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Love58767 [2015-04-13 18:32:30 +0000 UTC]
Cool
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Rennder [2012-08-18 02:47:51 +0000 UTC]
this is cute, but the anatomy looks a little off on it
i don't want to go critiquing it if you don't want, but it may help c:
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pinkykyra In reply to Rennder [2012-08-18 08:51:50 +0000 UTC]
I understand. I noticed that too the whole time I was making it. I dont mind critique.
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Rennder In reply to pinkykyra [2012-08-20 02:35:43 +0000 UTC]
all there really is to do though is use a lot of references and practice a lot
just keep working to improve c:
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pinkykyra In reply to Rennder [2012-08-20 03:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Ok c: there were few references for this pose as this I just made up. It was hard.
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Rennder In reply to pinkykyra [2012-08-20 02:35:13 +0000 UTC]
It's great finding someone willing to accept critique on here c;
Really, it's not bad at all.
the shading and feel of it is really nice
it feels royal, hah
the only things that really stand out are the post (which is a cool concept, but a little too much) and the legs and paws
wolves don't really bend that way, unless he's part snake. i'm sure his back would break. they are pretty flat in general, and don't usually curve. of course the pose can be used, but the back looks a little too arched down. also, it may be me, but the way the angle is is confusing. his chest doesnt seem to fit with his body at all :c
the legs apart from the hind one closest to the screen (lets just say that one from the angle is the right one) are pretty skinny and small, if he stood on them they'd likely snap under the weight of his body!
they should be a little fatter, there's a lot of muscle and bone and stuff in them, you know? same with the paws, but looking at them compared to the legs they're in proportion (so if you made the legs bigger, the paws would have to grow too, basically.)
the front right paw looks a bit awkward too, but i can't say much on that other than use references (i'm really bad with that angle too, it's difficult to nail)
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pinkykyra In reply to Rennder [2012-08-20 03:55:25 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, thats interesting. Especially the part about legs. I cringed a bit whenever you had said he could possibly break something in him. :s With the pose, I wanted to do something different. Something that looked dynamic and unbalance but I guess I achieved that part but in a bad way xD lol I'll keep practicing though (:
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Rennder In reply to pinkykyra [2012-08-20 03:56:21 +0000 UTC]
the pose is a nice one!! it just needs to not be so archy c:
and thats good!! practicing is great for every artist, and you're only going to get better c:
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pinkykyra In reply to Rennder [2012-08-20 03:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks C: Hopefully, I will get better.
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Myke-Hunter [2012-08-17 21:32:52 +0000 UTC]
beautiful, love the pose and color! :3
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JustCallMeBlazie [2012-08-17 16:06:36 +0000 UTC]
I love opening my computer and seeing this! Thanks again!
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pinkykyra In reply to Jadenthorns [2012-08-17 18:15:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Even though I feel its so simple xD
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JustCallMeBlazie In reply to pinkykyra [2012-08-17 05:16:37 +0000 UTC]
I love it! How could I not? In fact! It will make a lovely new background for my computer! And thank you! I'm glad you like my OCs. :3
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