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Poetrymann β€” Beneath
Published: 2019-10-09 16:44:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 3522; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 0
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Description She sinks beneath a darkling wave

When no one sees the boat slip out.
The tattered sails that flay about
Drag her to a watery grave

And now she roams the shores near home,
Gathering stars and souls as slaves
Taunting the sailors hearts with doubts

She sinks beneath a darkling wave
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Comments: 29

Ecelis197 [2019-12-05 14:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Siren?

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satellitenotes [2019-11-08 07:32:08 +0000 UTC]

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Poetrymann In reply to satellitenotes [2019-11-09 19:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I have bot done fixed form in ages. I think I will do the December challenge as well.Β 

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LindArtz [2019-10-24 02:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice feelings, and imagery.

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Poetrymann In reply to LindArtz [2019-10-26 03:42:13 +0000 UTC]

I like doing fixed form. It forces you to be disciplined.Β 

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SummerDreams-Art [2019-10-12 16:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Yet another nice one, you write beautifully!

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Poetrymann In reply to SummerDreams-Art [2019-10-19 16:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Free verse is more my thing, but I like doing this every now and then.Β 

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SummerDreams-Art In reply to Poetrymann [2019-12-10 20:32:43 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome always.

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RJBG [2019-10-10 16:03:33 +0000 UTC]

Great work!

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Poetrymann In reply to RJBG [2019-10-11 03:26:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, my friend!

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RJBG In reply to Poetrymann [2019-10-12 17:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome, my friend!

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KimberlyJolanda [2019-10-10 07:51:56 +0000 UTC]

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Poetrymann In reply to KimberlyJolanda [2019-10-11 03:25:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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YouInventedMe [2019-10-10 04:02:00 +0000 UTC]

I really do love that opening/closing line.

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Poetrymann In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-10-11 03:25:26 +0000 UTC]

You have no idea how much I appreciate that!

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DamagedHomewrecker [2019-10-10 01:21:36 +0000 UTC]

this right here is my most favorite thing you have ever written. i love it so much. its the birth of a siren. the rhythm. the imagery. "darkling" i am in loveeeeeeeee

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Poetrymann In reply to DamagedHomewrecker [2019-10-10 01:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! My inspiration for this was β€œMercy Street” by Peter Gabrielle - a great song about poet Anne Sexton.Β 

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NotWithoutHonor [2019-10-09 23:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Great work

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Poetrymann In reply to NotWithoutHonor [2019-10-10 01:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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HippieVan57 [2019-10-09 21:28:04 +0000 UTC]

nicely done!

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Poetrymann In reply to HippieVan57 [2019-10-10 01:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks my friend!

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xlntwtch [2019-10-09 20:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Ghostly and well done! (:

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Poetrymann In reply to xlntwtch [2019-10-10 01:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I am a big fan of Halloween.Β 

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xlntwtch In reply to Poetrymann [2019-10-10 03:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Well, you already have quite a few 'treats' (faves) for this particular 'trick.' Hope you keep up with yourself...

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Poetrymann In reply to xlntwtch [2019-10-10 03:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol. That could get tricky!

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xlntwtch In reply to Poetrymann [2019-10-10 05:07:40 +0000 UTC]

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michaelmas [2019-10-09 18:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Quite visionary ^^

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Poetrymann In reply to michaelmas [2019-10-10 01:48:13 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that. Β Thanks!

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michaelmas In reply to Poetrymann [2019-10-10 10:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Verywelcome ;3

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