you and
I cannot exist without you.

In my arms.....
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Comments: 56

Peghan In reply to ??? [2011-08-22 19:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I'd forgotten about this one, your comment made me re-read it. Which is odd because The inspiration came from a friend of mine who got really drunk one night (the end part about cancer was fictional) but reading it over it seems more relevant, almost prophetic to now, that's weird....
If that person is anything like my friend they must be lovely Thank you

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LearningEverMore [2011-06-23 05:32:47 +0000 UTC]

You're writing is amazing, I wish I could write as well as you :/ you did fantastic!

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Peghan In reply to LearningEverMore [2011-06-23 12:51:39 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! and you can, you can write much better!

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LearningEverMore In reply to Peghan [2011-06-23 18:05:50 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome!!!!! and nah, I really can't

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Peghan In reply to LearningEverMore [2011-06-23 18:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes you can!

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LearningEverMore In reply to Peghan [2011-06-23 18:19:30 +0000 UTC]

No need for violence, but I shall not believe such things

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Peghan In reply to LearningEverMore [2011-06-23 18:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Disgraceful *shakes head*

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LearningEverMore In reply to Peghan [2011-06-23 18:44:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm disgraceful?

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Peghan In reply to LearningEverMore [2011-06-23 18:46:55 +0000 UTC]

Only for the overwhelming modesty (I don't think I even made sense then, oh well )

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LearningEverMore In reply to Peghan [2011-06-23 19:05:01 +0000 UTC]

well thank you for liking my writing

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Peghan In reply to LearningEverMore [2011-06-23 19:26:31 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome and the same to you

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Shadowlily16 [2011-06-21 17:43:58 +0000 UTC]

oh its lovely!

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Peghan In reply to Shadowlily16 [2011-06-21 17:45:48 +0000 UTC]

really? aww, thank you!

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Shadowlily16 In reply to Peghan [2011-06-21 17:48:22 +0000 UTC]

of course! you're very welcome!

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fidele7684 [2011-06-21 12:53:07 +0000 UTC]

Look'

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Peghan In reply to fidele7684 [2011-06-21 15:12:18 +0000 UTC]

(a typo...?)

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fidele7684 [2011-06-21 12:52:19 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't looke like y were angry when u wrote this poem
and don't stress about people cause remember that some make an appearence some stay to make a big different and those friends should count

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Peghan In reply to fidele7684 [2011-06-21 15:12:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you I'll try to remember that.

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fidele7684 In reply to Peghan [2011-06-21 15:27:52 +0000 UTC]

I hope u do

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Peghan In reply to fidele7684 [2011-06-21 15:33:56 +0000 UTC]

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fidele7684 In reply to Peghan [2011-06-21 15:39:52 +0000 UTC]

^^ soon i will start publishing my poems on here hope you will check them out.

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Peghan In reply to fidele7684 [2011-06-21 15:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Sure! I'll watch you so I don't miss 'em

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fidele7684 In reply to Peghan [2011-06-21 15:43:46 +0000 UTC]

I did so too! thank you alot

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Peghan In reply to fidele7684 [2011-06-21 15:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! and you're welcome

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fidele7684 In reply to Peghan [2011-06-21 15:56:24 +0000 UTC]

I will read another poem of urs in just a second and i will comment u

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Peghan In reply to fidele7684 [2011-06-21 15:57:31 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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fidele7684 In reply to Peghan [2011-06-21 15:59:14 +0000 UTC]

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Isoya-star [2011-06-21 11:30:49 +0000 UTC]

Very deep, well done. Hope thing get sorted soon for u and ur mates.

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Peghan In reply to Isoya-star [2011-06-21 15:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'd tell you what's going on but.... 1) I'm not quite sure myself cos no one will tell me
2) I can''t write anything about her because she knows about my dA account now... it's like something from Orwell's 1984, I swear.

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Isoya-star In reply to Peghan [2011-06-21 15:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh right well I hope u don't get into too much trouble

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Peghan In reply to Isoya-star [2011-06-21 15:28:28 +0000 UTC]

nom. thanks

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mariposaCoco [2011-06-21 09:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Amazing poem. And, your artist comment is too cute ^^ hope you get a hold of why you're in trouble (:

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Peghan In reply to mariposaCoco [2011-06-21 15:18:10 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks!

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Schmiggipoo [2011-06-20 21:25:50 +0000 UTC]

You have no idea how much I can relate to this D:

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Peghan In reply to Schmiggipoo [2011-06-20 21:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Aw, I'm sorry

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Nightfest [2011-06-20 19:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Awesome I enjoyed it :]

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Peghan In reply to Nightfest [2011-06-20 19:28:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you and for the fave

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Nightfest In reply to Peghan [2011-06-20 19:31:44 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Lemon711 [2011-06-20 19:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem! Absolutely heart wrenching. To begin with I thought it was about the dab, but then, meh, no... Still, stunning! It really was gorgeous!
Shall note you now

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Peghan In reply to Lemon711 [2011-06-20 19:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Of course, me and the dab are totes in love

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Lemon711 In reply to Peghan [2011-06-20 19:23:46 +0000 UTC]

Obvs

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Bousset-Wilde [2011-06-20 17:29:57 +0000 UTC]

I love it my good fellow!Is so amazing. And I like that visual part where the letters are like a delicious stair

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Peghan In reply to Bousset-Wilde [2011-06-20 17:30:37 +0000 UTC]

hehe, thank you!

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Maniac-ani [2011-06-20 16:49:52 +0000 UTC]

The poem is wonderful!
If you want hate here you are WHY DO COLDS EXIST!? I BLOODY HATE THEM!!! (Get well soon )
And what's with THE FRIEND? I don't understand but if she (I thinkXD) has a proper reason I'm sure this will be cleared out soon

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Peghan In reply to Maniac-ani [2011-06-20 16:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Maniac-ani In reply to Peghan [2011-06-20 17:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Peghan In reply to Maniac-ani [2011-06-20 17:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Maniac-ani In reply to Peghan [2011-06-20 17:06:25 +0000 UTC]

np~
Yeah it's always best to hear it from the source herself since it could be possible someone misunderstood.

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Peghan In reply to Maniac-ani [2011-06-20 17:07:32 +0000 UTC]

yah, my train of thought exactly.

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Maniac-ani In reply to Peghan [2011-06-20 17:15:15 +0000 UTC]

Glad we agree with each other

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