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Poki-art In reply to Catstudio7 [2015-04-23 09:46:10 +0000 UTC]
have fun with the manga and feel free to talk to be about it when you need to, because i had heavy needs and i still do and i love this manga so badly
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anezumi [2015-02-20 22:50:29 +0000 UTC]
Well, ciekawie się zapowiada, choć bohater dość szybko podejmuje decyzje, chyba lot był za krótki, zazwyczaj w takim momencie
mangacy celowo wydłużają czas lotu, jakby trwał nieskończoność,przeszkadza mi też to, że w jednym kadrze ma skrzydła, a w następnym
już ich nie ma. Choć on je rozwinął jak już upadł??? Tak to wygląda, nie wiem wtedy jaki sens był rozwijania tych skrzydeł, które w kolejnym
kadrze znikają? Jak ten chłopak idzie odwróconymi plecami do widza, mógłby mieć te skrzydła i lecące z nich pióra (klasyq u.u). Tylko czyy te skrzydła
były fizyczne? Nie wiem czy odległosci pomiędzy kadrami nie są ciut za szerokie. Chyba troszku tutaj za mało jest tekstu, trochę więcej mogłoby być
ujawnione, chociażby z tym "him", który dopiero jest wspomniany w ostatnim kadrze.
Rysunków nie będę komentować, bo póki co to są szkice Całość zapowiada się dobrze, wiec czekam na więcej od Ciebie, jestem pozytywnie
zaskoczona, mam nadzieję że pójdziesz w tym kierunku, w kierunku oryginalnych historii, bo masz do tego dryg
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Poki-art In reply to anezumi [2015-03-11 12:39:14 +0000 UTC]
tak, on ma moce. jest jednym z ludzi ktorzy potrafia magicznie tworzyc jakis element, w jego przypadku jest to lód. : p
wciaz jestem na niskim poziomie developu. ale caly czas z tym wszystkim walcze i kreuje ten swiat! : D
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Poki-art In reply to anezumi [2015-03-12 09:06:09 +0000 UTC]
mam tylko 4 oce ;_______; zamierzam stworzyc wiecej ale jakos tak. tak jakos. nie chce. XD nic nie porzucam! ;_; to sa moje dzieci ;_;
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Poki-art In reply to anezumi [2015-03-15 16:05:32 +0000 UTC]
nie jestyem pewna. chcialabym miec wiecej, ale najpierw chcialabym zdefiniowac uniwersum :<
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shelbot98 [2014-11-07 07:27:24 +0000 UTC]
wow good comic strip
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Poki-art In reply to shelbot98 [2014-11-07 10:50:26 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much i really put my whole heart into this! i hope i will manage to, sooner or later, develop the full story!
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shelbot98 In reply to Poki-art [2014-11-07 17:01:06 +0000 UTC]
your wellcome and i can't wait to read it
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shelbot98 In reply to Poki-art [2014-11-07 20:23:47 +0000 UTC]
oh okay i understand
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taruhead [2014-10-27 11:08:07 +0000 UTC]
AHH CRIPES I AM SO HYPED RIGHT NOW.. (READ THROUGH IT THREE TIMES IN A ROW--)
please tell me there is more coming o|-< !!!
I can tell that it took a lot of work too when I was reading, everything felt well paced and planned out!!!
and honestly, even though I admired your ocs I never really knew their personalities this person definitely comes off as a very interesting character!! I'm really happy to see him in movement and get to see his inner thoughts a bit aaaa ////w//// He definitely doesnt come off as your typical protagonist but I'm loving his personality already--
I think he is a recklessly passionate (as in he cares a lot to extremes??) His expression at the end was great aa I can't wait to see more of your original story * ____ *
ghh also thank you for the special mention BUT REALLY more like thank YOU for creating these characters and story in the first place!! ;; v ;;
haha I HAVE to read Mrlimmyboi's stories soon (after this obvious busy period) * - *
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Poki-art In reply to taruhead [2014-10-27 11:17:18 +0000 UTC]
TARUUUUUU thank you TT_____TT
i worked really hard on this, 3 days without sleep without eating, i drew this on paper and then i replanned the panels and then i added some more backstory into it and all
and this character is not a protagonist! one of main characters, but i actually dont know if all 4 of the main ones would be able to be called protagonists. all of them are equally important in the story (him, the fire gil, and siblings - dark haired guy probably named Matt and the small girl with long hair)
Mrlimmyboi is still helping me with brainstorming the ideas for the story, i definitely make a small step fiorward each day
this character is the worst to work through, he is the least defined one from all of them, and im trying to work him out with my friend's little help. he is supposed to be indifferent, ignoring everything around him, being emotionless, while outside of him trying to be the opposite. his realself is rather cold, but his outsides are trying to break it at this point of the story which i've shown here in this mini comic (its somewhere after the beginning, a while after he is introduced) his physical needs and actually all of his needs are being his priority and he doesnt care for others. for now.
