Emlindes [2013-06-02 17:36:11 +0000 UTC]
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Well, this is pretty dam awesome!
First, I will comment on the body.
It's really well set out and you can at least tell it's a human male (which is better than what I can do e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/> . Everything is in proportion ect, the only thing I can think to criticize, his the hand of the girl in the bed. It just looks... a tad odd, and that can't be a comfortable position to have your hand in.
Next, I'll comment on the shading and such. I have to say that the shading in this is epic! Especially his hair. However, once again, I do have ONE little thing, As much as I like the colouring on his jacket, it doesn't really look like it's been blended in enough and the dark bit stick out more than look like the shadows of crease's.
All that said, this is a wonderful piece of artwork and you should be proud!
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Pianodream In reply to SillyFilly3748 [2013-06-09 11:37:21 +0000 UTC]
Hhhgggkkcck thank yooou!?
First time I ever do a full watercolor painting on SAI, I did watercolors in real life before but it's nothing like digital art... :'>
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rikka-yomi [2013-06-03 02:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Je t'ai déjà dit ce que j'en pense, j'adore le fond et les sentiments passent bien... o/
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