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Published: 2010-08-08 20:04:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 614; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 17
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I FINISHED!! I FINISHED!! OH GOSH I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S BEEN TWO WHOLE YEARS BUT I FINISHED IT AND I'M SO HAPPY AND TIRED AND ASDKLFHJ YAAAAAY!!!!You can read it here --> [link]
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A short section taken from a fanfiction I started a couple months ago. The scenes don't exactly translate well into a doujinshi style story, but I tried x'D
And actually. . . most of the joke must be lost since it's right in the middle of a scene. It makes more sense with context, believe me! D:
Marui Bunta, Yukimura Seiichi (c) Konomi Takeshi
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NOOO!! Marui's dying!? D> *is an idiot too (not really)*
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Awesome job with the expressions!
And yes, I went and read the whole fic. It was really good to read ^^
(I'm sorry, I'd write more but I'm going out 
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Haha, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic~ <3
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xDD
I kind of like this omake page better than how I've written it though @A@;;
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Somehow your style makes them look more younger and cute. 8D I...don't know what fanfiction this is! D;
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That's because I can't draw old people! -laugh-
And besides, they're really still little kids~ I think people forget that sometimes, considering characters like Tezuka and Sanada x'DD
It's one that I've started writing, but haven't gotten around to typing much of it up yet x'D
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Konomi...e___e why the hell did you made them looked older than their age...?
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*chuckles*~ I remember reading that!
Haha Marui is such a silly glutton~
I love Marui at the end!
He'll probably be on the look out for Niou in case someone's really assigned him to kill him!
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xDD Marui is such a fun character to depict~ His order in life goes: food > tennis > everything else!
Gosh, being on the Rikkai team must be nervewracking. With three Demons, a devil, and a trickster and everything xD
Sometimes I want to save Jackal from it all
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Sweets>All Food>Tennis>People Who Think He's Genius and can cook>Everything Else>Stalker Jiroh
Because apparently he's made no attempt to get his wristbands back. xD;;; And seems to ignore the kid at some times even if he does think he's a Genius. Poor Jiroh~
*laughs* Only Yaaagyuu, Marui and Jackal are relatively not scary?
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-laugh-
Anything >> Jirou? xDD
I always assumed that if Marui ever came into contact with Jirou again to try to retrieve his wristband, Marui will find something(s) else missing to replace! x'D
Switch!Yagyuu is scary. Sweets deprived!Marui is scary. Jackal... not yet, but is scary in his own way for being able to thrive at Rikkai -laugh-
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*laughs* Quite possibly so!
I felt very sorry for Jiroh because he always wanted attention from Marui >... Until it was released that he stole Marui's wristbands! *laughs*!!! He's not so innocent after all!!!
You're probably right about this too.
I bet Jiroh wears his backpack the way he does, slightly open with his racket handle out, so he can quickly sneak things in his bag if he comes into contact with Marui xD;;;
Hahaha! Wouldn't sweets deprived Marui.... just be... I don't know. The words "total meltdown" come to mind xD;;;
Oh Jackal.
Just transfer now.
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xDD! When I read that I sort of backed away from the screen a bit. Sort of like 'JIROU. WHAT IN THE WORLD.'
Half amusement, half fright is a very strange combination xD
I can imagine!
I mean, after the initial shock of horror of course, -insert slumped over Marui-
"...Hey. You okay?"
"Go 'way. 'm busy being dead."
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*laughs*!!
It's like... alarm clock gift.... food gifts... homework note gifts... stolen property....
WHAT?
Oh that Jiroh... there's something mysterious about him....
And he can act all cute and make his way into your heart so easily! Be AFRAID!!!
*laughs*! I think you captured it perfectly with those two lines. *nodnods* Oh gawd. *wants to draw that, but must draw other things first laskdfj*
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xDDDD
Aren't the happy characters somehow always some of the scariest?! Somebody like Sanada I can be okay with because I know he's scary and he shows it x'D
I mean, people give Fuji and Yukimura as examples, right?