im planning to do some proper character sheets for all of them in case someone feels like drawing my characters ))))
thank you <3 and if you happen to read his original story, and eventually leaving a review, he would be really happy
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InfiniteTortoise [2014-10-20 23:04:57 +0000 UTC]
Soooo coool!! I want moreeee!
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Poki-art In reply to InfiniteTortoise [2014-10-21 08:43:46 +0000 UTC]
i am really happy to hear so! i worked very hard on this! thank you very much ;_;
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joremias [2014-10-20 15:47:11 +0000 UTC]
Nice intro. Ussually, first pages are not mean to be so clear, so mangakas could explain their fictional universe later on. For a comic test, this one is very good, though.
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TheLadyIssu [2014-10-20 15:27:34 +0000 UTC]
*cries infinintly into time and space* SO PERFECT
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Poki-art In reply to TheLadyIssu [2014-10-20 15:38:47 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;______;
could you possibly tell me any thoguhts about this? maybe your favourite page? what did you like the most? what are you interested in?
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Commander-Lim [2014-10-20 13:27:56 +0000 UTC]
I think I'll write it all here again, but I love this! The title speaks a lot, and can be viewed in many different lights which can give it very different meanings. Even though I already know a lot more of the plot than the others, I have to admit this manga actually draws me in, it pulls me, making me want to know more and more. I just want the full manga already! And in my opinion, a good main character is not defined by how much you know about them, but how much you don't know. A main character should be a constantly evolving book where each new page is a surprise that slowly, over time, builds their character. Some of the most prominent examples are characters such as Eren Jeager, or Goku, or Luffy. They all have very strong personality traits which define them as human beings - Or Saiyans, hey I'm not racist- but as time goes along they grow as characters by slowly revealing their smaller traits. I can see examples of this within your manga, and it's a very great start
As for the artistic style, I love it. It's a nice mix of sketchy with a little bit of clean lines here and there, and it makes for a nice unique style, which is also very comfortable on the eyes. Mangas such as Shingeki No Kyojin have very rough lines, and can often be uncomfortable or confusing to look at, but here the lines are comfortable and enjoyable to look at. The information is gathered easily, and you can focus on the story and enjoy the manga better as a whole. I can't really say much more on the artistic value since I'm not the one who works with lines or brushstrokes, more of a letters and paragraphs kind of guy.
As for my favorite panel/page, it has to be the very last one. For me personally, it just highlights the character very well. For me personally it speaks a lot about how he is, and his personality. And also his determination and his distance from others. The same can be said for the panel with his eyes being open, it tells me a lot about the character. These two panels are especially my favorite. Also his facial expression of page 13 is a-a-a-amazing.
P.S. I love the design of his clothes, I feel I want to remind you once more.
Well done, Hon. You made an amazing one-shot manga
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Dragonuv10 [2014-10-20 13:00:10 +0000 UTC]
wew
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Sword-Demon [2014-10-20 12:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Yes. Yes. Please. Confused, empathetic, and curious as hell. Overall just...wtf information am I missing???
Seriously, good job on this. You've definitely got my attention, confused me, and drawn me in to where I'm sitting back wanting more. I want to know why she said "no" and who he said he's willing to kill to help her. Also to know wtf exactly his addition is. I can see multiple possibilities, but what it actually is could be completely different than what I'm thinking.
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Sword-Demon In reply to Poki-art [2014-10-21 00:08:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad I helped. You're welcome, and good luck! I'm sure you'll do great.
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