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Published: 2010-09-13 17:10:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 4
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Description So here I am
Walking down this hall
Echoing every single word
Bouncing off the walls
I can't believe it got ugly
It got so ugly
So out of hand
Written on the paper
Nowhere near as planned
I said it'll get ugly
Got so ugly

Started it all with
Hoping, Joking, Provoking
Until it only went so far
Coping, Poking, Choking
Until it went too far
Pull the sleeves up
Underneith are the scars
You should of listened
I said it would of only gone so far

So now whose the fool?
You hang off every word
Didn't see it getting ugly
It got so ugly
What will you do now they've ripped out your heart?
now they've torn it out and torn it apart?
You should of seen it getting ugly
When it got too ugly

Started it all with
Hoping, Joking, Provoking
Until it only went so far
Coping, Poking, Choking
Until it went too far
Pull the sleeves up
Underneith are the scars
You should of listened
I said it would of only gone so far
Hoping, Joking, Provoking
Now it's gone too far
Coping, Poking and Choking
Now that's what you are
You pulled your sleeves up
We saw your scars
Poking, Choking, Provoking
Now you know just what you are
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Comments: 15

TheDarkenedBride [2010-09-16 13:41:09 +0000 UTC]

this is what I also do... I try to capture the ideas those appear on my mind before I fall asleep, they usually are very interesting

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pholian2 In reply to TheDarkenedBride [2010-09-17 18:44:14 +0000 UTC]

yeah, night time ideas are usually better than day time one's. In the day, i could sit for hours wanting to write something and nothing happens The ideas i do get in the day i usually scrap because I don't think they are worthy enough to be uploaded.

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TheDarkenedBride In reply to pholian2 [2010-09-25 22:18:20 +0000 UTC]

happens... lately I either write outside on my walks or at night... then I'm underslept and slow and it sux but I just can't let those cool ideas go for I'm afraid they wouldn't come back the next day... I call it "a sacrifice to the art" hahaha

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pholian2 In reply to TheDarkenedBride [2010-09-27 15:12:05 +0000 UTC]

i'm an insomniac, so writing at night helps pass the time never thought of writing while on a walk. sometimes i'm terrible with ideas, i think sometimes 'i'll remember that' then the next day comes and i kick myself because i knew i should of written the idea down

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TheDarkenedBride In reply to pholian2 [2010-09-27 20:45:34 +0000 UTC]

that's why I usually have a small notebook with me or you can type it into your cell phone as a message concept
insomnia sux... it totally ruined my immunity now I try to get myself into a really tired state of mind, so that I fall asleep quickly...

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pholian2 In reply to TheDarkenedBride [2010-11-19 03:17:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm finding myself going to bed at 5 o'clockin the morning, but at leats I can write more

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TheDarkenedBride In reply to pholian2 [2010-11-19 20:58:05 +0000 UTC]

smart you - that's a way to outwit insomnia - take advantage of it

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pholian2 In reply to TheDarkenedBride [2010-12-02 18:06:31 +0000 UTC]

I can tell you, it's worked

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TheDarkenedBride In reply to pholian2 [2010-12-07 22:52:46 +0000 UTC]

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pholian2 In reply to TheDarkenedBride [2010-12-17 23:22:59 +0000 UTC]

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Aifos96 [2010-09-13 17:46:19 +0000 UTC]

real nice! I got this picture/video in my head, eeeh thats a good thing

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2010-09-13 17:48:34 +0000 UTC]

what's the picture or video in your head?

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2010-09-13 19:31:43 +0000 UTC]

well, I kinda see it through the person in the text's eyes. "I" walk through a corridor, the walls are of that ugly brick, wich is in my school, suddenly a picture / video replace me walking in the korridor. It's of a girl who is bullied, it has gone too far... her heart is torn out, and lies next to her on the floor all bloody, just like her arms. Crying she turns her face up and look at me (the person in the text), while some guys, laughing, walks away. They are scornfully, she may blame herself, she would've seen it comming...
yah, i'm kinda emo....

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2010-09-15 21:48:37 +0000 UTC]

I don't think you're emo. If you're emo, then I am as well for writing the things I write I think you've given the lyric a meaning, or prehaps another lyric or even a poem to be written

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2010-09-16 14:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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