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lycanthropeful [2009-04-16 02:02:40 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Impact
Very, very impressive. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
Hmm. I'm in a critiquey mood today, considering my 100 self portraits project was due today and I was analytical out the wazoo.
But anyway. I appreciate the overall cohesion between each season on the shoes: the transitions, for the most part, are very appealing and well-planned, it seems. Also, I like how you've masterfully tied in the black and white color scheme that the show already has. You've made a simplistic object quite beautiful.
However, there are some decisions that I think you could easily make better with only a few things. Really, I think these are great the way they are, so the following are only suggestions.
Spring is the weakest of the four, I feel. The bunny seems so dark and ominous, not what I expect, even as it disperses into fluttering butterflies. Maybe some brighter, more cheerful colors could help out with the connotation of spring? I also wish there were more green colors on that part of the shoe. Having a black hibiscus makes it seem a bit dead, when in fact spring is about life and rebirth in nature.
Also, the squirrel with orange threw me off a bit for summer. I think autumn. Blues or aquas might even help out the feel, seeing as the sky is blue and the weather is warm, living things are green, etc. Though I don't know what animal "personifies" summer. Maybe... a duck? A glamorous bird? Who knows.
I love this project overall. How you've turned these ordinary shoes into tiny masterpieces is so neat! e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
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rinandharu [2009-05-16 02:44:32 +0000 UTC]
How can i critique this? All your artwork is amazing... waaaaaaaaay better than me
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dai-hima [2009-05-09 07:37:34 +0000 UTC]
The squirrel is gorgeous! ;3; orz, I'm just jealous of your painting skills.
...*slaps self for thinking about trying this on her tennis shoes*
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Eira-Nai [2009-04-20 20:42:57 +0000 UTC]
Woah, so... How about these are the coolest shoes ever. *A* Do want. I love the colors in the spring part the best. :3
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pichu4850 In reply to Kiwibabe45 [2009-04-20 02:30:45 +0000 UTC]
haha yeah xD it IS a very small spaze... thank you 8)
and uhhhh yes its the same type of paint I used, theyre acvrylic. They last pretty long (its like plastic when it dries) but of course with anything, itll wear/fade after a bit.
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Adrizzle [2009-04-18 03:52:29 +0000 UTC]
WANT THESE SHOES DDD:<
I like that leetle fox up there, with his leafy tail. :'3
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breathless-cessation [2009-04-18 00:46:26 +0000 UTC]
These are super chill.
And I don't call just anything super chill.
So this is a compliment!
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kassichu [2009-04-16 20:51:25 +0000 UTC]
these came out great.
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monochromez [2009-04-16 11:22:49 +0000 UTC]
I don't suppose you'd be willing to do a custom pair of shoes? i love these so much!
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Snowmobile [2009-04-16 11:10:41 +0000 UTC]
Bbbbb. I absolutely adore these. D: I think that if you did commissions, I'd mail you a pair of white shoes because I really can't paint for shit. xD
My favorite season is probably the winter season, and I love the way the fox seems to be jumping right out of the flames. o3o
Though I do agree with the critique in that the black rabbi and orange squirrel kinda threw me off. x);
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Snowmobile In reply to pichu4850 [2009-04-25 15:56:35 +0000 UTC]
Well. If ever I acquire some cold hard cash, how much you think you'd paint a pair for? o:
You're welcome. ♥
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pichu4850 In reply to Snowmobile [2009-04-25 17:26:08 +0000 UTC]
Hmm.. I'm not really sure, but I think that if I purchased the shoes, the cost would be that plus maybe like 10 bucks for the actual paint job. :U
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Snowmobile In reply to pichu4850 [2009-04-27 20:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Hm. o-o I'll definitely think about it once I get a job. :'D
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RogueforHire [2009-04-16 02:51:40 +0000 UTC]
not fair pichu, I want some D:
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DrewGreen [2009-04-16 02:41:19 +0000 UTC]
I think they're brilliant! I can see a lot of people wanting to wear these. Nice work!
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pichu4850 In reply to mercedesbird [2009-04-16 03:41:50 +0000 UTC]
lol xD My shoes were black to begin with, then I painted them twice and repainted it with black. I wouldn't think sharpie shows up very well on black canvas shoes, unless they were white.
thank you 8)
(and I've asked some people, I've had clear nail polish, glue, and fixative -like for regular drawings- but I think I will go with the clear nail polish.)
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pichu4850 In reply to mercedesbird [2009-04-20 19:45:36 +0000 UTC]
okay, news about the nail polish; I put some on the shoes and a day later they were cracking/peeling a lot more than it would have if I had left it without polish. I dont know if it's the kind I used... but I saved it with modge podge instead (I borrowed it from one of my bff art teachers. xD)
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mercedesbird In reply to pichu4850 [2009-04-20 19:52:04 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh! That's scary!
Goodness, Modge Podge is the best XD
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haneMIsaki [2009-04-16 01:44:44 +0000 UTC]
That is sooo cool *__* What if you wash it? Would the colors fade usually even if it's acrylic? P:
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pichu4850 In reply to haneMIsaki [2009-04-16 03:43:35 +0000 UTC]
Acrylic dries into a plastic-like substance, so I highly doubt it will wash off a shoe if it doesn't wash off clothing (and I have tons of clothes with acrlyic paint smears on them lol) And they won't fade with a washing either. It will, however, fade and wear off easily if I don't use something to seal it with.
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desude [2009-04-16 01:12:35 +0000 UTC]
I've always wanted to paint shoes DX these are awesome!
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myGRUDGE [2009-04-16 01:09:04 +0000 UTC]
those are the most awesome shoes EVAR
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MonotonePanda [2009-04-16 01:07:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm in love with the winter/autumn shoe. Great colors and designs!! Good job! Now I'm inspired to spruce up my boring white sneaks.
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Ruby-of-Fire-II [2009-04-16 01:07:01 +0000 UTC]
I think I love you so hard right now and if I see you here in NY, I will jump you for these shoes like any other ghetto bum on crack. D8
I really like the spring to summer on the most than the autumn to winter, and I'm autumn/winter person XD I just really like the rabbit to butterflies thing... (I'm reminded of TBM for stupid reason ahurrhurrr) and the dandelionssss. Idk why, but whenever I see dandelions they bring me joy ;u;
But I also love the fox to leaves a lot too. (lolFireFox-shot-) Dammit, I need to paint me some shoes now
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pichu4850 In reply to Ruby-of-Fire-II [2009-04-16 03:44:44 +0000 UTC]
LOL Amazing.
and oh, really? XD I thought the spring/summer side was just atrocious compared to the autumn/winter one but I supose it's not -that- bad. and LOL yay tbm. C:
Dandelions are sooo fun 8) (but so annoying x.x)
do it!
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