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Published: 2008-06-25 17:36:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description we keen from the string
quivering my heart aloud
you’re the song soaring
in me

aloft the sour notes twang
and suddenly i see we’re
too raw to be a
symphony
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Comments: 12

Satyesu [2008-06-26 00:57:15 +0000 UTC]

Aw, Daze...you're so awesome. for you.

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prairiedaisy In reply to Satyesu [2008-06-26 10:24:25 +0000 UTC]

I think I moan rather too much, but one cannot internalise these things all the time. Even I'm getting sick of it!

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prairiedaisy In reply to prairiedaisy [2008-06-26 13:33:27 +0000 UTC]

sick of moaning, that is.

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sherrabelle [2008-06-25 23:00:26 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Blue, really really love the last two lines.

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prairiedaisy In reply to sherrabelle [2008-06-26 10:24:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Blueskye27 [2008-06-25 21:29:25 +0000 UTC]

Too raw to be a symphony...love that.

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prairiedaisy In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-06-26 10:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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pardonM3 [2008-06-25 17:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Brought down to earth in a flash.
I like that word, 'keen'.

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prairiedaisy In reply to pardonM3 [2008-06-25 18:07:49 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing how you always react to my stuff the exact same way I do - that was what I thought too, after writing it!

I have to say I quite like that word too.

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pardonM3 In reply to prairiedaisy [2008-06-25 18:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Hm, how odd.

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prairiedaisy In reply to pardonM3 [2008-06-25 18:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah well, but we wouldn't be human if we weren't at least a little odd.

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pardonM3 In reply to prairiedaisy [2008-06-25 18:16:50 +0000 UTC]

Ha, that's true.

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