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poi-bitch β€” which path?
Published: 2004-11-26 10:11:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description So many changes, my mind is full
So many decisions, my eye’s are blind
Confusion falls as mayhem heightens
Blindness prevails as the light brightens
Words slip silently past my lips
My lungs stay flat as I breath
My bones stay motionless as I sleep
The past no longer matters
The present seems to come and go
The future is forbidden
Not knowing which path to take
Or which star to follow
I waste away, sitting here
Awaiting a decision I can’t make.
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Comments: 7

paranoiaprincess83 [2005-05-20 22:35:57 +0000 UTC]

I like your poetry... one of your DA friends told me to see your stuff... and I finally found a working link to it... I really like this poem, espicially this part: "The past no longer matters The present seems to come and go The future is forbidden"

Keep writting! you're great!

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poi-bitch In reply to paranoiaprincess83 [2005-05-24 18:15:01 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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paranoiaprincess83 In reply to poi-bitch [2005-05-24 19:01:23 +0000 UTC]

awww welcomes

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brit-allure [2004-11-28 01:46:56 +0000 UTC]

it works. nice, i like the ideas &c ; good job

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poi-bitch In reply to brit-allure [2004-11-29 16:07:32 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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Birdygal [2004-11-27 10:43:34 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done and very understandable

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poi-bitch In reply to Birdygal [2004-11-27 19:57:09 +0000 UTC]

thanx :hugs:

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