Comments: 8
somnomollior [2005-02-23 22:08:13 +0000 UTC]
It captures so well the feelings of being besotted with some-one. Like being lost in a forest, and when they don't love you back there seems like there's no way out. Yeah!
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GFYS-shadow [2005-01-30 18:32:17 +0000 UTC]
i liek this poem, its very intresting
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climbingtherain [2005-01-27 18:41:02 +0000 UTC]
amazing and somehow i understand what you went through even though i havent been through the exact thing... there was something like that in my life... (shes with my ex-boyfriend)
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Joyblack007 [2005-01-25 23:30:38 +0000 UTC]
What do I need to critique this for? Lol great flow, nice ending too, never thought it would turn out like that. I like the balance of light and dark, how one side shows the love that he has for this girl, and the other side shows how her love drove him to madness. Very very nice job.
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