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Published: 2017-03-05 09:44:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 268; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 1
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Description I KNOW, THAT IT ISN´T PERFECT, BUT I DON´T KNOW, WHAT I DID WRONG. PLEASE, WRITE ME, WHAT DO YOU THING I MUST DO BETTER NEXT TIME.
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Comments: 15

Ourshellves [2017-12-19 21:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Fešák.
Líbí se mi, že se nebojíš šrafury. Klidně bys ji mohla udělat i výraznější.
Co se anatomie týče, tady obrázek trochu ztrácí... ale to nevadí, to je součást procesu. A cizím se kecá líp, co si budeme povídat.
Doporučuju udělat nějaké studie lidské lebky, případně si ji aspoň pořádně prohlédnout na obrázku. Máš tady hodně asymetrickou čelist, na tmavé straně je větší než na levé. Líbí se mi, že jsi naznačila zdroj světla výrazným stínem, ale ten musí přecházet i do vlasů, jinak působí jaksi usekle...
To půjde časem.

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PhosphorosBrunda In reply to Ourshellves [2017-12-20 14:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Děkuji mockrát za velmi užitečný komentář.
Lebku a celkouvě obličej už jsem se pokoušela studovat mockrát, ale vždycky mi to někde ujede. Teď už to jasně vidím (ten stín ve vlasech... ach né... asi hned půjdu a předělám ho ) Děkuji.

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Ourshellves In reply to PhosphorosBrunda [2017-12-29 18:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Hodně štěstí a trpělivosti!

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Ben-Delamore [2017-03-07 14:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Looks great to me! Faces are very hard so I think you did a good job! 
Keep up the great work!

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PhosphorosBrunda In reply to Ben-Delamore [2017-03-07 14:27:40 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!

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mengenstrom [2017-03-05 17:12:27 +0000 UTC]

O yeah, looks good.

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PhosphorosBrunda In reply to mengenstrom [2017-03-05 17:14:08 +0000 UTC]

THANKIES

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Natterbatter [2017-03-05 15:48:40 +0000 UTC]

All I see is that you haven't finished the picture, his neck and coat don't have to be complicated. The shading and lines look great. Do you have plans for the background? Even a subtle ombré effect would pull it together.   

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PhosphorosBrunda In reply to Natterbatter [2017-03-05 16:59:32 +0000 UTC]

THE UNFINISHED BACKROUND IS AN INTENTION. I AM NOT GOING TO FINISH IT. MY INTENTION IS TO HIGHLIGHT ONLY HIS FACE. BUT THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT. YOU HAVE REALLY INTERESTING REMERKS. THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE COMMENT, I´LL USE YOUR RECOMMENDS NEXT TIME.
THANK YOU.

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mockingbirdontree [2017-03-05 12:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous drawing. The fine face expressions are super.  

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PhosphorosBrunda In reply to mockingbirdontree [2017-03-05 14:02:17 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH!!!

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mockingbirdontree In reply to PhosphorosBrunda [2017-03-06 01:47:53 +0000 UTC]

You are always welcome, dear friend.  

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PhosphorosBrunda In reply to mockingbirdontree [2017-03-06 16:24:33 +0000 UTC]

 

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model88 [2017-03-05 11:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I think the only thing you have wrong is you are self criticizing instead of self critiquing...

The lines and shading are great! You even pulled off using 'white' with this medium which is not an easy task... 

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PhosphorosBrunda In reply to model88 [2017-03-05 11:56:57 +0000 UTC]

OH, THANK YOU VERY MUCH. YOUR COMMENT MAKES ME HAPPY. BUT LOOK ON BELMONDO´S PHOTO. THIS IS NOT HIM.  

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