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Pola-444 — Can I, Would You?
Published: 2007-12-23 04:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 292; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Can I fall apart,
beneath this stars,
and in your arms?

Would you watch me,
climb up so high,
and fall?

Would you catch me,
on my way down,
even though it may hurt?

Are you waiting,
for me to self-destruct,
so you can move on to someone new?

Am I lying to myself,
about the way you work,
and they way you are?

Is this a game that perhaps,
I'm learning that I really,
don't want to play with you?

Will you ruin all my shots,
at a better life,
at a better game?

Will I put the blame on you,
when i should be placing,
all the blame on myself?

Would I catch you if you fell,
from the stars above,
in the sky so high?

Would I let you self destruct,
if I knew that was where,
you were heading to quickly?

Why do you leave me alone,
when you know I need you right now,
to keep me safe from myself?

Why is this turning out,
to be so wrong in many ways,
and I can't get out?
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Comments: 27

xaxpoetsxheartx [2008-01-01 03:34:48 +0000 UTC]

i feel really bad about how this was composed, i've changed some things and now i believe you can finally be happy. idc what the others think.

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Pola-444 In reply to xaxpoetsxheartx [2008-01-01 04:41:13 +0000 UTC]

*lol* i am happy of course! specially at this exact point in time.. shit will happen..and well.. idk..thanks though for reading

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eternal-deep-veX [2007-12-26 18:51:47 +0000 UTC]

lols i feel the exact some way i moved away from my friends too but sadly we lost contact

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Pola-444 In reply to eternal-deep-veX [2007-12-26 23:05:07 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* that always sucks..my best friend and i have kept really close contact..it's been over a year since we lived near each other..but some how we managed..thanks for reading..

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eternal-deep-veX In reply to Pola-444 [2007-12-29 05:39:47 +0000 UTC]

yah but keep close contact when the third year you might start forgetting ...sadly

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Pola-444 In reply to eternal-deep-veX [2007-12-29 05:59:24 +0000 UTC]

*sigh*

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TravisKeaton [2007-12-24 19:07:42 +0000 UTC]

That would make a really good song. :3

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Pola-444 In reply to TravisKeaton [2007-12-25 04:55:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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TravisKeaton [2007-12-24 19:04:26 +0000 UTC]

That would make a really good song. :3

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RiseInside [2007-12-24 03:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Excellent! Asking yourself if any of the two would catch the other. Which one is to blame. I love it

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Pola-444 In reply to RiseInside [2007-12-24 03:55:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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shadowmist-girl [2007-12-23 14:02:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah it does have alot of emotion in it

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Pola-444 In reply to shadowmist-girl [2007-12-23 16:54:09 +0000 UTC]

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mewtootim [2007-12-23 13:27:01 +0000 UTC]

awww *hugs* it was sad *sniffle sniffle* but good writing o.0 lots of emotion (and I sang it, and I sing horribly!! o.0)

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Pola-444 In reply to mewtootim [2007-12-23 16:54:38 +0000 UTC]

whoohoo you sang it.how cool.. and thanks

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YumeUchiYume [2007-12-23 05:27:29 +0000 UTC]

You'll die when you die.
No sooner, no later.

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Pola-444 In reply to YumeUchiYume [2007-12-23 06:02:50 +0000 UTC]

that's if you believe things happen b/c someone sets it.. not that you set it..

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YumeUchiYume In reply to Pola-444 [2007-12-23 10:22:34 +0000 UTC]

What if you set when you die?
You'll still die when you die.

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Pola-444 In reply to YumeUchiYume [2007-12-23 17:52:49 +0000 UTC]

shush don't rain on my parade

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YumeUchiYume In reply to Pola-444 [2007-12-23 18:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Which parade? The self-pity-WANT-DEATH-NAO parade?
Even if you die right now as you read these very words, you'll still die when you die.

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Pola-444 In reply to YumeUchiYume [2007-12-23 23:48:56 +0000 UTC]

yes self pity parade.

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YumeUchiYume In reply to Pola-444 [2007-12-24 01:57:58 +0000 UTC]

If that IS the true nature of your parade, then isn't the point of it for YOU to rain on it?
Am I really ruining your fun by depriving you the fun of ruining your own fun?

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Pola-444 In reply to YumeUchiYume [2007-12-24 03:56:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah..
i think soo

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YumeUchiYume In reply to Pola-444 [2007-12-24 06:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Let me know when you're sure so I can either continue to rain on your self-pity parade or stop raining on your self-pity parade.

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Pola-444 In reply to YumeUchiYume [2007-12-25 05:08:41 +0000 UTC]

ok

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74-HeartBroken-Tears [2007-12-23 05:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh man. This is amazing. I really love the emotion you put out. I feel the same way, but in a sense different. I hope everything gets better with you.

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Pola-444 In reply to 74-HeartBroken-Tears [2007-12-23 06:02:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah...the emotion that fuels this is really strong right now.. But im sorry that you feel the same way in any shape..b/c these emotions are not the good kind that make you feel warm and fuzzy when you go to sleep at night *lol* anyways..yeah i hope things get better too..and thank you very much for the nice comment

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