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Published: 2009-12-03 05:11:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 7554; Favourites: 268; Downloads: 207
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EDIT: Thank You very much for the great and very, very helpful critique and the red-line on my artwork to show me the flaws. I took your advice and fixed the arm and stuff. I really knew something was off from there but I needed help on correcting that lol. Thank you again I hope this looks A LOT better now. =tanathe I hope to get more great critiques from you since your art is amazing as well. Plus you know more about anatomy XDAmberlina: Anyone want a kiss?
J/k lol XD
This is just something I did for the holidays. I adore winter it is my my most favorite season. I love snow, Christmas, and well the cold lol. Anyways, this is a little gift for Barbaro XD. He really liked it and I love how Amberlina looks cute. That night gown I actually have in RL. I recently bought it at Victoria Secret, I love the clothing there. OHHHH yes I forgot, those aren’t actual antlers or ears they are those fake head wear antlers. I am making myself ones right now, I made the ears as well just need to finish painting and making the other antler I have one finished and the ears. I will take pics and load them to show you all once I finish them. So yes VERY PINK!! Lol I will be making another one but of Barbaro. Then I will have to work on my Christmas Giant gift for my friends on DA and a special gift for my pack. So yeah enjoy the image. I would love critics on anatomy please I need help and I want to improve. SO critiques are welcome they are never discouraged here on my page. (unless I don’t want any lol)
Enjoy
Artwork and Amberlina © Amber Aguayo =PinkScooby54
BTW yes Amberlina eyes are now brown, not pink. So I will change them on her ref sheets. Her more accurate ref is the newest one I loaded.
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Comments: 64
An amazing piece it is. I really like this one! Lovely work!
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wow!great work!your effort really shines through on this wonderfull piece!great stuff!
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Got me in the Christmas mood... remind me when it's December.
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I adore this picture, very beautiful, awesome job...
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mas que asombroso, esta mas que maravilloso, la pose, la expresion, la anatomia, los colores y el fondo te han quedado de lo mas genial, excelente y precioso dibujo amiga
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gracias XD me encanta este dibujo porque amber se ve bonita jajaja.
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haha no yewww!
hey do you do trades?
ive been lookin for someone cool to trade with B3
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I am sorry but I am not open for trades right now.
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DEFINITELY one of your best pieces >w<
She looks absolutely gorgeous :'3
And her HAIR! So smoooooth! <3
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Looking damn sexy there, hon. Love the pose and the colouring is to envy! xx
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Esta genial amberlina se ve muy linda(como siempre)en esta imagen
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waw amiga me encanta como te quedó >w< Ese traje lo necesito yo para un videoclip que nos mandaron hacer en el colegio xDD
Gran trabajo amiga
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HER HAIR IS AMAZING!!
But my favourite is her tail. <3 Its SOO cute!! :3
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*////////* thats so hot! she is soooo cute! the pink and snowy background is cool !
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aww amber i loove it! >w< the design and colors are excellent 
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Oh lala <3
That's so gorgeous <3
I might be biast because pink is my favourite colour, but I love the colouring of this picture xD
I think the soft shading really adds to the feeling of fluffy soft snow ^__^
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I really love this. The only critic I have is that I think her shoulder and arm that is holding the candycane seems a bit off, but I'm not very good with anatomy myself, so I don't really have any advice on how to fix it (maybe bending your arm like that and looking in the mirror to kind of get an idea how it looks might help or using a photo). Anyways, really nice picture, Amberlina is an adorable character.
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Muy bueno!
[I'm taking spanish in school so I'm trying to use it a lot more.]
Anywayysss....
xD
Very creative idea with the antlers. It fit soo perfectly with the holiday and Barbaro. I agree with one of the other comments though. The right arm is a little too thick and short [if you look at the elbow and how far away the fingers are.] But you don't really need to fix it. I only noticed it from looking really closely.
:3 I bet Barbaro loved it a lot.
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Because I suck at explaining things without directly showing them, I dared to make you a redline [link]
Don't hesitate to use it in any way you like if you think its helpful.
And you'll get a comment critique because anthro sexy x-mass girls are just not my cup of tea
You did quite well with the body and legs. Good job on spotting the connection between breasts and armpits. Unfortunately the higher the more shaky the anatomy
Always remember what's your base creature. Here it is a human, so all the proportions, even the head, should stick to it.
The biggest problem is around the shoulders and arms. The width of the shoulders is 3x the width of the head. When rising arm straight up, the elbow is on the same height as the head's top.
The cane holding arm is way too broad. It almost has proportions of a leg. It might be caused by the size of the head next to it (all in all it divided the character making the top not fit the bottom part).
The other arm is completely detached from the body. When planing a pose remember to draw also the hidden things. If the result is not legible enough just slightly change the pose, so the viewer knows exactly what's happening - visual art bases on the first impression and the viewers should not waste their time making out where some body parts disappeared
Not that bad, but not good either when it comes to the anatomy. But I like the colour scheme - changing the traditional red to pink and matching it with the character was a good choice. Maybe you should make the ears a bit more pink? I know those are the colours of Barbaro, but keeping the image black-white-pink-yellow with the slight zing of red-green-taupe in the upper part would work out great! The two additional browns just draw too much attention.
Honestly? If you found some time to edit the image, fix a few things and maybe work a bit more on the details (like adding some ass-kicking reflections on the fur around the ankles and wrists as you did on the hair), it'd be a really great-great picture.
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I meant "more great critiques" not "more great and more great critiques" LMAO
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HOLY CRAP thank you so much for the critique you don’t know how helpful this si to me. Thank you so much for the red line to show me my mistakes, and I have corrected them now. Your red line was very helpful and I hope to get more great and more great critiques from you. Since you know a lot about anatomy and stuff and I need people that will give me intelligent critiques lol. Thank you again.
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Giant...candycane...! vO.Ov Oh...and Amberlina looks good too 
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bellissima!!!!!!! Tu sei troppo brava e questo è troppo bello!
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That is definitely sexy XD the BG and all the colors are wonderful <3 though the deer ears to me look a little odd to me
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*u* mira que bonita elllaaaa <33
mi unica critica es que el brazo que coje el candycane deberia ser un poco mas largo, aparte de eso esta genial *u*
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I love it.
She looks so sexy, the facial expression is awesome! and I love her hair
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Hmmm, I'm not too experienced concerning human anatomy, so i'll just stick with minor things i guess. XD Amber's armpit(for lack or a better word) seems a little too...bulgy. Try smoothing it out more if you do another pose similar to this? 
I wish I had a candy cane as big as that. 8D omg
(love the hair btw!)
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very well done
nice anatomy/hair and colors..<3
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Amberlina as a deer now this I like very much,that pink candy cane looks absolutely yummy especially with the mistletoe on it...and the cute doe under it *sneaks a kiss* xD
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wow... its so great :3
i cant keep my eyes off of it XD
haha!!!
good work as always!
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This is really beautiful Amber
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First off: SMEXY!!!!! OW OW!!!!
Now to tell you what I think. I would make her arm, the one around the candy cane, not so thick. She may not have to be super skinny, but part of that arm is going behind the candy cane. Other than that, I think it looks awesome!
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I think the title should be :Sexy pink deer XD
it's more apropiate
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