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PoeticVegan — A Girl I Know
Published: 2005-01-24 19:52:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description She can’t help
But stand out
With her unkempt hair
Glazed gray eyes
Staring at nothing
Or something you
Just can’t see

Her mind works
Against her

Sometimes

She cries when
Nothings going wrong
Going right
Going left

And it worries her
That she thinks
Those things
Those
Crazy things
Impossible things

When her heart
Beats against her
Chest
And it hurts
She gets clammy
Palms sweat
Looses her balance
And has to sit down
Remember how to breath
As if it’s unnatural

She can
See
What they are saying
But can hear nothing
But him

That scares her when
She gets scared
For no reason

She gets nervous
When her birthday wish
Is just
To be normal
To find someone like her

So she finds comfort
In writing a poem
About a girl
Just like her
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Comments: 8

Nightfire02000 [2005-03-15 02:26:53 +0000 UTC]

i like it alot you manage to capture that girl in all of us it's very good and i'm putting you on my watch list

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PoeticVegan In reply to Nightfire02000 [2005-03-15 21:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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PoeticVegan [2005-01-26 20:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhhhh ok .

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Joyblack007 [2005-01-25 23:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Remember how to breathe, not breath btw...
And oh, this is very good as well. Short, sweet and to the point. I LIKE it.

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PoeticVegan In reply to Joyblack007 [2005-01-26 02:03:32 +0000 UTC]

OHHh groovy. Thanks. By the way, Who is Jeremy and why is it special that he spoke?

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Joyblack007 In reply to PoeticVegan [2005-01-26 18:14:13 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.
Lol. "Jeremy spoke in class today" is from a Pearl Jam song called Jeremy that I happen to like

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PoeticVegan [2005-01-25 18:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Am i gonna have a stalker??

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Silv3rwolf [2005-01-25 13:23:25 +0000 UTC]

I never really was a fan of short line poetry but yours hits me in a weird but good way. I really enjoy reading your stuff. You will, if you feel you havn't already, be one ofthe greater peots who are good with tone. Bravo!


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