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Piikosama143 — Darkness in heart

Published: 2012-02-21 22:34:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 484; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 3
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yea,that's it.
EPIC FAIL

I tried to do some cool effects,but in my draw they're completely crappy.
I never did a draw like this,so...
The colours are terrible.
I shouldn't colour things with crazy techniques...

EPIC FAIL


The worst part,this is my part in an art trade with
And I'm really sorry for the low quality of this draw,and if you want,I'll re-do it.
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Comments: 43

ChelAnimation [2012-03-06 05:36:14 +0000 UTC]

Não pode ter muitos efeitos legais mas, o desenho em si esta muito show parabéns ^^

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Piikosama143 In reply to ChelAnimation [2012-03-07 21:36:19 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha,obrigada >w<
Eu vou refazer esse desenho,não gostei muito de como ficou >w<

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ChelAnimation In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-03-08 05:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Disponha ^^
Com certeza vai ficar ainda melhor ^^
Boa sorte pra ti ai nos desenhos ^-^

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Piikosama143 In reply to ChelAnimation [2012-03-09 00:50:16 +0000 UTC]

awwwn,obrigada,Chel!

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ChelAnimation In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-03-09 02:26:28 +0000 UTC]

De nada Hikaru-chan ^^

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Raven-Changling94 [2012-03-02 03:24:15 +0000 UTC]

okay it is not an epic fail. its actually really good. i can see that you have really improved. the girls torso is turned a little awkwardly toward the audience and it isn't exactly natural...the guys hand that is wrapped around the girl is a bit thwarted and flat, small actually, compared to his other hand which is very good. other than these two things it is really really good.

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Piikosama143 In reply to Raven-Changling94 [2012-03-03 22:55:27 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha,thank you so much!
Yea,this draw maybe isn't an epic fail,just a normal fail. >w<
Thanks for the advices!
Oh,I will re-do this draw....

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Raven-Changling94 In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-03-03 23:43:31 +0000 UTC]

its not a fail at all. its really good! your really improving

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Piikosama143 In reply to Raven-Changling94 [2012-03-03 23:49:54 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha,thank you so much!

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Raven-Changling94 In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-03-04 23:01:23 +0000 UTC]

you need to quit thinking the worst about your art. dont get cocky but take pride in your work and accept criticism and praise with the same respect. if you say stuff like that about your art some people are more likely to just think you are trying to get praise merely to boost your self confidence. thats not really a good thing. this is friend to friend advice so take it seriously. im not trying to be harsh but i must tell you the truth so you dont get hurt in the future. do you understand? you are a good artist and you are greatly improving.

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Piikosama143 In reply to Raven-Changling94 [2012-03-05 18:35:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh...
thank you so much!
Really,thank you!

Your words are really inspirating...thank you so so so so much!
Ok,Understood...

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Raven-Changling94 In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-03-05 23:08:40 +0000 UTC]

lol ok that's good. you are really a good listener.

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Piikosama143 In reply to Raven-Changling94 [2012-03-07 21:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaha,thank you so much >w<

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Raven-Changling94 In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-03-08 21:44:39 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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brysoba [2012-02-26 06:17:14 +0000 UTC]

I don't think its a total fail! All i think it needs is more lines (rain) and going all in the exact same direction (not that your lines aren't straight or anything) but leave a space around the characters like you have already done! All in all great job!

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Piikosama143 In reply to brysoba [2012-03-03 22:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha,thank you so much!
Yea...
It's just a fail >w<

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lovemekarsen [2012-02-22 23:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Epic!!

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Piikosama143 In reply to lovemekarsen [2012-02-23 14:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuuu!

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lovemekarsen In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-02-24 01:25:21 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Squirrelfang2 [2012-02-22 20:47:12 +0000 UTC]

That's really awesome Hikaru! I don't think it's a fail.

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Piikosama143 In reply to Squirrelfang2 [2012-02-22 21:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaa,thank you so much!

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XxLuulagoocallagasxX [2012-02-22 12:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I don't think it's a fail at all!
It's hard to draw the effect of rain with pencil.
You can see the emotion in their faces, it looks fantastic! <33

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Piikosama143 In reply to XxLuulagoocallagasxX [2012-02-22 21:31:41 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha,thank you so much,Luula-chan!
I'm doing sketches of Eddie right now,OK?
So,don't worry,I'm working hard in all my art trades >w<

And thank you again!

