Comments: 34
GazTV-inc [2013-11-07 03:38:11 +0000 UTC]
There's some attitude here, it's a lot flatter than the other one but this is a standard pose. put some gesture in and show some sass! Yeeeeaaaah
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-11-07 06:24:45 +0000 UTC]
did i
just
get a qritique
oh well
thanks u.u
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-11-07 09:31:56 +0000 UTC]
It's not so much a critique as a point of what I liked about the other one, what I liked about this one and maybe my reaction if the best elements of the two were combined.
When I said flat pose, or whatever I said, I meant like she's facing the camera head on, just a little twist here and a shake there... this could have all the movement and gesture the other pic wowed me with. PLUS all the control and form of your current style.
Let's call this an unofficial critique.
I don't wanna tell you what to do, but it's what I'd like to see.
Does that make sense?
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-11-07 20:39:36 +0000 UTC]
other one, do you mean this one? -->Β muppidupp.deviantart.com/art/Jβ¦
And I really like the critique you wrote. It was well written and you gave me some very good tipsΒ
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-11-10 01:17:57 +0000 UTC]
Heh thanks, I don't usually get feedback on my feedback... /feedback-ception.
DUHHHHHNNNNNNNN!
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-11-10 23:39:42 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD we broke the system
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-11-11 09:45:32 +0000 UTC]
RUN FOR YOUR LIFE MUPP!!
Don't take the blue pill or the red pill, push Morpheus off the Titatnic! And don't talk about Fight Club!! NYAAAAAGHH!
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-11-11 19:05:50 +0000 UTC]
PENGUINS??? PENGUINS!Β
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-11-11 20:11:40 +0000 UTC]
Don't look them in the eye!
Just keep swimming! JUST KEEP SWIMMING!!!
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-11-12 21:11:54 +0000 UTC]
BUT I LOVE THEM
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-11-20 03:13:59 +0000 UTC]
NOOOOO! STAY OUT OF THE LIGHT! THAATS WHEN THEY SCAN YOUR BRAINS FOR TAPEWORMS!
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-11-20 19:45:08 +0000 UTC]
u cant stop me with your words
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-12-05 22:55:57 +0000 UTC]
SHE'S DOOOOMED! DOOOOOOOOOMED!!!!
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-12-07 22:44:33 +0000 UTC]
U CATNSTOPME
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-12-09 09:05:06 +0000 UTC]
But can I save u from da doom!?
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-12-13 01:24:05 +0000 UTC]
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! TT______________TT
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-12-17 08:28:17 +0000 UTC]
i ded
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-12-23 06:03:56 +0000 UTC]
*REVIVES*
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-12-26 22:41:15 +0000 UTC]
*I THROW MY HANDS UP IN THE AIR*
WHA-YO
I WANTED MAYO!
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-12-28 14:16:35 +0000 UTC]
you did
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-12-30 00:51:32 +0000 UTC]
But what happened to the ham?
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pidopay In reply to GazTV-inc [2013-12-30 22:14:12 +0000 UTC]
its gone
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2013-12-30 22:40:33 +0000 UTC]
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2014-01-04 11:37:45 +0000 UTC]
AUUUGH! Make sum cooookieeeees!
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GazTV-inc In reply to pidopay [2014-01-04 23:07:58 +0000 UTC]
BUT... BUT... BUTBUTBUTBUTBUT COOKIES!
TT__________TT
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Mesap [2013-11-03 17:08:49 +0000 UTC]
Two words, Bad! Ass!
Or should I say one of the most Awesome OC Ever X33
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pidopay In reply to Mesap [2013-11-04 21:39:44 +0000 UTC]
whaaoa ok
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SHADOWDMAC [2013-11-03 00:43:59 +0000 UTC]
damn she looks sassy
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pidopay In reply to SHADOWDMAC [2013-11-03 00:50:19 +0000 UTC]
ye she mad
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