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Phantom-of-Music — Kelpie tale.
Published: 2009-03-31 06:55:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description A horse, with skin so smooth and shiny
Who lives in the lake in the wild
“The lake?” you think. “But isn’t it a horse”
That’s what you think, you’re just a child.

Something’s in life
Are not as beautiful as they seem
Like this horse who will take your life
If you get to close to him

He can take the form
Of the one you adore
And lead you to the water
Away from the shore

He will pull you under
Till you have no air
He’ll watch as you struggle
As you silently prayer

Your lungs will fill with water
And the last thing you’ll see
Is a kelpie dragging you
Away from me

So listen dear child
For this is a warning
Don’t trust the kelpies
Or there will be mourning
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Comments: 17

AgonyPie [2009-04-02 14:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Great one ^^

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Phantom-of-Music In reply to AgonyPie [2009-04-03 07:00:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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AgonyPie In reply to Phantom-of-Music [2009-04-03 22:36:32 +0000 UTC]

np ^^

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Phantom-of-Music In reply to AgonyPie [2009-04-04 03:00:24 +0000 UTC]

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luna-maiden [2009-04-02 08:34:52 +0000 UTC]

yea and i helped with the idea you captured it perfectly babe

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Phantom-of-Music In reply to luna-maiden [2009-04-03 07:01:50 +0000 UTC]

lol.thank you.

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dreamer45555 [2009-04-01 01:15:20 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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Phantom-of-Music In reply to dreamer45555 [2009-04-02 05:20:05 +0000 UTC]

thanx. i read this book called Tithe and i thought i would write about the kelpie in it.

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dreamer45555 In reply to Phantom-of-Music [2009-04-04 14:43:40 +0000 UTC]

thats so cool great job

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Phantom-of-Music In reply to dreamer45555 [2009-04-05 02:56:30 +0000 UTC]

thanx.

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dreamer45555 In reply to Phantom-of-Music [2009-04-09 05:59:28 +0000 UTC]

your wecome

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kelpiehunterkai [2009-03-31 16:29:43 +0000 UTC]

This is really good! I loved it!

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Phantom-of-Music In reply to kelpiehunterkai [2009-04-02 05:21:53 +0000 UTC]

lol.thanx.

so youre a kelpie hunter? ho's that goin??lol.

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kelpiehunterkai In reply to Phantom-of-Music [2009-04-02 05:27:57 +0000 UTC]

not good It seems that kelpies do not appreciate being hunted down and caught


welcome!!

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Phantom-of-Music In reply to kelpiehunterkai [2009-04-02 05:39:55 +0000 UTC]

lol.oh thats bad to hear.lol.

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kelpiehunterkai In reply to Phantom-of-Music [2009-04-03 16:24:39 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Phantom-of-Music In reply to kelpiehunterkai [2009-04-04 03:00:41 +0000 UTC]

XD

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