derdan [2006-10-03 23:17:56 +0000 UTC]
Well I guess a couple of things inside your roughs are pretty amazing, I really love the artwork you placed in there, that's pretty unique.
However I would recommend you to work on typography: the logo doesn't stand out and maybe you ought to change fonts. Watch out for the Adobe font collections, they feature great font families that match your designs.
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