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PerryThePervySage — Grace (Remake) (Kisekae)
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Published: 2016-09-05 21:28:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1274; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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This is a remake of my OC Grace. Technically it's not a remake because it looks pretty much identical to what she looks like in my previous work, but because my old PC's hard drive got damaged and I basically lost all my codes and etc, I had to remake her from scratch. I hope you guys like this because this took a good chunk of my time just to remake.Related content
Comments: 29
Please bare with me as this is my first critique.
There are many good aspects to this creation, but some areas that need working on. The color scheme is fairly simple yet pleasing, but a lot more can be done with it. On the topic of simplicity, the outfit is very plain, but in a way good, as it is not an eye sore. Assuming you are new to Kisekae, I recommend you experiment with different styles. That is where the originality rating comes in. This appears to be the original style used in Kisekae. Along with that, this character, with how she looks and how simplistic it is, it could look too similar to other original characters made in Kisekae. The originality impacts the technique, as how you went about creating her seems a bit rushed and, again, simple. This could be mistaken for beginner mode. As for impact, there is little. Then again, it is difficult to make a viewer think about a Kisekae work. Overall, fairly decent work, though the most important thing is that you experiment with style and character design.
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Thanks for the constructive criticism. But if I wanted to add more design for her I would have gave her more design. I like my very simplistic style and I don't plan on changing it anytime soon since I'm still new to Kisekae. Besides we're now at an age where people are literally getting upset and accusing people of stealing or copying people's kisekae styles because of the fact they look similar.
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That dosen't mean you have to stay in basic style becuse even there you will be told "your stealing" honestly just don't steal, be nice and keep improving there shouldn't be any one annoying you about it
"a Man can make a wall of wood but will always need to improve the wall"
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Trust me there already was. I do plan on improving, but not now. Right now I feel happy with my style and if I feel like it needs to be improved or changed then I am more than willing to change it. At the end of the day I am the artist and an artist doesn't just change his or her art syle just because a few people say that it needs to or that is should. It's up to the artist to improve and change the art style. Don't get me wrong I agree that change will help me grow, but at the same time I'm happy with where I'm at right now.
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Let make it simple
"if you say so"
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I don't get it. Does it really bother you that much that I'm happy with my style right now? I didn't say I would never change.
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No, just as you said
I'm not mad
It's your words and your actions that you take not mine lol
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Sometimes. Why you ask?
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Could we do a yuri rp?
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I only rp over email...
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Why? To me that sounds very suspicious.
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I use a New 3DS XL to access dA, which causes notes to be a bit too glitchy for me. I also don't own a computer/cellphone. You don't have to believe me if you don't want me to, but I will say that I don't lie, and I have no reason to lie.
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It's fine. I believe you, but unfortunately I have to decline your offer because I only have 1 email and it contains all my personal information including my real name and etc.
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Can't you create a new email? Also, my email contains my real name, but that doesn't stop me from using it xD
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I can't. Too many usernames and passwords I have to remember as it is.
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Thank you for understanding
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