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Published: 2014-10-20 12:48:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1709; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 4
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Ladies and gentlemen, i present to you the result of 3 days drawing, 10 days brainstorming and few years of development.my very first serious one-shot comic.
I hope you like it! i put a lot of heart and soul into this 
you can see more art of the characters in this folder poki-grzyb.deviantart.com/gall… tumblr version for reblogging!
i hope you like it
special thanksCommander-Lim who wrote a one-shot story featuring this character, which made me jump into brainstorming the plot for the story and in the end creating this comic, comic features a scene i had in mind for a way long time
taruhead who drew a picture of one of my oc's Hbd Poki!! and also made me feel very good about my original characters and inspired me to create this as well! thank you taru
thank you all for looking at my stuff
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Comments: 50
I love it!
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thank you so much! i put like all my heart out here
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Your very welcome! It is very cool
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oh, about noragami, i already have ton of sketches done, but im doing bigger drawings out of them, and the sketch i uploaded today was a very quick one, drawn today
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Oh cool! can't wait to see them!
I love Noragami very much! I read the manga now, but I hope they will continue with the anime soon.
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have fun with the manga and feel free to talk to be about it when you need to, because i had heavy needs and i still do and i love this manga so badly
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Well, ciekawie się zapowiada, choć bohater dość szybko podejmuje decyzje, chyba lot był za krótki, zazwyczaj w takim momencie
mangacy celowo wydłużają czas lotu, jakby trwał nieskończoność,przeszkadza mi też to, że w jednym kadrze ma skrzydła, a w następnym
już ich nie ma. Choć on je rozwinął jak już upadł??? Tak to wygląda, nie wiem wtedy jaki sens był rozwijania tych skrzydeł, które w kolejnym
kadrze znikają? Jak ten chłopak idzie odwróconymi plecami do widza, mógłby mieć te skrzydła i lecące z nich pióra (klasyq u.u). Tylko czyy te skrzydła
były fizyczne? Nie wiem czy odległosci pomiędzy kadrami nie są ciut za szerokie. Chyba troszku tutaj za mało jest tekstu, trochę więcej mogłoby być
ujawnione, chociażby z tym "him", który dopiero jest wspomniany w ostatnim kadrze.
Rysunków nie będę komentować, bo póki co to są szkice
zaskoczona, mam nadzieję że pójdziesz w tym kierunku, w kierunku oryginalnych historii, bo masz do tego dryg
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NIE WIERZE! NAPISALAM TAK DUZO I ZAMKNELAM STRONE PRZYPADKIEM
wszystko fajnie, spoko - tylko czy te skrzydla byly fizyczne?
czuje ze duzo sie ostatnio nauczylam, bo teraz zrobilabym ten komiks duzo inaczej, lepiej, nawet po spostrzezeniach innych, nie tylko swoich, rozumiem ze niezbyt jest to wszystko czytelne i malo mozna zrozumiec. co prawda jest to wyjete ze srodka historii, i moze sie wydaje ze kolo szybko podejmuje decyzje ale w rzeczywistosci troche to juz trwalo. no ale teraz pokazalabym to lepiej. to byla taka super pierwsza proba robienia komiksu - mi sie podobalo
odleglosci pomiedzy kadrami sa takie bo z zalozenia ten komiks byl w stronach a nie w pasku. :< i chcialam utrzymac ten maly suspense jaki mialam pomiedzy stronami gdy rozwija skrzydla.
rysunki mi sie podobaja, ale mysle ze konkretniejszy lineart bylby lepszy. bardzo mi sie podoba styl w tym komiksie tapastic.com/episode/69000
haha dziekuje, nigdy nie tworzylam komiksow i nigdy tego nie lubilam ale teraz bardzo bym chciala!
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Zdarza się, też tak miałam, dlatego od tamtego czasu, co jakiś czas zaznaczam to, co już napisałam i wciskam ctr+c.
