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pentupsentiment — A Mortal Among Gods
Published: 2007-05-30 09:51:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description A mortal once wished
She was better at what she needed to do
That she didn't have to think so much
About what she had to do

She was given a chance
To live with a group of gods
She was given the hope
That she could improve on what she needed to do
And hopefully have a piece
Of their intellect

But alas
Since her understanding of things
Was sub-par to those of the gods
And try as she might
To understand their conversations
Their thoughts
Their language
She just couldn't adapt

In the end
She just gave up
And ended up
Not being able to change anything
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Comments: 2

Phalaina [2009-07-26 13:55:56 +0000 UTC]

I really like this poem . It has an interesting, sad story and the words you chose really reflect the mood. You're very good at writing poems .

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pentupsentiment In reply to Phalaina [2009-07-27 11:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Geline! I actually miss writing poetry. More often than not my compositions are written without much thought, but nowadays I'm rarely inspired.

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