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Published: 2011-03-25 20:24:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1164; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 25
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Description A Race at Rosendal. Halfmoon Stables had been there for the wedding ceremony and the showjumping, both had been successful and when RDs Staff talked about a race taking place, it was sure, that they wouldn't miss this event either.
So it was the first race for Flora, the new jockey for flat racing, for HS, as she had joined competitions before, but not for a stable. Since Lennard still wasn't able to compete again and Victoria wanted to concentrate on her Showjumping career, Flora, called Fips, was the only one who would ride races in the near future.
When Rasputin had had his warming up, she let him trot in circles and waited for the crossbreed race to start. He hadn't lost his last race, but his racetrack flirt with IVS Louise probably had been the reason, why they had not been under the three best either.
When the race started, Samantha, who had brought Fips and Rasputin to Rosendal, waited next to the track to watch the race. Rasputin had been good in the trainings at HS, but there he had been racing alone, so maybe he just had problems with concentrating on the track, when there were mares next to him?
The race started and Rasputin seemed to be at his best. He rushed forward, as if he was flying, it was like there was a thunderstorm on the track with all the young horses dashing through the dirt. Fips leaned forward over his neck and let him run, trying to motivate him with her legs and body, when suddenly, only a few metres in front of them, a beautiful booty appeard – at least Rasputin seemed to think so, because as soon as he was next to her, he did not move any faster, although Fips was sure, that there was still something he could give.
„Could you just stop being a yerk and concentrate on the race?“, she snapped, when Rasputin – instead of trying to lap Milly, just ran next to her and acting like a teenager being in love with like every girl around. Collyn, the jockey of the mare, seemed a bit confused by her words – maybe he wondered, if she meant him?
„Oh, it's alright! Actually we're not here at all!“, she shouted at him and grinned, then tried to make Rasputin run faster and leave poor Milly alone.
„Argh, come on! It's not Ladies first! Where did you get this from? I thought your daddy is gay?!“, she told the stallion again, but it seemed, like he was not sure about that.



Lol, this might become a running gag, I think Rasputin is some kind of a gentleman or ladykiller and loves to flirt at work xD Hopefully Louise won't see that, she might not want to talk to "Casanova" again xD
Well - Hope you like it Milly is awesome, needed to include another horse and she's so beautiful
Daddy is at Rosendal too, maybe they see each other



For Rosendal Crossbreed Stakes G2 hosted by *Jullelin

- Horses name: HS Rasputin
- Breed: 75% Thoroughbred, 25% Painthorse
- Gender: colt
- Age: 3 years

- Jockey’s name: Flora Schmidt
- Country: Germany
- Stable: Halfmoon-Stables


Credits:
Art, Flora & Rasputin (c) Me
Collyn, Milly + Design Rasputin (c) *abosz007

no ref used!

Again: Are colors and shadows okay or too dark/light/contrast too high or low?
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Comments: 17

BloodyLys [2011-04-22 16:03:19 +0000 UTC]

R.o.f.l.! Als ob Rasputin keine größeren Sorgen hätte, als auf der Rennbahn zu flirten..
Er sollte das Rennen besser gewinnen, vielleicht interessieren sich die Stuten dann mehr für ihn! XD

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Pestdoktor In reply to BloodyLys [2011-04-22 23:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Ja, vielleicht xD Naja, Männer eben xD

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BloodyLys In reply to Pestdoktor [2011-04-23 07:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Aber wehe, er kann sich nicht zurückhalten, denn sonst gibts Ärger mit Mutti! XD

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abosz007 [2011-03-28 08:24:55 +0000 UTC]

thihihi nein was ein gentleman Rasputin doch ist
cooles bild aber nix toppt Collyn's blick der schaut doch echt bisschen weiblich aus
sicher toll die beiden rennen zu sehen

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Pestdoktor In reply to abosz007 [2011-03-28 14:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Er gibt sein bestes, um den Ladies zu gefallen xD

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inglorious-vikings [2011-03-26 19:43:17 +0000 UTC]

LMAO! Rasputin, der alte Schweeeerenöööter!
Genial! Ich find, das sollte echt sein kleiner Running Gag werden, dass er sich immer ne hübsche Stute zum flirten sucht. Lol!
Und keine Sorge, Louise sieht das nicht zu eng. Die sieht nicht eng, eigentlich. ;3 Und sie is sowieso zu doof um irgendwas zu schnallen, lernt wahrscheinlich Rara jedesmal neu kennen.

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Pestdoktor In reply to inglorious-vikings [2011-03-27 09:59:54 +0000 UTC]

Okay, das beruhigt mich natürlich xD
Aber die is auch so süüüß xD

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inglorious-vikings In reply to Pestdoktor [2011-03-27 10:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Lol, aber leider auch genauso doof wie sie süß is. XD
Sie is das pferdgewordene Cliché des total lieben, süßen Dummchens, dass nichts rafft.

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Pestdoktor In reply to inglorious-vikings [2011-03-27 11:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Loool xD Geil ausgedrückt!

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Kirayli [2011-03-26 15:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww was für ne tolle story und klasse Gesichtsausdrücke :3
Aber (muharhar, konstruktive Kritik!):
Ich finde den Winkel, vor allem bei Rasputin doch ziemlich komisch, er sieht irgendwie schrecklich kurz aus und dabei so hoch... es sieht fast ein bisschen aus, wie ein Mensch weil er die Beine so dicht beieinander hat ôo Die Pose ist irre schwierig, aber irgendwas passt da nicht ôo
Und bei den Armen der Reiter bzw. ihren Händen würde ich dir raten, die nicht so komisch in die Mitte des Sattels münden zu lassen, sondern die mal so zu zeichnen, dass die neben dem Hals nach vorne verlaufen, dass also die Fast auch nen bissel größer wird und auf den Zuschauer zukommt, dann sieht die Pose der Reiter gleich viel realistischer und aktionreicher aus Bei Flora wäre das echt gut gewesen, bei Collyn wärs wohl schwierig zu machen
Die Farben find ich voll okay, bei der Schattierung von Rasputins Nasenflaum (nennt man das so? Ein Riemen isses ja nicht...?) hättest du dir nen bisschen mehr Mühe geben können

Liebe Grüße~

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Pestdoktor In reply to Kirayli [2011-03-26 16:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Okay danke :3
WIe lief deine Prüfung? :3

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Kirayli In reply to Pestdoktor [2011-03-26 16:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaach- ich komme mal zu ICQ xD

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AzarielShax [2011-03-26 14:35:06 +0000 UTC]

soo ein Gentleman xD

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Pestdoktor In reply to AzarielShax [2011-03-26 14:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Hehe ja xD Nur leider zur falschen Zeit xD

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RomyvdHel [2011-03-25 20:43:44 +0000 UTC]

haha Amazing!!

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Pestdoktor In reply to RomyvdHel [2011-03-25 20:49:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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RomyvdHel In reply to Pestdoktor [2011-03-25 20:59:51 +0000 UTC]

welcome !

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