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Published: 2009-10-16 17:32:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 254; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description I want to hit you;
lick you;
beat you.
I want to touch you,
make you
scream...

I want to hurt you;
break you;
shake you.
I want to fuck you,
make you
mine...

Why won't you sacrifice your soul?
Why won't you bend for me anymore?
Why won't you give to me
everything I ask of you?

Why won't you look at me anymore?
Why won't you shut out that fucking cold?
Why won't you give to me
everything you took from me?!

I want to shake you,
make you
mine.
I want you break you,
take you
tonight.
I want to hit you,
submit you
to my will.

Why won't you give into my needs?
Why don't you return what you asked of me?
Why won't you simply do
the things I did for you?

Why won't you love me anymore?
Why won't you even up the score?
Why won't you turn your eyes
away from him and onto me?!

I want to touch you;
kiss you;
love you.
You want to hurt me;
break me;
shake me;

I want to touch you;
kiss you;
love you.
You want to...
You want to
KILL ME?!

Why won't you just... walk away?
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Comments: 17

tryfanmolee [2010-01-08 04:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I like this one a lot

These lines made me tingly:

'I want to hit you;
lick you;
beat you.
I want to touch you,
make you
scream...'

reminded me of the band Rammstein
and Nazis and Hitler for some strange reason...

not what you had in mind of course, but my mind tends to stray to the random at time.

very wonderful ending. Powerful

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Pi-rate In reply to tryfanmolee [2010-01-08 06:49:35 +0000 UTC]

It's certainly a powerful set of sounds and imagery, which is comparable to the sounds of Rammstein.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.

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tryfanmolee In reply to Pi-rate [2010-01-08 16:33:50 +0000 UTC]

Mmhm
I did enjoy it. XD
You have a knack for writing powerfully. I quite like it.

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Pixie-D [2009-11-14 01:16:01 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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Pi-rate In reply to Pixie-D [2009-11-14 08:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, dear.

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whisperingshadowz17 [2009-10-17 01:07:36 +0000 UTC]

very nice i love how it twists and turns. then drops to the dramatic end. good job.

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Pi-rate In reply to whisperingshadowz17 [2009-10-17 01:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.
Addressed to an angsty ex of mine.

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whisperingshadowz17 In reply to Pi-rate [2009-10-17 01:42:58 +0000 UTC]

its nice.

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SumthingIsOutThere [2009-10-17 00:09:19 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely am lovin' the flow of the 'chorus'.

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Pi-rate In reply to SumthingIsOutThere [2009-10-17 01:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
I had some fun with the ranting in there.
The "versus" kind of fit in a spitting-sort of pattern.

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RAINBOWnations [2009-10-16 23:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Katie again, huh?

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Pi-rate In reply to RAINBOWnations [2009-10-17 01:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much.

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kasaineko [2009-10-16 19:32:48 +0000 UTC]

awesome and dark ^^

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Pi-rate In reply to kasaineko [2009-10-16 20:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, dear.
Dealing with more bitter feelings about a bitter break-up. XD

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kasaineko In reply to Pi-rate [2009-10-16 21:51:17 +0000 UTC]

awes thats sucks *hugs* i hope you become happy again soon

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Pi-rate In reply to kasaineko [2009-10-17 01:13:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy, I just have my moody downswings.

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kasaineko In reply to Pi-rate [2009-10-17 02:23:01 +0000 UTC]

awes well thats good that your happy

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