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Keyshe54 [2016-07-04 19:02:18 +0000 UTC]
That is very clever, a sad poetic play of words.
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c1oud9 [2012-10-21 05:25:45 +0000 UTC]
This is so clever..
How do you think up this stuff?
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Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-26 08:07:30 +0000 UTC]
more personal hurt
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-26 10:50:49 +0000 UTC]
a romantic that's blind to the obvious,
I couldn't see what could be between us.
For so long I chased a dream,
I tried to rip reality at the seam.
Now I'm before you, tears in my eye,
I know what I done and it makes me cry...
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-26 11:04:03 +0000 UTC]
Everyday I live with my mistake
My true love turned out to be fake
I am completely lost
afraid of being tossed
A girl I was with everyday
Until she chose to walked away
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-26 11:10:13 +0000 UTC]
I saw my mistake all to late,
and now curiosity I can not sate.
I want to know how we would work,
but I can't see past future's murk.
My mistake drove you away,
but I still case you to this day.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-26 11:23:03 +0000 UTC]
Together we should be
You said we shall see
I love you to this day
Get away you'd say
Now I'm all alone
Left to rot till the bone
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-26 11:27:13 +0000 UTC]
I know you're still my friend,
Our chance is not at its end.
all I want is to protect
you from other with the prospect.
I know I caused you pain,
and I don't want that to happen again...
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-26 11:41:50 +0000 UTC]
Let's rap some more tomorrow.
Our verse might not be filled with sorrow.
For me, day will soon break.
so a nap I should really take.
Sleep long, sleep well.
And when you wake, give them hell.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-26 11:48:07 +0000 UTC]
Tomorrow is a new day
Lets see what we'll say
Happiness or sorrow
I'll be sure to follow
Where ever our words run
We'll rap till the day is done
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-26 11:52:43 +0000 UTC]
It seems you too have the curse,
and a true master of the verse.
For now I say farewell.
This session was swell.
But I must call it a night,
so long and sleep tight.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-27 05:48:19 +0000 UTC]
A new day is born
To the old one we morn
Lets start again
From friend to friend
From day's first light
Till the night is bright
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-27 06:09:35 +0000 UTC]
with friends I had a drink
and it brought me from the brink
I live for the night
so I'm quite alight
so have you been well?
did you give the day hell?
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-27 06:48:09 +0000 UTC]
The day burned bright
With a girl in love's flight
Love's a funny thing
Letting you fly under its wing
I'm merely a simple poet
Only my rhymes let me show it
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-27 06:53:33 +0000 UTC]
I wish I had more to drink
I'm really starting to sink
again I asked her out
but she just tuned me out
I know she has work to do
but I wish I had some clue
I want her to know how I feel
but I can't seem to break some seal...
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-27 07:11:02 +0000 UTC]
Maybe its not meant to be
You'll just have to see
What she wants in a man
So you may take her hand
Love is like a dream
Everything isn't what it may seem
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-27 07:16:21 +0000 UTC]
Something's there i can tell
but I have no clue in hell
she said she's not had much sleep
so maybe she needs to count more sleep
I'll wait for another time
to ask her if she''l be mine.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-27 07:23:13 +0000 UTC]
Patience is key
To let her see
Who you are
But don't let go to far
Friends are forever
Girls are an endeavor
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-27 07:33:18 +0000 UTC]
the think is you see?
I hurt her and caused us a blight.
Knowing this I can't truly be free
until I can make thing right.
it started when we began talking
I was interested in another girl.
I was like a bird, always squawking
and ignore a perfect pearl
then things fell through
and I saw my mistake
I knew not what to do
I felt like such a fake.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-27 08:02:55 +0000 UTC]
Then have another drink
Or allow yourself to think
To heal the scars you've made
or Apologize for how you've behaved
Choices decide the future
And show how you mature
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-27 08:13:51 +0000 UTC]
to say sorry is not enough
I feel like I just killed
though she is very tough
some wounds take forever to be healed.
I think i should go to bed
and slip into a dream
try to clear my head
and look past how things seem
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-27 08:23:47 +0000 UTC]
The night shall heal you
Sleep you will do
We can talk later
ask if you need a favor
I hope all goes well
And you give tomorrow hell
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-27 08:31:06 +0000 UTC]
for now i sleep
and i'll rise in the morn.
good by for now
May Chaos ever guide you.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-27 20:04:29 +0000 UTC]
Early I awake
My bag I take
I'm off to school
We may continue this duel
Aquarius is my sign
But Taurus is just fine
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-27 20:35:16 +0000 UTC]
After class
I'll kick your ass
with a wicked rhyme
that powers through time
until then my friend
my the fun never end.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-27 22:50:42 +0000 UTC]
You Talk trash
DonΚ»t say anything rash
Take me on if you are sure
You know what youΚ»re going to endure
Endless fun this will be
To take on someone one so tiny
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-28 00:12:38 +0000 UTC]
you think I'm so small
and that you're so tall
I guess it's really time
I really have to bust a rhyme
I am a child of the Night
Let me spread my wings and take flight
Now I guess you see
there's no way you can handle my melody
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-28 06:44:30 +0000 UTC]
make a rhyme
waste your time
No matter what you say
IΚ»ll beat you any day
Although rap ainΚ»t your thing
I can take you under my wing
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-28 06:50:59 +0000 UTC]
rap ain't my thing?
you're right it's not my being.
I only like a good rhyme
I like to bust a verse
it's really not a curse
but I do it all the time
But have you really heard
the meaning of my word?
I don't always have that up beat chime.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-28 06:55:20 +0000 UTC]
Well anyone can rhyme
But skill takes time
Changing your format
Just like your floor mat
Lets see if your skilled
Or are your words just filled?
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-28 06:58:11 +0000 UTC]
life needs spice
I'm cooler than ice
I'm not changing what I say
My life's been hell
I have stories I can tell
but the all end the same way.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-29 06:43:00 +0000 UTC]
Life is filled with sorrow
Maybe itΚ»ll be better tomorrow
Let us start again
Allow me to become a friend
That would be grand
So let me shake your hand
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Zetsumeimaru In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-29 07:05:01 +0000 UTC]
I see what I did wrong
my heart sings a woeful song
I keep trying to make things right
but she keeps pushing me out of sight
It's because of me she's hurt
I feel lower than dirt.
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-29 07:25:33 +0000 UTC]
Wounds heal
Thats for real
If she keeps pushing
Then try slowly entering
With her you need to mend
Then maybe you can become a friend
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Poet-no-06 In reply to Zetsumeimaru [2012-03-28 07:03:45 +0000 UTC]
Life is a path
In need of a bath
To remove the bad
And make everyone glad
Your cool will cool down hell
Then maybe your life will be well
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iiJUICY [2012-03-01 07:35:22 +0000 UTC]
i hate how this is soo true :/
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iiJUICY In reply to Poet-no-06 [2012-03-01 08:38:19 +0000 UTC]
alot, yes :/
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Poet-no-06 In reply to mnoruzi [2012-03-01 05:32:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^
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binkibonsai [2012-03-01 03:52:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, i can relate to this.
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combatplayer [2012-03-01 03:29:58 +0000 UTC]
reminds me of my ex
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