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peterku — Pk-10-07-2016
#concept #fi #rifle #sci
Published: 2016-07-10 18:34:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 25800; Favourites: 635; Downloads: 619
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Concept of sci fi rifle. One of those simple and based on standart profile.Work has been made in 3ds max + vray as rendering engine. Completed in Photoshop. Picture is bigger to see details.
So what do you think. Do you like it or not? tnx for comments if any. bye.
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Comments: 50
I absolutely love this design you have created here.
First of all, I like the general shape of the rifle, it's so appealing and fits the vision. Adding onto the shape is the amount of detail this weapon has, I love all the little grooves and small details that this rifle has.
To me, this thing looks like something straight out of Halo (like the DMR almost), which is awesome.
Overall Critique:
Beautiful shape
Incredible detail
Fantastic vision
Love that magazine
If I was making a video game or an animated movie, I would hire you for modeling on the spot!
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tnx you mate for positive comment. that mag I did by strong red on purose just to have something highlighted on the body.
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This looks awesome, for me, it looks like the shadow stalker from Unturned
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tnx mate. one of older work.
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Any criticism of this would be entirely subjective. The execution is amazing, and you should definitely be hired for your skills.
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tnx you mate. nowadays 3D program can give you good output without much efforts.
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Very easy to imagine yourself holding this. I really like how comfortable it looks to use. Looks like it's made from very light materials, good recon weapon.
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hi. yea Im trying for new material look. personally I like those shine but they are unpractical and slippery so I use this matte ones.
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This is something that would definitely feel right in place in a Crysis game. As sleek as it is, it pulls off looking brutal at the same time. Nice work, Peter, as always.
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tnx you. crysis has nice desings on its own. dont need anything else.
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Unless there is a really good reason for a thumbhole stock design, I'd prefer a pistol grip, instead. It would make maneuvering in really tight quarters a little bit easier.
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yes it is more practical. definitelly but these thumbhole stock helps me hold profile line much better.
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could be. definitely no bullets
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Very nice work, but a few comments. One, the sight seems either out of position, or out of proportion, I feel the holographic sight you used on the Onyx would have been a better choice. Two, the rear stock should be adjustable. It may be, but I can't tell that it is. Third, the section on the side without a cover, is a place for dirt to collect. And last, the red battery pack seems wrong. I'm not sure why, maybe a personal thing, but I wouldn't want it on a weapon I needed to use.
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hi. yea rear stock is adjustable. there is also button for that bu it is not good visible. and yea. that hole in the middle should be covered but without that mechanism it would be too easy and simple job to do design 
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Alright, I can understand about a side cover from a design stand point, and as I said before, really nice work.
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Wonderful work. A couple of questions, though:
First, do you envision this to be an energy-based rifle, or does it fire conventional projectiles?
Second, does it have merely a barrel divided into four components all firing at once, or does it have four separate barrels?
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energy based. and yea there are 4 barrels in the front firing in various settings.
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Does it have multiple barrels together?
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looks good but barrel length and scope size seem a little disproportionate to the overall size of rifle
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too big or small? can you be more specific. proportion is my bigest problem all the time.
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That red bit seems a little...distracting, for lack of a better word. If it's meant to be the power supply or something, it might be better to make it blend better with the rest of the rifle
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could be. I used on purpose. just to have some other color too.
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I feel like it should have a pannel over that missing bit... otherwise, it's very good.
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Probably yes. I used that open hole to make something more comlex.
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