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Published: 2017-08-09 20:05:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1554; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 15
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Pet portrait of my cat!Related content
Comments: 3
Such a cutie!
I really only have a couple of nitpicks for this piece being that the fur on chest/belly area might be just slightly overwhelming. The shoulder facing toward us looks a bit flat, I think expanding on the white fur just a bit where the little shadow area is (and where the white fluff starts) as well as adding more shadow to follow the rest of the form on the right side would help it but this is like a super tiny thing. Another point is that I would like to see more of an edge on the shadowed side of the cat, mainly the lower right corner as I feel it blends into the floor a bit too much.
However it was honestly hard to point anything very significant out! I think that this is a lovely piece, I do like this kind of loose style where you can see some of the sketch and I think you are doing really well with the brushwork!
And I think the positioning is great, as an audience we really feel close to the subject.
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Thank you so much!! I totally agree, I need to work more on that arm haha...I got a bit lazy there. I'll take your advice with adding the fluff and shadow! I see what you mean about the Edges too, thanks for pointing that out! And I'm glad you enjoy the overall piece as well <3 thank you for another great critique!
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