Comments: 44
amourshipper9 [2015-07-31 14:32:32 +0000 UTC]
This is great! I'd like to know if the inscription in the pendant is an actual song, and if it is, what is the name of it,😁
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DonkataDeath [2013-01-20 19:35:13 +0000 UTC]
such a good pairing too bad they took dawn out of the anime :T
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sweeta770 [2012-12-25 00:41:46 +0000 UTC]
this was a really good story i loved the inscription so beautiful did you write it?
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auzurii [2010-06-25 05:32:22 +0000 UTC]
...WWAAAHHHHH!!!! SO SO!!! AWESOME!!! I'M CRYING!!! SO AWESOME!!!
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stargazer1214 [2010-02-21 05:11:29 +0000 UTC]
that's the greatest story eva
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Mewgirl223 [2010-02-03 23:30:10 +0000 UTC]
i love the quote omg everything pretty much
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Mew-Katie26 [2009-09-24 00:53:42 +0000 UTC]
so.... *tears* Beautiful.
truly beautiful.
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pokefan63 [2009-08-19 19:57:33 +0000 UTC]
best ive read i cried
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TyphoonExplosion [2009-05-30 06:23:21 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to be a complete and total buzzkill, but when you change who's talking, you're supposed to make a new paragraph. Makes it less confusing. Minor issues really, the story was good, although a little short. Felt like it could have been a little longer, but this is all constructive criticism. Use this advice wisely...
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sakarigirl [2009-05-27 02:01:59 +0000 UTC]
awww soooooooooooo cute
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lightshinobi [2009-05-01 18:32:05 +0000 UTC]
amazing just amazing.
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lightshinobi In reply to Phantasy-Star [2009-05-02 18:32:31 +0000 UTC]
I have a psp and I first read it on my psp i though it was a very good story and mabe you could look at my picture of vegeta so thanks.
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wes-san [2009-02-21 00:30:14 +0000 UTC]
this is really cute!!!!![link]
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LightOracion [2008-11-15 17:22:44 +0000 UTC]
The poem is a bit long, but it has a lot of heart and passion in it. Still that's a lot to put in a pendant. Don't you think?
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