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Published: 2015-12-17 08:25:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 361; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 1
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Starry mane is difficult.So sorry that it looks bad.
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und die Nacht hat untergehen
at least, i don't think i've made mistakes.
it means "and the night has to perish"
Look at those eyes, poor Luna
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That quote suits her hopeless expression as she is the bringer of the night. Really fitting.
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This looks pretty good. It isn't as bad as you think it is, but something does look slightly off. I think it's because there is no reflection light shine in the eye, unless that's a design choice then that's completely fine. The hair is beautifully done but I believe it would have looked more elegant if it were longer, it just seems a little short in my opinion. Everything else is really well done though, I do like the white pen in the hair for stars, that a nice touch.
(I hope you don't mind me critiquing your work. I'm just used to doing it for other friends but if you don't want me to do it then just let me know and I won't, okay? :3)
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Thank you! The eyes were ment too look like that to add in a sort of hopeless feeling i suppose. The hair should be longer but I did this late at night so my mind wasn't thinking straight. The stars are actually acrylic paint that I hastily added when other mediums would've been better.
(I don't mind you critiquing at all.)
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Yes, I did think it were more an artistical choice rather than just simply forgetting. It does somewhat work though but I think its still slightly missing something to really put emphasis on it. What it is, I'm not sure of though.
It's understandable, I know late night drawing can cause derpy moments, I've done it enough times to know x3.
Ah well, nothing wrong with using what you can grab at the time, it worked pretty well with this to be honest.
(Oh that's good. I've had my head bitten off before for making a critique so I'm always wary now of making one to someone new x3)
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"Derpy moments" I see what you did there. ( ^-*)
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Hehe, that was an unintentional pun right there but I'll take it seeing as it's in my name x3
Also I saw the face you made before you edited the comment. You're a sly one aren't you xD
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DA messed it up! XD
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Haha, fair enough then. It were a pretty funny face
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Such a cutie! Loving the curls at the end of the mane
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Thank you so much! I did those absent mindedly.
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I adore how CUTE SHE LOOKS!!
Luna in your style is just so freakin' kawaii and amazingly unique QuQ
I LOVE HOW YOU MAKE HERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR <333 ;u; Thank you <3
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Yay! I'm so glad you like it! I didn't think her hair had any shading because it's magic or something of that sort. So I kind of left it.
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I love the way you draw Luna ;u;
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Thank you. I may draw her in the near future.
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