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PoeticVegan — Knowing
Published: 2005-01-24 19:44:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Description Your presence makes my spirit rise from the dead
I’m awake and well
Ready to give you love
But you don’t know
So I tell you now
I want you to know
I follow you in my dreams
And I never want to wake
When I don’t see you
I have withdraw
I feel like I’m following you
Into a dark forest
I don’t know what’s in store for me
And  how will I know
If I’ve gone too far to turn back
I think you should listen
When I say
I’ll give you my soul
If you just love me in return
We were made for each other
Part of a set
You listen to the messages
My heart and mind spill out
You decode them
And listen
I don’t even speak that language
I want you to understand
That I’ve made room for two
Up here and my cloud
And I’ve set a place for you
Sent an invitation
I should tell you that
When I told you that I loved you
That I could make you feel
Like life was good again
I really meant it
I wouldn’t lie to you
And maybe we could
Work together
Against our evils
But now I want to know
Why you told me you
Couldn’t love me
Like I was rotting you from the inside
Like my heart wasn’t true to what I said to you
And you should let me know when
You’ll guide me out of this forest
Because I’m lost
And all I see is your face in the trees
I want you to know
I’ll clean up this mess
That I made
When my heart split open
As long as you help me later on
To put it back together
Knowing you are sharing love
With that man
Drove me to do what I did
You should know
That
I found that his blood was red
And stained my shirt
Just like yours did
But he was colder than you
After it was done
He wasn’t meant to love you
Like I was
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Comments: 8

somnomollior [2005-02-23 22:08:13 +0000 UTC]

It captures so well the feelings of being besotted with some-one. Like being lost in a forest, and when they don't love you back there seems like there's no way out. Yeah!

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PoeticVegan In reply to somnomollior [2005-02-26 00:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch!

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GFYS-shadow [2005-01-30 18:32:17 +0000 UTC]

i liek this poem, its very intresting

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PoeticVegan In reply to GFYS-shadow [2005-02-26 00:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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climbingtherain [2005-01-27 18:41:02 +0000 UTC]

amazing and somehow i understand what you went through even though i havent been through the exact thing... there was something like that in my life... (shes with my ex-boyfriend)

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PoeticVegan In reply to climbingtherain [2005-01-28 00:48:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks. Love is rough

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PoeticVegan [2005-01-26 01:58:43 +0000 UTC]

It's me! I felt this way about a girl. My first love..... Damn her straight self. i didn't kill anyone though. I was just angry.

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Joyblack007 [2005-01-25 23:30:38 +0000 UTC]

What do I need to critique this for? Lol great flow, nice ending too, never thought it would turn out like that. I like the balance of light and dark, how one side shows the love that he has for this girl, and the other side shows how her love drove him to madness. Very very nice job.

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