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Description This is the cover art I commissioned from the very talented Valcron for my latest story, Past Sins. You can check it out right now on Equestria Daily.

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Phantomstorm110 In reply to ??? [2022-01-22 08:48:19 +0000 UTC]

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mlpfirelily [2018-07-02 22:14:04 +0000 UTC]

I would love to have this wonderful story as a hardback book!

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Pizzaronny [2018-03-08 02:05:53 +0000 UTC]

I’ve read Past Sins. Loved it!

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No1MporXant [2017-12-04 08:30:46 +0000 UTC]

I love your story and all, but one thing has been bugging me about Nyx, I doubt that she is simply a Reincarnation of Nightmare Moon separated from Luna, if she was just echoes of of the very essence of Nightmare Moon & traces of the Magic that Nightmare Moon wield, she would have been nothing without a piece of DNA to latch on to so that a Body could be formed to contain all within a living lifeform, and since Twilight's Blood was used for MN's resurrection, wouldn't that mean that Nyx was forced from Twilight's DNA? Which would thus basically make Nyx a Clone of Twilight Sparkle that has been modified to have the appearance, memories & power of Nightmare Moon, but somehow still retained Twilight's heart, thus explaining why even when she was completed she was still good at heart, and if it was Twilight's Blood flowing through Nyx's veins, then wouldn't that have meant that on a genetic level that Nyx truly was Twilight Sparkle's Biological Daughter anyways? It would explain why Nyx had some similarities to Twilight, such as a thrust for knowledge & a love of learning, but if Nyx was cloned from Twilight, shouldn't she have at least had a certain physical appearance kind of resemblance to Twilight, like if nothing else Nyx could've had the exact same Pink Streak in her Mane & Tail that Twilight had, it would have then made the characters think that Nyx being Twilight's cousin to be more believable what with a family resemblance and all, and if they somehow figured out that a sample of "Living Matter" from Twilight Sparkle was used in Nyx's creation, then they could have used Nyx's genetic link to Twilight to try and convince Nightmare Moon that she wasn't who she thought she was, that she was a clone of Twilight force to look like Nightmare Moon, and that it was as plain as the Pink Streak in her Hair, and having Twilight & Nyx coming to know that they are related by blood, despite the way it happened it could have still strengthen their bond as Mother & Daughter, but That's just what I've had on my mind for a while now.

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KorinDragoon [2017-06-15 23:58:21 +0000 UTC]

Is there a comic version of this, if so where can I find the complete comfic at?

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jimmyhook19202122 In reply to KorinDragoon [2017-09-28 19:31:01 +0000 UTC]

SaturnStar14 isΒ working hard on making Past Sins into a comic entirely.


here's the icon link to her profile page

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KorinDragoon In reply to jimmyhook19202122 [2017-09-29 01:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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jimmyhook19202122 In reply to KorinDragoon [2017-09-29 16:15:04 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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SpokenMind93 In reply to jimmyhook19202122 [2017-09-28 19:41:21 +0000 UTC]

I think he knows. I mention him on every page xD

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jimmyhook19202122 In reply to SpokenMind93 [2017-09-28 22:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Heh. okay then :3

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QueenofEverything900 [2016-08-10 20:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh I want to read it so badly!

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Ailthron65 [2016-05-09 00:49:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm no brony but I found your stories with Nyx and I have to say the were all great reads, very interesting and can pull a few heart strings from time to time, keep up the fantastic stories

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Kmn483 [2016-02-08 01:59:04 +0000 UTC]

This cover was actually the thing that got me to finally read the story. So much emotion in it. Valcron did an amazing job catching both the light and dark sides of your wonderful story.

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DrewCarriker6231993 [2015-09-29 18:47:45 +0000 UTC]

I love your stories!

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XxNikkiSparklexX [2014-10-05 11:21:40 +0000 UTC]

cool

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NFSFAN27 [2014-07-14 17:36:47 +0000 UTC]

great work , amazing story, i like itΒ Β 

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Pepsi-CoIa [2014-04-19 22:00:34 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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TwilySoarMAR3 [2014-04-15 04:50:39 +0000 UTC]

W-what's happening to Twilight, in the corner right picture....?Β  *rushes back to book to continue to read*

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Ezio9Realoaded [2014-03-15 22:38:48 +0000 UTC]

one question nyx is nigth mar moon but ma question is how she was luna and celestias sis

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Chaos51268 In reply to Ezio9Realoaded [2014-03-22 22:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Nightmare Moon is an alternate persona of Luna. Β She and Luna are technicallyΒ one-in-the-same. Β So if Nightmare Moon were to actually become a separate being, she'd be closer to Luna than you could normally expect from any living being, and she would also be related to Celestia due to having Luna's blood.

