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Published: 2012-02-16 22:57:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1545; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 47
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Description I have a new teacher at class, and he's helping me a lot! Here you can see my handycap drawing guns XD

Prease, constructive critics.. because I cry easily!


Las clases con otro profe parece que dan sus frutos! Queda patente mi total incapacidad dibujando pistolas...XD

Por favor..críticas constructivas..que me haréis llorar!
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Comments: 12

ONEnezi [2012-02-16 23:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I know you said something about you being bad at guns, but the gun is actually pretty good. I also love the grime and dirt on the walls. Amazingly displayed. Perhaps the woman is too skinny at the waist but what do I know, maybe she's not even a human woman. xD

Your choice of colors is interesting as well. It gives off an alien-like feel. Like it brings me into a bizzarre spaceship.

The only thing that might use some improvement is the laser-like shots. They could use a little more incandescence; a good glowing effect. Other than that, it's brilliant work.

Remember: The moment you become satisfied with your skills, they will never improve. Good luck!

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PoisonousFox In reply to ONEnezi [2012-02-16 23:43:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for your critique, I still have a lot to learn, and I appreciate this a lot!

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DumpsterKid [2012-05-04 19:47:29 +0000 UTC]

freakin amazing job.

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PoisonousFox In reply to DumpsterKid [2012-05-04 20:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks ^^

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II---XedeasH---II [2012-02-20 00:58:34 +0000 UTC]

LOS LASERS VUELVEN A TENER PILAS! xDDD

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Curroide [2012-02-17 20:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Está terrrrrminaaaadooooo!!! Enhorabuena! ^^ Bueno, yo ya te hice mi crítica constructiva en clase

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Pedrera [2012-02-17 09:51:36 +0000 UTC]

estupendo, le has sabido sacar partido, esto esta claro. Me gustan las luces de la columna difuminadas.

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PoisonousFox In reply to Pedrera [2012-02-17 14:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Jejejeje,raaaaciaaaas ^^ a mi lo que más me mola es la columna, con sus brillicos y roturas!

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Curroide In reply to PoisonousFox [2012-02-17 20:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Sí sí, coincido en que mola mucho el muro ese con sus esquinicas y los reflejos y todo ello!

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Pedrera In reply to PoisonousFox [2012-02-17 16:11:57 +0000 UTC]

si, te recuerdo el jueves admirándola xD "esque es lo que más me gusta!"

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TouchingEverything [2012-02-16 23:03:13 +0000 UTC]

Love the colors!
But I wish you could something more with the projectiles.
I like a better glow, more colorful colors, a different brush or something.

but what your doing isnt wrong.

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PoisonousFox In reply to TouchingEverything [2012-02-16 23:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm agree aout th brushes... I need to learn how to use them. The projectiles have been modified millions of times, at first they had a lot of light and colour...and it was a problem because the girl seemed hard to see in the middle of that amount of light... but I really loved the projectiles before XD

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