Llyrs-Omega [2010-05-14 22:51:54 +0000 UTC]
I love it! It's a good poem.. But I hate to be the thorn in the foot but I did notice something wrong that you could possibly improve on: when I stands alone, it needs to be capitalized. Other than that, it's a solid 10 out of 10. Good work.
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