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Published: 2011-01-15 06:47:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 322; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description "This Sickness" (ch. 26)

--"Your faith was strong, but you needed proof..."--


        He had been telling everyone they were from a bad wrestling match with a bit of leather and string. That he had been working on a new tail fin for Toothless and had gotten tangled in it when he was trying to put it on the restless dragon. Of course, even he knew the excuse was weak and strange. How did it really make sense that he had gotten rope and leather wrapped around his throat so tight? When he was supposedly just trying to put a tail fin on...

        He smiled as he glanced over it in the mirror again. They were purple today...a darker shade than yesterday...some of the red in their centers fading...The markings roped around his throat in odd sets of three and four. On the right side he had four, basically one atop the other, the three from the left threading together with them. His Adam's apple was just basically a solid block of purple and red with black trimmings, the bruises spidering as they reached farther around either side of his neck.

They were beautiful.

        Like some sort of strange choker or collar...something letting everyone secretly know who put them there. Everyone knew something had happened, just one look at them and you could tell they were from hands wrapping around his throat and squeezing...no one knew EXACTLY what had happened to put them there...But, if he watched their eyes, he could almost imagine they did. Almost imagine they could see the blonde throttling him until they both screamed in climax.

        He had been marked. And, strangely, he was loving every minuet of it. The biggest part of him was dreading the day the bruises finally faded way, was trying to think of a way to get the viking to make them again before it happened; to make new ones, to make BETTER ones.

        "Hiccup!" He jolted, spinning on his heel to face the bathroom door with wide eyes, fingers tightening over the marks instinctively. He closed his eyes, taking a breath as his mind registered the voice and the tone of the voice, understood what it wanted.

        "Don't worry, Dad, I'm still here." He didn't bother to open the door, rather called through it. Didn't matter, when he wanted to, the Chief of Berk could hear a rat scurrying ten miles away.

        "Alright...what're yah doin' up there that's takin' so damned long? Yah drownin'?" Gobber's laugh accompanied the comment, Hiccup rolling his eyes before turning to face the mirror again.

         "Yeah, Dad, that's EXACTLY what I'm up to." He grumbled, knowing his father didn't really expect an answer this time anyways. Just as long as he knew Hiccup hadn't left the house again, he was fine. It was one of the reasons Gobber was over for dinner, well, over for however long this took. He and Stoic were taking turns keeping HICCUP under house arrest as well.

He had gotten caught sneaking off to see Tuffnut.

          And, low and behold, it was Astrid who had caught him and ratted him out too. Not that he was surprised, he knew her well enough to know she would eventually get her revenge, he just hadn't been expecting it to bite him in the ass as hard as it did. He didn't think she knew anything other than he was going to visit Tuffnut, most likely-in her mind-out of guilt for getting him in trouble; but, part of him hoped and prayed she knew something. That she had SEEN something or HEARD something...Anything for her to know what he was doing now and WHO he was doing it with...and THOROUGHLY enjoying himself as well.

        Actually, he just wanted SOMEONE to know. He didn't care who, he just really wanted someone to know. He bent farther over the wash basin, tilting his head back a little more to examine the marks closer, his fingers rubbing over them smoothly. He couldn't help it, he just liked to look at them...He was loved. So much so that the person who loved him, wanted to MARK him. Wanted to make SURE no one would confuse him for being single or up for grabs, wanted to make SURE everyone knew he was loved; if they didn't know WHO he was loved by, they would at least know he was LOVED.

        Hiccup just wanted to reveal in it for the rest of his life. Hence why the mirror had become his best friend during the day. He only looked at them during the day because at night...he had another best friend. One that knew how to steal across the village without being seen, how to slip in through the window without being detected...Someone tall, blonde, and dominating...Someone who knew how to leave the perfect marks and make him scream for joy while doing it. Someone he loved JUST as much as they loved him.

Someone who made him happy.
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Comments: 4

BelleLorage [2011-01-15 23:14:32 +0000 UTC]

OMG!! Such a beautifull ending!! I'm actually kind of sad it's over know i_i
I'm so happy they got everything out of the way to be together. <3
(BTW,i totally get Hiccupand the bruises. It'ssowonderful when the person you love makes a mark on you. It's like...Their flag on your moutain. For everbody to see that you are theirs. Lovely <33)

How could you think it would let anybody down?

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PirateNinjaStar In reply to BelleLorage [2011-01-16 03:27:16 +0000 UTC]

I don't know...I just felt like it was a sad little excuse for an ending...but, I'm serious, I went back and reread it to start on Tuff's POV and was like, "Mmmm...I'm not feelin' it...I think this is just right..." and Tuff and Hiccup were like "*nods heads in unison* We agree." lol

But, I'm happy you enjoyed it so much! Thankyou for holding out and reading all the way to the end and being such a great supporter! I really hope you're just as thrilled with my new one^^


((and I know what you mean with the bruises as well ;3 I'll tell my boyfriend all the time, picking of course, that he's a horrible person for leaving bruises all over me where people can see them and he's always like "that's just a sign of some good lovin' right there!" I think Hiccup would agree lol))

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BelleLorage In reply to PirateNinjaStar [2011-01-16 19:50:29 +0000 UTC]

No, no. It was a perfect ending! I hate it when people write those cotton-candy endings were everything is suddenly alright and the world is in absolute peace or something like that. I prefer endings like this. Were,even though not all is at peace, their is a semblance of such,you know?

Tuff and Hiccup have found balance n their lives, they found love,and people react to it diferently. Loved every bit of it.

Believe me when I write that it was my pleasure ^^ I cant wait for the net one *_* (Might I make a suggestion? I know this is me kindda of butting in your creative vib, but I would adore to see a Twiccup fic made by you. I know it would be smashing and perfect ^^ But then again it's just a suggestion. If it doesnt tickle your fancies, it's all good)

(Your boyfriend ddoes the same thing my ex used to do. XD Iguess it is a boy thing, I have a friend that he is bi and he said that when he is with guys the ultimate goalis to leave as much bruises and hickies and what-not's possible. It's a dominance thing. When he told methat I couldnt help but smile and then laugh. I think it's a very cute habit XD)

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PirateNinjaStar In reply to BelleLorage [2011-01-18 05:16:14 +0000 UTC]

lol I've thought about the Twiccup thing, was honestly going to try it when I first found the fandom because...it's all of my favorite things. Yaoi, with Tuff and Hiccup, and twincest, with Ruff and Tuff...but...the more I tried the worse it got...for me at least -_-;

The twins didn't want to cooperate in my head and Hiccup kept getting caught in the battle between them, I literally felt like I was tearing apart the twins by inserting Hiccup in the middle of them--pun intended lol

I'm sorry I really did try...I just figured it was best to stick to the yaoi that I seem to be pretty good at lol

((and I think the dominance thing is right lol My boyfriend is one of those macho guys that, honest to God, will get on your nerves with how dominant and "manly" he is lol It takes a special kind of person to deal with his special kind of person XD
But, I like the whole idea of domination ;3 I think it's sweet, in its own odd way---and I agree, it's an adorable habit lol ))

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