Ask if they're angry, and they'll give you a smile. And then you have less than a second to run away because you know they're angry.
Eeeh~ I'm doing that again, aren't I? x'D Fueling that fire.
-waves it down a bit-
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Maybe...
Shiraishi can release some sort of "poison arm" at will.
Kin-chan is able to release a hurricane at will.
Ohtori could (but probably won't) release an-over-120-neo-scud-serve at will.
Dan can release a pissed off Akutsu at will.
Jiroh can probably release a whole pissed of Hyoutei team at will...
xD;;;;
*laughs* Not complaining~ *writes it down on list of things to draw*
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-laugh- Oh, Dan. And the list goes on!
So that's why I need those kids to all be happy with each other. It'd make the world such a better place! x'D
♥!
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On and on! The weak looking/kind boys can take care of themselves/have someone help them.
Is Akutsu in this equation? xD;;; I don't know if he can get along with... everyone.
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. . .
Mmnn. That's true!
Maybe keeping the happy ones happy will be best, and they can oversee those like Akutsu x'D Seriously, can he get along with... anyone?
Dan doesn't count.
Nor Taka-san.
Nor -insertanyothercharacterImighthaveforgottenthatwouldrenderthisquestionobsolete-
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Hahaha!!
I remember FS Yanagi, RPed Akutsu!
We managed to somehow make it work and they somewhat got along ><
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YES! How in the world did that happen?! xDD
She played such a great Akutsu too!
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I think in all honesty... "Mi-chan"/Yanagi's RPer is more like Akutsu or something... xDDD I hear she's very tough!
Yukimura's RPer and Mi-chan didn't know they went to the same college!!! They do now though~
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Such a small world! That must have been really amazing to find out!
But here I am on my own section of the continent xDD Well, the closest TeniPuri friend I met online lived in the same state as I do, just in opposite corners of it ^________^;;
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Haha I think it was!!!
Yukimura said she freaked out xD!!
Yanagi's in the hospital... so Yukimura can come on and tell us how she fares ><;;
Eh?? Really..? >< I'm sure there are plenty there Dx!
Mmm... I'm sure there are Tenipuri fans in Toronto too (2 hours from me) >👍: 0 ⏩: 1
o_________o!!
Is she really sick? I feel bad that I didn't say anything because I didn't know >_______<
I'll have to dig around a bit and expose them then~
There's a lot of people where I live, just not geared towards anime/manga x'D
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She got Dengue >< It's fine now though!
She's recovering!
*nodnods* But most people haven't been on, so most don't know I think.
xD;;; Finding PoT fans in particular might be a challenge though!
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Goodness, the poor dear ;A;
I'm so glad that's she's getting better now!
I know a couple of hardcore anime fans, and whenever I ask their opinions about TeniPuri, they always seem to find it either incredibly boring or incredibly stupid x'D;;
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She's definitely the upbeat and strong type! Yanagi'll be all better in no time! >< Although college was stressing her out too! That's how she got careless and got dengue.
xD;;; Gah! As if Orange suited ninjas are better and cooler!
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>_______<;;
I wish everybody would be able to take care of themselves. I can put off sickness well enough during the school year at any rate. And then close to dying during break because it doesn't matter then x'D
-laugh-
I never could understand why that could be any more interesting! x'DD Couldn't stand Naruto, and I did give it a try to be fair. Twice. The manga and anime.
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>__Maybe because you don't sleep properly!! xD; *chases you to bed*~
Must keep our dear Ori in good health!
xD;;; I don't mind Naruto, but obviously... PoT rules my soul where Naruto could not!
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XD Who said that flower for dying person XDDDDDDDDDd
hehehe you are right ! it's sweet
Nice ! Ori chan
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xDD Because Marui is silly~
He thinks that people give flowers to friends when they are sick to they will feel better
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heheh What can we do? he is Marui heheh 
he do the flower as medicine XD
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It's understandable then? xD
Thank you~
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