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FreakyLaurent [2013-01-20 11:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Very nice !!

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thatnickid [2013-01-13 08:53:08 +0000 UTC]

hmm ok I'll do this one because it seem's to be your best (very well done BTW)
Ok sooooo
first thing is first your perspective is great, your colours are mad (except that bright white in the distance should never go to pure white unless is a primary light source)
but the only real thing that doesn't make this painting perfect is the composition.
this is like were to place things and were to draw the eye
so you've got this great perspective pushing every thing into the distance and the nothing there.
your focal matter is just pulled to the side and off the screen.
some bits are wasted like he left hand side of the image is a big vertical rectangle of just nothing for the viewer to see.
so for you next one maybe start with a sketch and thing were you want people to look, like which this is the 3 or 4 main points your are going to detail and want the person to look, and then draw the sketch so that there is a nice flow from end to end of middle the end or what ever.
Look up a thing called rule of thirds it will blow your mind if you haven't already read it, I know it blew mine .
and any other stuff I will crit with some of your other ones in a bit


(dont be discouraged its still a nice painting)

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hefeigal [2012-09-28 21:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done, especially with the colors!

The proportions are done very well, and the foreshortening is perfect! You have a nice technique for shading, and the clouds are done very well!
Though I think that a car or store in the distance would balance out the vibrant colors on the right, I really like this piece! The yellow painted on the road really stands out!

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DoodlesAndPictures [2012-09-27 02:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is really good! You definitely got down that 60's vibe! The clouds are just awesome and I love the sky gradient; it looks pretty realistic! Also the detail that you put into the road with the cracks is awesome too! However, (I'm not too sure what they're called) the rock structures you have going on seem to be pretty much duplicates, especially the one in the middle and the one off to the left. Since I haven't ever been to the desert I'm not 100% sure how these structures were carved by nature, but either way, I think it would be good to get some more variation in rock structure there. Also you duplicated your men in this picture; they're both muscular, both have black hair and hair style, both have the same shirt, pants. Also I feel like the farther away man either has too small of hips or his shirt just poofed out and made his waist seem bigger than his hips. Also, since it's bright out, maybe the car's windshields would have some shine to them? Talking about the cars, I love the attention to detail in the spokes and the hints of different engine parts. A small detail you could have included some tire track marks to further push the realism. But other wise good job! Hope you're enjoying design school!

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f1utterby3 [2012-09-25 00:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Your color palette for this piece is completely spot on. The dusty oranges and browns with the blue sky really add onto this picture. And I like the details in the road, particularly the cracks, it really gives texture. I think the only thing I would like to see more is highlights on the gas sign and structure. It's the only thing that doesn't pop as much as the rest of the piece. Great work!

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SBCheeseCake [2012-09-24 20:06:10 +0000 UTC]

omg awesome!i would never have the patience to do this -_-

good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Gobbistar [2012-09-23 02:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Life on the highway,wind in your hair, exploring the land...*sigh* truly it will be fun.

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