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Published: 2004-07-07 16:04:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description sleek, slender beaks
pitch black plomage
short, shrill shrieks
feathers darker than the stone-age

The feathered phantom
the bird of death
not going to grant them
one last breath.

The bird calling you
the bird of doom
choosing a few
taking them to their tomb.

Whom it chooses
nothing can save them
no-one refuses
the bird called the RAVEN.
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Comments: 12

Faeriepoet [2004-07-16 19:30:19 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE this poem! you read one of mine and I didn't get a chance to respond, but you are an AWESOME writer. time to read more.

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poi-bitch In reply to Faeriepoet [2004-07-16 21:22:29 +0000 UTC]

aww thanx sweetie




--stay sane inside of insanity---

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EmZiE69 [2004-07-08 05:48:36 +0000 UTC]

wow! amazing

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poi-bitch In reply to EmZiE69 [2004-07-08 09:01:54 +0000 UTC]

thankyou sweetie.

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faeryzeph912 [2004-07-07 21:53:24 +0000 UTC]

i really love the second stanza. you did a great job on this one!

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poi-bitch In reply to faeryzeph912 [2004-07-08 09:07:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you...again, you really are to kind










--stay sane inside of insanity---

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faeryzeph912 In reply to poi-bitch [2004-07-08 22:51:22 +0000 UTC]

no prob!!!! your most welcome!

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geargrinder [2004-07-07 20:03:50 +0000 UTC]

dark reality. It's cool.

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poi-bitch In reply to geargrinder [2004-07-08 09:08:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you. they are one of my favourite birds,
i have alot of respect for them











--stay sane inside of insanity---

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geargrinder In reply to poi-bitch [2004-07-09 05:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Mine are seagulls and monkey-eating eagles.

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brit-allure [2004-07-07 17:32:36 +0000 UTC]

quote the raven "never more" ...*shiver*

v. nicE.."no-one refuses"--i like the inevitability of this statement. good job

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poi-bitch In reply to brit-allure [2004-07-07 17:42:26 +0000 UTC]

cheers sweetie, u to kind.

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