No właśnie, dlatego sama Ci zadałam dokładnie to samo pytanie. Tylko koleś ma nadprzyrodzone moce wtedy D:
Zatem warto to kontynuować, skoro Ci się podobało
Ach, okej.
W porządku, każdy ma swoje preferencje
Widzisz jak to się upodobania z czasem zmieniają.
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tak, on ma moce. jest jednym z ludzi ktorzy potrafia magicznie tworzyc jakis element, w jego przypadku jest to lód. : p
wciaz jestem na niskim poziomie developu. ale caly czas z tym wszystkim walcze i kreuje ten swiat! : D
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A w tej historii pojawi się ta Twoja OCka z żółto-czerwonymi włosami?
Jaki inglisz xD Jasne, w swoim czasie do wszsytkiego dojdziesz, zawsze po drodze może coś wpaść do głowy
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xD
tak, wszystkie 4 oce ktore mam są glownymi postaciami. czemu pytasz?
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A tak z ciekawości, bo może jakieś nowe zamierzałaś stworzyć
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mam tylko 4 oce ;_______; zamierzam stworzyc wiecej ale jakos tak. tak jakos. nie chce. XD nic nie porzucam! ;_; to sa moje dzieci ;_;
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Ooo, myślałam że masz ich więcej. Nie chcesz? Czemu? Cztery postacie na komiks to trochę mało
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nie jestyem pewna. chcialabym miec wiecej, ale najpierw chcialabym zdefiniowac uniwersum :<
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thank you so much i really put my whole heart into this! i hope i will manage to, sooner or later, develop the full story!
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your wellcome and i can't wait to read it
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i have so many talks with my friend and he keeps on saying that i should keep on doing one shots, while tryign to develop the story on the way and tone my skills with making manga for the future. i might or might not do so
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AHH CRIPES I AM SO HYPED RIGHT NOW.. (READ THROUGH IT THREE TIMES IN A ROW--)
please tell me there is more coming o|-< !!!
I can tell that it took a lot of work too when I was reading, everything felt well paced and planned out!!!
and honestly, even though I admired your ocs I never really knew their personalities this person definitely comes off as a very interesting character!! I'm really happy to see him in movement and get to see his inner thoughts a bit aaaa ////w//// He definitely doesnt come off as your typical protagonist but I'm loving his personality already--
I think he is a recklessly passionate (as in he cares a lot to extremes??) His expression at the end was great aa I can't wait to see more of your original story * ____ *
ghh also thank you for the special mention BUT REALLY more like thank YOU for creating these characters and story in the first place!! ;; v ;;
haha I HAVE to read Mrlimmyboi's stories soon (after this obvious busy period) * - *
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TARUUUUUU
i worked really hard on this, 3 days without sleep without eating, i drew this on paper and then i replanned the panels and then i added some more backstory into it and all
and this character is not a protagonist!
Mrlimmyboi is still helping me with brainstorming the ideas for the story, i definitely make a small step fiorward each day
this character is the worst to work through, he is the least defined one from all of them, and im trying to work him out with my friend's little help. he is supposed to be indifferent, ignoring everything around him, being emotionless, while outside of him trying to be the opposite. his realself is rather cold, but his outsides are trying to break it at this point of the story which i've shown here in this mini comic (its somewhere after the beginning, a while after he is introduced) his physical needs and actually all of his needs are being his priority and he doesnt care for others. for now.
im planning to do some proper character sheets for all of them in case someone feels like drawing my characters
thank you <3 and if you happen to read his original story, and eventually leaving a review, he would be really happy
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thank you!!!!
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i am really happy to hear so! i worked very hard on this! thank you very much ;_;
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Nice intro. Ussually, first pages are not mean to be so clear, so mangakas could explain their fictional universe later on. For a comic test, this one is very good, though.
