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Published: 2013-09-25 16:56:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 451; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Today got inspired and did something new to me! High five everybody! Please comment and favorite this!Related content
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the work looks good. However, the distribution of values in the composition looks a bit unbalanced. Other than that its great !
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Belated, but here it goes!
This has quite some pop look to it, and the contrast is present which makes it actually pop out more. However, I agree with others in that the yellow seems to be overpowering and takes away from the image behind as though a texture was placed bluntly on top. Decide where you want to specifically put yellow (perhaps as zidaria mentioned, a pastel yellow?) so that it enhances the overall image and/or focuses the view on the face rather than leading the eye all over the place, which doesn't balance the pop feel of the work. The actual painting itself looks ok so that's fine!
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This is an interesting piece of work, something different and nice.
However, I think the yellow color is very strong for the piece, maybe it would be nice if you choose pastel yellow color. This is the only critique I have to say, the rest of the work looks good for me. 
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When it comes to anatomy you've done a lovely job but I feel the yellow texture is awfully distracting and takes away from the actual subject. Try something a little less obtrusive, maybe just a very light noise effect or a light artistic filter. In general I'd advise using filters really only as minor touch ups. Using them to such a strong degree as here hardly ever creates a pleasing effect.
The painting part itself seems to have been done very nicely though, so definitely keep up the good work!
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Beautiful portrait! I like the bit of texture in the gray scale!
One thing I might add is I'm not a huge fan of the yellow texture overlay, it takes away from the figure. Ie/ around her neck I can't even tell if her neck is defined at all. Perhaps another way to incorporate the yellow would be to work it either into your tints or shades.
Your anatomy seems fairly good, I would comment on the hand, but I feel like I can't fully see it because of the yellow texture overlay. I think perhaps a few more midtones on the top of her dress and her biceps-area would finish it off perfectly! Good job!
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interesting elaboration, good result pop art style
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