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Description I eat children. Rotting their chubby young faces and breaking down innocence.
I pin birds to the ground. Forcing their free feathers to become one with the earth and ensnaring them forever within the moist soil.
I steal luck. Snatching it away just when you needed it most, and locking it somewhere where you will never reach it. Away, where no human dares to walk.
I kill stone. Breaking it and making it fly away into the air. Making it swim off down rivers and dissolving it faster than the eye can bear to watch.
I don't go tick. My voice is that of the knell. My touch is that of the rigid coffin pressing against your back. My taste is of worms' meat.  My smell is that of desperation, because you cannot escape.
You've become trapped. Trapped by the grasping fingers of time.
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train-farts [2015-01-08 14:20:55 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this. Thanks for posting  

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Argentum-Silva [2012-03-04 20:07:13 +0000 UTC]

Again, I am blown away.

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Peghan In reply to Argentum-Silva [2012-03-05 16:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thanks!

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SingsWithRavens [2011-07-21 05:46:14 +0000 UTC]

Tempus edax rerum.
You are a very talented poet, Peghan You have a lot to say about society and the philosophy of life. I thank you for sharing your most beautiful works - no matter how gritty.
It is grit that makes life worthwhile.

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Peghan In reply to SingsWithRavens [2011-07-21 17:04:52 +0000 UTC]

It's been a long time since I've seen latin
and thank you for the lovely comment

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Pereyga [2011-07-17 18:42:07 +0000 UTC]

ok you walk around and think stuff like you want sausage and eat children? LOL

nice poem ^^

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Peghan In reply to Pereyga [2011-07-17 19:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Doesn't everyone?
Thanks

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Pereyga In reply to Peghan [2011-07-17 19:22:34 +0000 UTC]

i dont eat sausage so i dont xD and you are welcome

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Nikevi [2011-07-14 20:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm hungry....
But on a more serious note, I was blown away by this short little... well I'm not quite sure what this is. So expressive and out there, I can't quite come up with any more adjectives to describe this (isupposedepravedwouldworktoobut..) You have quite the imagination

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Peghan In reply to Nikevi [2011-07-16 11:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
I'm not quite sure what it is either, but I guess one day when I have my mental breakdown doctors will be reading this and nodding seriously
Thank you again

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plginbby [2011-06-24 16:23:07 +0000 UTC]

I am absoloutly taken by this, wow just, fantastic!

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Peghan In reply to plginbby [2011-06-24 16:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you!

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plginbby In reply to Peghan [2011-06-24 18:43:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry I'm so behind on your work! D: I'm trying to catch up! SO MANY DEVIATIONS TO READ

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Peghan In reply to plginbby [2011-06-24 19:03:00 +0000 UTC]

Don't be sorry! You don't have to read them
hehe, Thank you
lols, I submit too much

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MoonlightOrchids [2011-06-13 22:10:42 +0000 UTC]

Freaky poem, but very true. Nice job.

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Peghan In reply to MoonlightOrchids [2011-06-14 16:56:58 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank you

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MoonlightOrchids In reply to Peghan [2011-06-14 16:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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createdwithpassion [2011-06-13 15:18:47 +0000 UTC]

i love the descriptions and the simplicity of it!

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Peghan In reply to createdwithpassion [2011-06-13 15:27:28 +0000 UTC]

THanks!

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createdwithpassion In reply to Peghan [2011-06-13 15:31:45 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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LifeWithSubtitles [2011-06-13 12:16:01 +0000 UTC]

I was once voted for as most likely to eat children at a work xmas party.... I'm not sure why anyway! beautiful beautiful! The imagery is disturbing, but wonderfully so, that I got a chill up my spine as I read it. A triumph! (now write something about sauasages! XD)

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Peghan In reply to LifeWithSubtitles [2011-06-13 15:28:06 +0000 UTC]

you child eater!
thank you!
but then I'll get hungry!

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LifeWithSubtitles In reply to Peghan [2011-06-13 16:46:23 +0000 UTC]

But you already seem hungry! XD

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Peghan In reply to LifeWithSubtitles [2011-06-13 18:40:35 +0000 UTC]

Only for children

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AdJiT [2011-06-12 01:46:30 +0000 UTC]

I love it! And now I want some sausage...

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Peghan In reply to AdJiT [2011-06-12 07:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
But you'll only get that sausage if you tell me why you want it

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AdJiT In reply to Peghan [2011-06-12 21:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Because you mentioned it and I'm perpetually hungry. Mention a food that I like and I want some.

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Peghan In reply to AdJiT [2011-06-13 15:31:07 +0000 UTC]

nom, CAKE!

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AdJiT In reply to Peghan [2011-06-13 22:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Except for food that I don't like. For example, cake.

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Peghan In reply to AdJiT [2011-06-14 17:12:20 +0000 UTC]

naw, killjoy

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AdJiT In reply to Peghan [2011-06-14 21:30:02 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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RehNahvah [2011-06-11 21:52:07 +0000 UTC]

OMG! LMEAO rock on!

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Peghan In reply to RehNahvah [2011-06-11 21:57:18 +0000 UTC]

haha, is that a good thing? I'm not very good with txt speak

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RehNahvah In reply to Peghan [2011-06-14 22:15:14 +0000 UTC]

OMG (Oh My God(I thought most people knew this one oh well)) LMEAO (Laughing My Evil Ass Off) is a personal twist on LMAO (Laughing My Ass Off) So yea in the words of Martha Stewart 'Its a good thing'

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Peghan In reply to RehNahvah [2011-06-15 14:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Nom, well, thanks for the education LMEAO

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frenchw1nter [2011-06-11 04:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Very expressive, I love it!

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Peghan In reply to frenchw1nter [2011-06-11 07:24:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Brynndlebrynosis [2011-06-11 02:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Wibbley-wobbley timey-wimey.
Anyways, I love it. Because it is true and the writing is good.

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Peghan In reply to Brynndlebrynosis [2011-06-11 07:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! (Dr. WHo....?)

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Brynndlebrynosis In reply to Peghan [2011-06-11 17:33:47 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.
I am so happy you got that reference.

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Peghan In reply to Brynndlebrynosis [2011-06-11 17:35:09 +0000 UTC]

haha, Who wouldn't? (yah, I'm sad )

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Brynndlebrynosis In reply to Peghan [2011-06-13 03:13:38 +0000 UTC]

....I see what you did there.

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Peghan In reply to Brynndlebrynosis [2011-06-13 15:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Non? tell me! What did I do!!!

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Brynndlebrynosis In reply to Peghan [2011-06-13 23:01:07 +0000 UTC]

..."WHO wouldn't"...

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Peghan In reply to Brynndlebrynosis [2011-06-14 17:11:34 +0000 UTC]

lol! I never even noticed

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GeekOfDoom [2011-06-10 22:58:45 +0000 UTC]

This is like something my disturbed friend would write......

But awesomer, and not as depressing. (He did a poem about a girl being abused and her father killing her, then one where a slave gets killed my his master when the master is hurting his mother.) DEPRESSING. YET AWESOME. I REST MY CASE.

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Peghan In reply to GeekOfDoom [2011-06-11 07:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, methinks your friend is disturbed
haha, thank you!

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GeekOfDoom In reply to Peghan [2011-06-15 22:13:04 +0000 UTC]

No prob. :]

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Lemon711 [2011-06-10 21:27:44 +0000 UTC]

AHAHAHAHA I am a child

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Peghan In reply to Lemon711 [2011-06-11 07:26:00 +0000 UTC]

No. You're dead >.<

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