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preciousdisastr — inspired words
Published: 2002-08-05 14:49:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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Description i find it funny
that sometimes our best inspiration
is the one we love with all our heart
the one we hate so passionately
who brought us so much joy
inflicted so much pain

but within all that
they are the one who can
take our troubles away
make everything seem ok
make sense of madness
all by making us express ourselves
thru words.
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Comments: 5

preciousdisastr [2002-08-05 15:08:49 +0000 UTC]

i think it is better as a prosework, it definately is just a thought process,

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lysticlon3r [2002-08-05 14:59:56 +0000 UTC]

they are the oneS... it needs an s. this might be better as a prosework though. it seems more like a thought process than anything. and, as they say, prose for the mind, poem for the heart. just a thought...

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preciousdisastr [2002-08-05 14:58:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks for pointing out the spelling error fixed it, and thanks for the comments to!

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estrotic [2002-08-05 14:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Excellent job. You've captured the feeling perfectly.

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darque9 [2002-08-05 14:52:48 +0000 UTC]

I like it (cept that "withen" should be "within"). What you say is quite true, and I love how the poem really captures the I just realized this and threw the thought onto paper.

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