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Duna364 [2014-03-15 20:23:09 +0000 UTC]

N!CE. I love it

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core10117 [2014-02-24 20:27:51 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful, this story has been my favorite so far without a doubt. You captured the mood perfectly.

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boothnat [2013-12-16 16:08:04 +0000 UTC]

Is there ever going to be a reprint of the printed edition of this story?

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PenStrokePony In reply to boothnat [2013-12-16 18:32:07 +0000 UTC]

In all likely hood, probably not, but registered for the Equestria Publication is mailing list or follow me here on Deviantart or on Fimfiction.net. If it does happen, it will be announced through those channels.Β 

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KasumiTsukito In reply to PenStrokePony [2013-12-22 22:04:20 +0000 UTC]

This helps me a lot because I've just finished reading this story for the first time, and I really would like a printed copy. Β This probably goes for several people who didn't get a chance to get a copy of the book when it was selling.

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boothnat In reply to PenStrokePony [2013-12-17 11:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Yourmove17 [2013-09-15 16:55:07 +0000 UTC]

You know what I found odd. My nickname belonging to one of the fandom's most beloved characters while I've had it for all of my life. It's almost as if Mlp and I were destined to be.

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doctorwhooves107 [2013-09-08 22:46:06 +0000 UTC]

I love past sins! so many emotions going on there

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KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-01 19:38:14 +0000 UTC]

i dont get it what is this about ? is there an episode called past sins ? if so could you pleace give me the link ?

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-13 04:22:32 +0000 UTC]

It's a fanfiction, there is no episode about this

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-09-13 15:43:34 +0000 UTC]

tnx i read it and it Β was AWESOM !!! i sooooooooooooo wish they would make that a season !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-15 03:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh,that would be so awesome!I'm reading it right now.

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-09-15 13:49:54 +0000 UTC]

have fun with that reading ^^Β 

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-15 18:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^-^ It's the best book I've read so far!

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-09-16 19:24:51 +0000 UTC]

same here !!!!!!!!!!!!

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-21 17:17:50 +0000 UTC]

Did you know that Nightmare Moon is actually going to be back???I CAN'T WAIT FOR IT!!

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-09-21 18:30:59 +0000 UTC]

wat ... I LOVE NIGHT MARE MOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can Β not wait any longer for that season !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-21 18:48:01 +0000 UTC]

...So you will bug the MLP FIM animators to death.. xDΒ 

Here have a link to the official animated dump we got at BronyCon from the animators (whatever it was called)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=H3zr6Z…


First there is Scootalu against Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, then there are Power-ponies (OMG right?,then there is Apples forever,Apples together song (YAY), and then.... Wait for it.....

NIGHTMARE MOON RETURNS BUHHAHUHA! Β fgdfgkhfdsaztuxcll;otrf VJbfjksvbgjthbnm OO

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-09-22 19:27:52 +0000 UTC]

lollllll powerponies XD

i luvz that song

night mare moon - ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-25 00:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Ikr!!!!!

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-09-25 04:31:02 +0000 UTC]

but i think that night mare moon is going to apear as her oan pony - so with out possesing princessluna this time - or so i've heard ^^

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-25 13:50:55 +0000 UTC]

I dont thinks so, because in the preview, they showed Luna walking out and say "did you really think I would bathe in your PRECIOUS light??there can only be one princess in equestria,and that princess wil be MEE" and then she got trasformed into NM.
it would be cool if nm appeared as her own pony,but it probably wont happen ;(
sorry about the spelling,im on my ipod

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-09-25 13:58:41 +0000 UTC]

that's cool but i think i read that somewhere cous luna got some friends and is now cool with her sis and that's why NM will try to take over her body but won't sucseed so she will for the 1 time create her oan body leaving luna ingured so she wouldn't fight back ... at least i think that will happen but i eint sure

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-09-30 00:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Ohh..Well,maybe,no one knows...

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-09-30 20:02:35 +0000 UTC]

the part where i read was probubly made after this video

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-10-01 14:18:21 +0000 UTC]

what par was that?I wanna seee xD

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-10-01 20:22:53 +0000 UTC]

sorry i ment that wat i read was probubly made after the video and about the link ... i dont have it sorry i thought i didn't need it

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-10-02 14:34:12 +0000 UTC]

It's k. But what was it about? I can try to find it if you tell me that

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KisaraDoesArt16 In reply to WildAnna12 [2013-10-02 17:26:13 +0000 UTC]

it was some info about the next season

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WildAnna12 In reply to KisaraDoesArt16 [2013-10-04 12:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh,ill see what I can find

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