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Published: 2010-10-04 02:07:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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IntroductionI'm not quite your, average joe. I see things a bit differently. Hi, I know this isn't the best introduction but, Hi my name's Jade. listen, this is a journal log to tell you about, well, me. so please enjoy whatever might happen while writing this journal.
Entry 1, September 3:
My therapist suggested that i have a journal to say all my "crazy" thoughts. Whats that supposed to mean, I'm not crazy you know. O.K. I'm not crazy! Sure i claimed in the 2nd grade that my class were aliens but i'm not crazy. Just to let you now i am now a third grader and im very mature. But, What just happened, i just can't explain but, let me try. So lets just say, I'm almost positive i just saw a, goblin in my class. I don't know, maybe im crazy. Just please keep that in mind, but im just tired because i write these at night so, write in this thing tomorrow. I'll tell you if anything weird happens.
Entry 2, September 4:
Nothing seems to be happening with, You Know Who. Oh, right, I never told you his name. His name is Jared. So today i just couldn't function. I just felt bazaar. Is that normal? But i saw it again today and he is definitely goblin. does this sound like a goblin, green, pointy ears, and a retched smell? if so, he's a goblin, right?
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Don't be offended.
Well, I'll give you this. This definitely looks like a third grader wrote it. The grammar is horrible, it skips all over the place, and it's pretty silly.
However, that might have been what you were going for. After all, a third grader was supposed of have written this, right? I see a general concept building anyway that I can actually follow. The problem is, this would feel tons better if I were reading it in a different setting. If this were in the middle of a well written story, that would be great. If this were in a comic, and the rest of that comic were constructed in a thoughtful manner, that would be great also. But alone, this is just hard to follow. Why am I reading a third grade kid's journal?
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your reading a kid's jouranl because it just sometimes makes it sound interresting. in this case, not so much but ive seen good ones with journal llike writing
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