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Ponti55 ā€” Monotony

Published: 2011-02-05 00:30:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 3178; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 0
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VanEyke [2011-02-07 11:58:40 +0000 UTC]

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I like it very much, especially the light on the man at the foreground. Good work.
The only thing, that is bothering me is, that you always have used the same model.
You could transform - for example - the angle of the models, so that they are not look so similar.
I know, the title is 'Monotony', but I think the gravity and the fall of a human is always different.
And maybe a radial gradient would focus the view to the middle.
The color is very good and gives the picture the right atmosphere.
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VanEyke In reply to VanEyke [2011-02-08 15:28:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Ponti55 In reply to VanEyke [2011-02-07 15:55:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the critique! I was originally only planning on using one falling model but i felt the repetition of the same two models would really exacerbate this idea of 'Monotony'. Maybe it just didn't work the way i expected.

Anyways thank you for your honesty, i really appreciate it I'll make some changes.

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chryssalis [2011-03-06 07:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Great work!!

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izakazi [2011-02-24 08:53:54 +0000 UTC]

love it, kinda makes me sad though. but amazing none the less!!!

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Ponti55 In reply to izakazi [2011-02-25 00:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Glad you like it.

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sedrati [2011-02-10 18:59:20 +0000 UTC]

great ....amazing....

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SukhRiar [2011-02-08 02:27:39 +0000 UTC]

loved your imagination..

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Ponti55 In reply to SukhRiar [2011-02-09 18:42:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man

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livinmynovels [2011-02-05 14:08:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow this makes me think of the skins advert lols nice idea's and greatly exectuted. good idea to use a cold sepia tone rather than grey as most might have done.

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Ponti55 In reply to livinmynovels [2011-02-05 15:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Haha good point, hadn't thought of that! Even though the new series is kinda sucky..

Anyways the colour i used was mainly to push the idea of monotony

As always, thaaanks!

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manny6574 [2011-02-05 10:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Great use of a single colour!!

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Ponti55 In reply to manny6574 [2011-02-05 15:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man glad you like it

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manny6574 In reply to Ponti55 [2011-02-05 15:51:39 +0000 UTC]

no prob^^

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oneoftheclan [2011-02-05 01:22:56 +0000 UTC]

I WOULD OF SUBMITTED TO SURREAL BUT ITS EACHONE IDEA TO JUDGE .ALLIN ALL GREAT WORKS MY FRIEND

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Ponti55 In reply to oneoftheclan [2011-02-05 15:34:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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