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Published: 2010-12-24 17:49:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description It's really weird
I can't stop thinking
Can't stop loving you
Where ever you roam
What ever you do
I try my very best
I'll forever try to make you see
Try to make you look my way
Try to make you fall in love with me
Whatever I do
You don't even glance
I know we'd be good together
Just give me a chance

So Please,
My way will you glance
Trust me
Love me
Just give me a chance
It's gotten to the point I hate the crowds
Leaving me in the crowd that shoves
Tired of this Unrequited Love

I see you each day
The only way I can walk with you
Is by walking a couple feet away
I hear you ask a question
I help with an answer
You don't listen
I start feel frustration
Man, it sucks sometimes to be left behind
I have a feeling you're not this cold shouldered
I have a feeling you're deeply kind

So Please,
My way will you glance
Trust me
Love me
Just give me a chance
It's gotten to the point I hate the crowds
Leaving me in the crowd that shoves
Tired of this Unrequited Love

Oneday I heard a knock on my door
It was you
What are you here knocking for?
Turns out you want to give me the chance
You're looking me in the eye
I'm for once in your glance
Funny how I've grown up
You ask why I don't need your love now
I'm a little reluctant to answer
I'm being a little abrupt
I no longer seek you
I don't need your love
All you do is walk a couple feet away
Hoping I'll change my mind oneday
Wanting me to glance
Wanting me to give you a chance

Saying something along the lines of:
So Please,
My way will you glance
Trust me
Love me
Just give me a chance
It's gotten to the point I hate the crowds
Leaving me in the crowd that shoves
Tired of this Unrequited Love
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Comments: 21

Aifos96 [2010-12-27 13:15:10 +0000 UTC]

wow! you must lied when you said that you didn't understand what unrequited was! this is amzing! it touched me, I saw myself walking down the hallway trying to get his attention, and the last part, I saw that too! he pathetically standing there, asking if it's to late... then I've moved on...
ah, love it! thank you sooo much!!!
ps. in sweden we celebrate on Christmas Eve

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2010-12-28 23:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Yet another happy costomer It's true, I don't understand unrequited completely but just enough to write a lyric I like the way you read my lyrics and you see the events in your head You're completely welcome, it was a good thing I did upload the finished lyric on Christmas Eve If there's anything else you would like to be written into a lyric, I'd be more than happy

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2010-12-29 17:48:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah, and I'm sure there will be plenty more!
that just make it even more fantastic!
hahaha, every good text of any kind make me experience it, but it have to be real good! ;D
I'm sure that will be soon! I have plenty ideas wich I would love to hear in a song is there anything I can do for you, tell me! anything at all! unfortunately I don't have points or something like tha, but if you want me to do anything I would be more than happy to do it!

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2010-12-31 02:10:47 +0000 UTC]

well you better write all your ideas down, so you don't forget them because I'll write as many ideas as you can think off I really wish I could picture writing in my head like you can Don't worry about points or premium accounts, I don't need or even understand them. I'd probably give them to you if I had them I don't mind if it's a short story or a lyric or poem, you can choose the context, I'd really enjoy a writing of a friendship between a tiger and a black panther.

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2011-01-01 15:35:59 +0000 UTC]

yes, I think I will do that... but, one of my ideas is if you write about a girl, you write about how you see her walk down the street, how she feels (lonley) and how she allways have to show a happy face, like a mask, but with him, it's real... it would be great!
haha, well it can depend on that I read all the time, I guess that happens to your brain then...
haha, how kind of you!! but I'm afraid we're two about that, I doesn't see what you need em for ;D
oh, I get a lot of ideas, but is it a forbidden friendship or even love? should they be guys, girls or a guy and a girl? I want it to be as you want it!
and I must ask, why a black panther and a tiger?

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2011-01-02 23:20:02 +0000 UTC]

A lonely girl with a facade, yep i'll start writing straight away I love the ideas you come up with could you explain the girls and guys and forbidden friendship please? I'll tell you about the Black Panther and the Tiger, my favorite animals are cats especially the Tiger. The reason a Tiger and a Black Panther is because I see a Tiger that is loving and caring then the Tiger's friend, the Black Panther is The violent counterpart who will appear out of nowhere and easily eliminate it's enemies in the darkness of night. Kinda like the two sides of a person, light and darkness, heart and hate, good and evil.

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2011-01-03 00:11:16 +0000 UTC]

yay!
well I think about them living in a war. cause they are so different, the families hate each other, but they secretly meet each fullmoon night, they know that if someone saw them, they would be banished for life, or even killed... but now they wonder, is these options worse than not be able to be with each other hole the time..?
what do you think?
then I must ask, do you have a cat? ;D
oh, or I can write about how hard it is for the two parts to get along, but their friendship is stronger than anyones' else! but that I don't think I have that much ideas about....

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2011-01-06 07:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Strong ideas as always Forbidden Friendship won't be a problem to write I used to have a cat, but unfortunately nothing lives forever. You must be able to read my mind, the Tiger cares and the Black Panther is too violent but their friendship is stronger than anything and everything that can be thrown their way

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2011-01-06 09:44:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks...
oh, I'm sorry..
hahah, I've allways wanted to read minds! but which one do you think I should write about?

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2011-01-12 11:32:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm a little confused, could you rephrase your question?

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2011-01-12 13:41:28 +0000 UTC]

haha, I can understand that... I wonder wich one of my ideas you want me to write about? the one where they are living in a war and love each other or the one where they're just friends but really strong friends and no war, or maybe both?

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2011-01-12 22:45:08 +0000 UTC]

I'll say strong friends You could say they are two of the same, and you could put them in the middle of a war or some other kind of situation like it

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2011-01-14 17:55:23 +0000 UTC]

hm... I think I got one idea I hope you'll like

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2011-01-16 08:04:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure I will looking forward to it

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Aifos96 In reply to pholian2 [2011-01-16 10:25:18 +0000 UTC]

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pholian2 In reply to Aifos96 [2011-01-17 17:24:50 +0000 UTC]

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sarastallet99 [2010-12-25 12:18:23 +0000 UTC]

wow it's really like her!

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pholian2 In reply to sarastallet99 [2010-12-28 23:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya very much

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sarastallet99 In reply to pholian2 [2010-12-29 13:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Np

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smeardoes [2010-12-24 17:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, that's awesome. love the measures ^_^

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pholian2 In reply to smeardoes [2010-12-28 23:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanking ya kindly I'm glad you enjoy

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