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thank you!
although this is not an intro, its a scene that takes place some time after beginning since it refers to some events that took place before. thank you very much for commenting
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*cries infinintly into time and space* SO PERFECT
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thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;______;
could you possibly tell me any thoguhts about this? maybe your favourite page? what did you like the most? what are you interested in?
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pages 1-4 are good with building up to the later pages and draw in the reader. The rough sketching on the pages gives a good sensation that the character is in motion.
all in all its very well done. And what i'm interested in? 
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thank you!
well, this scene is something that happens at some point in the story, its quite far from the beginning but its also quite far from the end, much closer to the beginning though. thank you very much
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I think I'll write it all here again, but I love this! The title speaks a lot, and can be viewed in many different lights which can give it very different meanings. Even though I already know a lot more of the plot than the others, I have to admit this manga actually draws me in, it pulls me, making me want to know more and more. I just want the full manga already! And in my opinion, a good main character is not defined by how much you know about them, but how much you don't know. A main character should be a constantly evolving book where each new page is a surprise that slowly, over time, builds their character. Some of the most prominent examples are characters such as Eren Jeager, or Goku, or Luffy. They all have very strong personality traits which define them as human beings - Or Saiyans, hey I'm not racist- but as time goes along they grow as characters by slowly revealing their smaller traits. I can see examples of this within your manga, and it's a very great start
As for the artistic style, I love it. It's a nice mix of sketchy with a little bit of clean lines here and there, and it makes for a nice unique style, which is also very comfortable on the eyes. Mangas such as Shingeki No Kyojin have very rough lines, and can often be uncomfortable or confusing to look at, but here the lines are comfortable and enjoyable to look at. The information is gathered easily, and you can focus on the story and enjoy the manga better as a whole. I can't really say much more on the artistic value since I'm not the one who works with lines or brushstrokes, more of a letters and paragraphs kind of guy.
As for my favorite panel/page, it has to be the very last one. For me personally, it just highlights the character very well. For me personally it speaks a lot about how he is, and his personality. And also his determination and his distance from others. The same can be said for the panel with his eyes being open, it tells me a lot about the character. These two panels are especially my favorite. Also his facial expression of page 13 is a-a-a-amazing.
P.S. I love the design of his clothes, I feel I want to remind you once more.
Well done, Hon. You made an amazing one-shot manga
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i wish to make his personality unique and to not make a unbelievable character - like suddenly him being super caring and sensitive. but isnt he caring already?
i love the sketchy style when its clear and youre able to read and understand whats happening. but the coloring will be done in a cell shading way, and i will change this comic in the future into that, once my pc is upgraded
i love the panel with his wide eyes. i feel very intimidated.
thank you
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I wouldn't call it caring, I'd call it curious and with a twisted sense of determination. And I love the sketchy style so damn much
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im not gonna color it
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Yes. Yes. Please. Confused, empathetic, and curious as hell. Overall just...wtf information am I missing???
Seriously, good job on this. You've definitely got my attention, confused me, and drawn me in to where I'm sitting back wanting more. I want to know why she said "no" and who he said he's willing to kill to help her. Also to know wtf exactly his addition is. I can see multiple possibilities, but what it actually is could be completely different than what I'm thinking.
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i'm glad i caught your interest!
it's meant to be a little teaser, not mentioning i threw all my heart out onto this. ahha and im glad i left you curious
thank you for liking it, i really devoted past 3 days into this, i couldnt even sleep or eat
so, she is scared. and he is angry, mostly with his own mind. the rest im leaving for the future
thank you for liking it seriously it means a lot to me, i thought no one would care!
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Believe me, I understand the feeling of thinking no one would like something I do/did. You've done a brilliant job at creating a situation where we can see these two in distinctly distressed situations that drew me in and have me eagerly (but patiently) awaiting more of what you'll do.
Take your time with it, and get what you need done so we can see these two so we can see even more awesome things with you and them.
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thank you very much, it's extremely encouraging to start proper works on this!
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I'm glad I helped. You're welcome, and good luck! I'm sure you'll do great.
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