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Published: 2012-06-25 02:44:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 605; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 36
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Description This was my means of transportation for three weeks, when I was staying on South Andros. Take a closer look at the pedals, one is missing. The bearings were gone on the crank consequently you could hear me coming for a mile. The dogs weren't too impressed though, they took the noise as a personal challenge to their territory. Good exercise!
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Comments: 31

NightingaleShadow [2012-06-25 03:59:25 +0000 UTC]

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I really like this shot! The colors work really well (the blue has a nice contrast with the red-orange of the rust and the bright green ) and you used both line and spacing really well. Also its a really clean shot, it has neither noise nor blur which is a really nice. That seems to be a bad problem here on deviantart, but your shot here is very clean. The only critique I have to offer is 1. There may be just a little too much going on. I really like the framing but maybe if you cropped it just a little on the top and the bottom it might make it look just that much better. 2. I think the image may be just a little dark, but that might just be my screen, but if it isn't my screen then maybe just brighten it a little bit to improve on that. Regardless really nice job!

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peterpateman In reply to NightingaleShadow [2012-06-25 13:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your interest and for your critique.

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NightingaleShadow In reply to peterpateman [2012-06-25 19:48:49 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, beautiful shot!

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rpost61 [2014-04-04 18:16:00 +0000 UTC]

excellent shot

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peterpateman In reply to rpost61 [2014-04-04 18:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Rocky!

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rpost61 In reply to peterpateman [2014-04-04 20:01:03 +0000 UTC]

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CanadianRy [2012-08-03 15:13:31 +0000 UTC]

This photo I featured here [link]
Thank you for your support as well as sharing your great skills!
Ryan

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HelenaMim [2012-07-01 10:49:47 +0000 UTC]

You have been featured here: [link]

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Iliketobeweird [2012-06-30 18:01:31 +0000 UTC]

featured here: [link]

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halcyonshores [2012-06-28 14:40:14 +0000 UTC]

Love it Peter...

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peterpateman In reply to halcyonshores [2012-06-28 21:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Dove.

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halcyonshores In reply to peterpateman [2012-06-29 22:00:54 +0000 UTC]

A pleasure!

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kmish213 [2012-06-26 03:52:20 +0000 UTC]

I know rust is a bad thing, but it sure is fun to paint.

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peterpateman In reply to kmish213 [2012-06-26 13:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Agreed, visually rust has much appeal.

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BabciaGandzia [2012-06-25 19:03:53 +0000 UTC]

love the colors! <3

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peterpateman In reply to BabciaGandzia [2012-06-25 21:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Appreciations for your comment Olga.

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BlurWing [2012-06-25 17:47:48 +0000 UTC]

How nice!
Reminds me of the Florida Keys... the coconut zone.
I can feel the breeze,
(and it ain't from zooming down the road on that one crank bike!!)

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peterpateman In reply to BlurWing [2012-06-25 21:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Kelcie.

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TheMightyQuinn [2012-06-25 12:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice shot!

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peterpateman In reply to TheMightyQuinn [2012-06-25 13:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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catch---22 [2012-06-25 11:46:37 +0000 UTC]

standing Peter... a superb composition.

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peterpateman In reply to catch---22 [2012-06-25 13:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Dennis!

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catch---22 In reply to peterpateman [2012-06-25 13:44:47 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

I would be curious to see this one in b&w too.

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peterpateman In reply to catch---22 [2012-06-25 16:16:17 +0000 UTC]

For you Dennis: [link]

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catch---22 In reply to peterpateman [2012-06-25 19:49:49 +0000 UTC]

you da man.

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a great conversion.

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peterpateman In reply to catch---22 [2012-06-25 20:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Dennis, but that black and white button in Photoshop did all the work.

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catch---22 In reply to peterpateman [2012-06-26 13:05:04 +0000 UTC]

shhhh don't give away your magician tricks!

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peterpateman In reply to catch---22 [2012-06-26 13:12:44 +0000 UTC]

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BrightStar2 [2012-06-25 06:03:34 +0000 UTC]

The only way to role in a place like this, you don't miss a thing...And a
Very good excercise I lost inches rding my bike...sadly it got stolen....

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peterpateman In reply to BrightStar2 [2012-06-25 13:28:04 +0000 UTC]

Lucky you weren't on the bike at the time!

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BrightStar2 In reply to peterpateman [2012-06-25 16:14:50 +0000 UTC]

I am sure they would run in the other direction
if thay saw me coming....lol

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