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Phoenix57flame — Night of the Fireflies
Published: 2008-06-30 11:33:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 429; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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This has turned into a bit of an unfinished scrap. However I'll hopefully get round to improving it.Related content
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Oh yeah... I'm still working on this piece... uni has kinda brought it to a standstill though!
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Lol thanks for your comments bro... and thanks for taking my picture and making it look "surreal"... after all you know what you're talking about lol.
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This is what I mean by surreal -.-
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I think its generally good, but the problem I find with it is that your eyes look so wide it makes you look like you wear ten pairs of contact lenses! ^^
But yeh, if you make it look a little more "realistic" or "surreal" it should work I guess... I mean, where's the dark tone... they aren't in spotlight you know, it makes the picture seem a little armature and I know you can do better than that! I could but probably I would screw up on designing it 
Oh and remember: BLACK IS A TONENE NOT A COLOURAA!... miss rigedierre always said that to me, I would always remember it because the way she said it was so funny ^^
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you have missed Dee's arm
other than that it looks really good
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Thanks for the comments guys, I've still got to correct the eyes, but I'll keep updating this until I finish, please criticise me as I go (-:
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oh wow they look awesome Dee's face probably looks the least "2D" theres a lot of shape to it. but yeah its great ^_^
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Hey! No course I dont mind it's a great help. I'll definately do everything you say. I can see what you mean about them not looking to look anywhere... well I actually thought the eyes were a bit off myself. Anyways thank you for the comments!
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thats coming along really well, i cant see any major problems with it other than a few anatomy mistakes and miscolouration.
Dee's skintone is amazing youve gotten that spot on, yours is coming along well but emma's skintone is making her face look a little flat, may i suggest a little deeper shading in the shadowed areas, and some high-lights on her cheeks and nose.
the shading itself is perfect on emma's face, so dont change that, just darken and lighten some areas.
your jawline is seeming a little flat too, some shade around where the hair covers the skin and just along the jawline would help that out.
dee's eyes are a little off, they dont seem to be "looking" at anything if you understand what i mean. the same with yours.
overall its a really really good picture, just some tiny nigly problems that when fixed, will make it perfect.
i hope you dont mind me picking up on these!
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