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Published: 2014-03-11 18:11:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 7147; Favourites: 651; Downloads: 0
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HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAYEdit: I forgot the stars on her stockings //shotdead
I'm finished. done. My hand hurt. bye. <3
you can buy the full picture for 50 points
Just please don't upload the full size anywhere without my permission, it'd make me very grateful if you didn't! >o<
I also did NOT use any stocks, custom brushes or references. (I did however look st some over all refs for galaxies, but no specific one) The only brushes and textures being used is from SAI and PHOTOSHOP!
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Drawing was also uploaded here: www.pixiv.com/works/42178857
and
pemiin.tumblr.com/
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Comments: 23
I watched this drawing as it was made, and it pretty much blew me out of the water. There's many things I love about it.
Body -
Really great figure, both body and hair. I especially love the legs, you gave them a lot of attention and definition. The face is also really well-done, with moe-moe proportions that touch the hearts of the mass multitude of females! My one wish here though is that the hands appear flat and the fingers crooked. They also appear to be rather small compared to the rest of the body, which leads me to my next point that I consider.
Proportions -
The flaws I see in it are few; the hands being one of the most prominent. Compared to the rest of the body, they appear very small (I know some girls have small hands, but there's something that doesn't sit right with them in this portrait). Additionally, the fingers appear somewhat crooked and don't stand out as natural fingers would in an outstretched pose like this one. The pose is a great choice for this piece, resembling power and a sense of godliness from hovering over an entire galaxy; it gives you a feeling of just how big she is compared to her environment. However, the pose also appears somewhat stiff from the waist up..I could understand if you wanted to give her the "ascension" type of feel, but if she looks like she's standing on the galaxy, her torso needs to compensate to give that point of balance. It looks like she's forcing the pose.
Color -
REALLY great choice of colors here. A cold blue for the majority but with the inside hair having a warm appearance, this gives off a feeling of self-control and containment. The stars added around her arms also give off the sense of power by giving off the idea that she's gathering them up.
Her outfit works really well; with the gold giving her a sense of power and royalty (?)...her hairstyle (hime-cut, go figure) further testifies to that. The flow of the hair also diverts the viewer's eyes from giving too much attention to the eyes or the surrounding stars/galaxy for too long. Overall the mix of blues, purples, and gold work up a great composition.
Overall if I had to rate this on a scale of 1 to 10, I would give it a conservative 7. The artwork is really well-done and the time invested into it was not ill-recieved. However, if it had to be re-drawn, I would suggest to check the proportions of the body very carefully and practice rendering the hands more to give it a more natural appearance. Again, the upper body gives off a slight contrast in detail/quality compared to the head and the legs. However, the choice of colors and the cuteness appeal the picture makes make up for most of the flaws that were detailed above.
Great job with the picture, and hope to see more beautiful work from you! c:
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You're welcome any time C: I loved watching it as you colored it so when the critique popped up I was like "*-*...I should give it a shot" lol
The hands are a given, it's really difficult to draw hands and toes well w/o a lot of references xD I try to use my own hands but even they have their limits. I'm also still learning proportions so my own works have a good deal of them, but still need slight improvements. Tbh head/face/hair and legs were probably the things i loved to draw most so those developed sooner than hands xD I'm guessing it was the same for you?
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Thank you for the critique! It is very appreciated even though I requested critiques by mistake //shotdead
I find it fair and I agree with you that the pose seem stiff and the proportions are wrong.. It's really something I just have to keep improving on.. haha.
Thank you once again! Happy to see some well thought and great critique! >w
TOTALLY AMAZING, WONDERFUL, GLORIOUS, PERFECT & DELICIOUS!!! That wonderful hair
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wow, words cannot express how gorgeous this is
The colouring, the atmosphere, and omg that galaxy *o*
Your works just keep getting better and better, as if that was even possible asdfkjl; <33
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this is so beautiful!
I really love those bright vibrant colors!
have you thought about doing a coloring tutorial?
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Uwoooh~ Potato sis this looks so prettyyyyyyyy !
I love your coloring so much //sob
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you should make it kinda....GLOWWW....around her....
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She's so pretty and I love the way you did the galaxy and stars in the background.
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wow!!!Q A Q I'd say what i-it's just... SO PERFECT!!!ojdnisj
What Mimi said! XD
But really, this is so beautiful, amazing work. <3
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So beautiful OMG!!!! You're art style is just so beautiful~
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Aaaaaaand I missed seeing it finished .-. but it looks really cute! Great job! c:
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I have been refreshing ever since the stream closed just so i could comment on this BEAUTIFUL artwork QAQ!!!!!
First, the background is AMAZING. the detail, time, effort is all not wasted and if i didnt see it with my eyes i would have thought you had taken a piccu off of google of the galaxy! QAQ!!!
nextu is the hair. EEEEEEEEE OMG THAT HAIR PEMIIN! COULD IT GET ANY BETTER QAQ
AND HER EYES PEMMIIN THE EYESUUUUU THEY ARE SO BRIGHT AND PRETTY AND SHE HAS SUCH GREAT LASHES! I love how you do lashes! QAQ they just look so sexy but cute and EEE YOU COLOR SO WELL I WILL NEVER STOP ADMIRING QAQ!!
And then her LEGS! The anatomy in the piccu is great but when you look at her legs its so SEXU YOU SCREAM! QAQ!! THE CURVES ARE SOOO GOOD! QAQ
I give this a 1000000000 out of 10 because I love it and im sure they love it and i want to admire this forver QAQ
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