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Precia-T β Rainah - Commission + commission status
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This is Rainah a commission forI have commission status closed by now. But I decided to run commissions on patreon. There is for now only one slot for character sheet.Β
If you want to commission me for it, here is the link:Β
www.patreon.com/precia
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Yeah I was just thinking that too! Still a nice piece though.
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Minor criticism but the shooting pose appears to be off. It appears as though you drew it piecemeal starting with a direct side view of the weapon and then drew the character afterward. The stock of the weapon is not being braced against the shoulder and her face is not pressed against the cheek weld of the stock, which makes it appear as though she is holding the weapon away from her body. Based on this positioning, it doesn't seem like she would be able to see through the optic. And a minor point, but why have a vertical foregrip if she is going to use the magazine for that very function? Also probably not best to be using the magazine for that purpose to begin with. You may some some folks with AR15/M16 type rifles in that position, but they are actually gripping the magazine well, which is a sort of "sheath" that the magazine inserts into as part of the receiver. For an AK-pattern rifle, there isn't a magazine well, and she is supporting the weapon by a detachable component. It's not the end of the world, but it's not a best practice either.
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As you can see, in most cases, the body, head and rifle are all pointed in the same direction. In your drawing the rifle is straight on, but the body and face are at a 3/4 view.
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I think one day I may enable critique box. But i'd rather not do it under commission.Β
Sure, you are probably right, and I agree with the whole, however I didn't read it all to be honest, because I don't understand much. Β Things you type about are Β detailed technical details. Something noticable for very few. So I don't understand most of the words you used anyway, because I Β have nothing to do with guns and am not Β interested in it to analyze each single part of how it's built, though that's not exactly my job. Β The commissioner is very familiar with guns though, and he accepted the sheet, so that makes me feel okay with the drawing. Β As you said: it is not the end of a world and I also have to agree with that.
Nevertheless thank you for your time and effort you put in writing it.Β
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Thanks for considering my comment.
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A Really wonderful job working on this! Go on do more okay?
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its been a while since i've seen an artist who can actually gun, really well done
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The AK-12 is really well done, good job, m8!
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If I were to volunteer; PLEASE PUT ME UNDER HER COMMAND
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Funny thing you say that, her character is a 4 star general in the story.Β ace starfighter pilot and excellent infantry ground fighter.
Precia was very patient and kind to do this for me
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That's an impressive resume! Hopefully Rainah can proove herself well
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I'm rootin' for her then
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Generous figure, realistically equipped a skilled. That is a *TRUE* action girl!
Good job!
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Very good for a Saiyreen warrior (that is Rainah's race).Β
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Precia really captured her character in this sheet very well.Β Just like I designed her for my story.
Love the details on the AK-12 rifle.
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Nice! And Precia did a amazing job ^^
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Thanks so much.Β I like what you did with her, especially the part on the bottom where Rainah is shooting her rifle.Β very nice job.
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Glad you like it. It was a pleasure to draw her
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got the shooting piece on the bottom almost exactly like how I described in my story (which is still under development.)
Nice touch for her personality with the part where Rainah has a mug of beer (my favorite adult beverage by the way).
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