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XxLuulagoocallagasxX In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-02-22 21:34:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome Piiko-chan!!
Yay! I'm working on yours as well ^^
That's good to know! Do your best, I'm sure they'll turn out great as always! >3<

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Piikosama143 In reply to XxLuulagoocallagasxX [2012-02-22 22:17:19 +0000 UTC]

YAYIIII!
hahahahahahaa,thank you ^^

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xXLee-kunXx [2012-02-22 06:43:01 +0000 UTC]

It's sad to see lenalee hurt like that and seeing lee cry
Oh man i think it's great ^_^
am almost done with your pic

Well if you want to remake it it's fine with me ^_^
but for now i love it ^^

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Piikosama143 In reply to xXLee-kunXx [2012-02-22 21:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Yea....
But,thank you ^^
*O*
YAYIII!

yea,I'll do it again,I'm not happy with this version....

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Melody-Ike [2012-02-22 03:00:12 +0000 UTC]

whoa! if u say this is an epic fail, i wanna see an awesome artwork! this is amazing!
the tones make the red stand out more, so it's wonderful!

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Piikosama143 In reply to Melody-Ike [2012-02-22 21:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahahaha,OK!
Thank you so much ^^

(you're so cute!)

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Melody-Ike In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-02-23 18:05:14 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you ^^

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Piikosama143 In reply to Melody-Ike [2012-02-23 19:51:27 +0000 UTC]

Ya welcooome ^^

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anikasgubim [2012-02-22 01:44:02 +0000 UTC]

Na dúvida de errar na hora de desenhar anatomia, use uma referência pois ajuda bastante.
Usar um manequim de madeira é uma ótima pedida, porém é aconselhável ter prática na hora de desenhar roupas.

Não acho que ficou um epic fail, mas também não vou ser hipocrita em dizer que está muito bom.
Tem impacto, isso é importante. Teria bem mais se tivesse um background e cores/sombras mais bem trabalhadas.

Outra boa dica é sempre esboçar num papel a parte a sua idéia. Dessa maneira você vê aonde terá mais dificuldade, então pode proucurar por referências para praticar essa ''falha''.

Não desanima, tá no caminho certo!

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Piikosama143 In reply to anikasgubim [2012-02-22 21:29:58 +0000 UTC]

Aaah...
entendi...
Muito obrigada pelas dicas,muito obrigada mesmo!

É...
Pra mim esse desenho realmente parece um epic fail por causa das cores e do braço do cara,mas....sei lá,as expressões,que foram o mais difícil,até que consegui captar razoavelmente bem...

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anikasgubim In reply to anikasgubim [2012-02-22 01:45:00 +0000 UTC]

(corrigindo a palavra: procurar)

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Augustusalex [2012-02-21 22:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Epic Fail o caraio, vc desenha melhor com dois dedos do q eu com oito bracos....

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Piikosama143 In reply to Augustusalex [2012-02-21 23:25:00 +0000 UTC]


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apocalyptico100 [2012-02-21 22:40:36 +0000 UTC]

Olha...
Voce tem que aprende a mexer em algum programa de pintura...
Voce desenha bem, talvez só precisa tentar outras tecnicas.

A cena ta linda... os personagens estão bem desenhados, mas vejo que precisa corrigir algumas coisinhas .

Essa é minha humilde opinião.

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Piikosama143 In reply to apocalyptico100 [2012-02-21 23:24:36 +0000 UTC]

hahaha...
é...
Tudo bem,eu concordo com você ^^

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apocalyptico100 In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-02-21 23:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Sem problema,
Voce pode criticar nos meus desenhos quando quizer.

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Piikosama143 In reply to apocalyptico100 [2012-02-22 00:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahahaha,o que uma coisa tem a ver com a outr?
>w<
Anyway,obrigada ^^

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somerandomyurifan [2012-02-21 22:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Still looks fine to me OwO

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Piikosama143 In reply to somerandomyurifan [2012-02-21 23:25:38 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha,thank you so much,sweetie

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somerandomyurifan In reply to Piikosama143 [2012-02-21 23:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Yw OwO

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