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Randomnameofuser [2017-02-04 06:04:49 +0000 UTC]
... well that was interesting.
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RWBY42 [2015-11-07 06:59:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow...this is amazing...so visionary, so great! Good job!
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HyaRay [2012-09-20 02:56:31 +0000 UTC]
Been there. I feel ya.
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mesingze [2011-11-29 23:34:14 +0000 UTC]
".. and the night stretches on for months."
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pikapi19 [2011-09-08 08:42:55 +0000 UTC]
omg its so sad ithink im gonna cry! that insect part was grossssssssssss!!!
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Septeara [2011-06-21 23:41:06 +0000 UTC]
That was very well written. I can relate. The insects part was very beautiful and descriptive. I've read a few of your literature pieces and i have to say, I adore your mind
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MISAMISA2NDKIRA [2011-05-07 21:57:07 +0000 UTC]
This is really good! I love your sensory detail!
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GoldenGirl954 [2011-04-04 21:14:31 +0000 UTC]
Really vivid description.
And yes, I guess we all had those moments when we aren't feeling well
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0Meg [2011-03-10 20:32:51 +0000 UTC]
.... this made me cry(in a good way)
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Jinxxescapethefate [2011-03-02 21:32:29 +0000 UTC]
Amazing.
You described it perfectly.
Feel Better soon.
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TeakupFieldBerry [2011-02-22 02:58:47 +0000 UTC]
Lovely! I can identify with this; I've suffered from about three bouts with the flu, a cyst, mono, a concussion, and dehydration for the past year, and it's sucked. So great piece!
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mkdsingergirl [2011-01-09 01:56:52 +0000 UTC]
Funny thing is i'm reading this while i'm in bed sick with Step or something. Great discription
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LaurenLoverOfArts [2010-09-22 00:06:33 +0000 UTC]
What a wonderfully morbid piece of fiction.
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sommerfield-akatsuki [2010-08-03 02:41:54 +0000 UTC]
U did a great job, i felt this way too. i get strep every fall and it makes me feel terrible
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UltimaKhaos14 [2010-03-03 22:08:58 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like when I had a combo of mono/swine/strept a few months ago...
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zzzsleepyrockerzzz [2010-01-22 03:33:23 +0000 UTC]
This is beautifully written. i understand. weird stuff happens when youre sick. i love the way u personify death. rarely seen
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The-Kid-Who-Screams [2009-11-30 20:55:14 +0000 UTC]
dude forget that stuff! that was AWSOME!
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Deadwolf21rise [2009-09-27 15:15:46 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is something amazing. I've felt dis way many times, mostly cuz im a sickly child. But to see it expressed in words, thts awesome.
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numbuh-14000 [2009-09-26 00:05:04 +0000 UTC]
ugh. I know what you mean. I'm sick with the flu right now. Let's hope it's not swine flu.
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inkblot-101 [2009-09-21 16:03:20 +0000 UTC]
this is exactly how i feel right now ugh....
good writing... *attempts a smile*
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chiyna [2009-04-21 14:29:18 +0000 UTC]
This was very well written and descriptive. I could really feel your illness as I am feeling similarly myself today. Well done.
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JetCar [2009-04-06 09:45:15 +0000 UTC]
It reminds me of when I had chicken pox, the flu, and a cold all at once... Ugh. Chills, impossible to breathe, and constant migrains. :S
Being sick SUCKS!
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Simply-Autumn [2009-03-31 10:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Wow! You must have been pretty miserable!
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licoricefactory [2009-03-14 12:02:58 +0000 UTC]
I love how you personified death. Damn, you have inspired me to write more often.
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XdefineXweirdX [2009-03-13 22:27:24 +0000 UTC]
Amazing. You paint such a vivid picture with your words. Would you mind if i tried to draw this?
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InsmouthFishPerson [2009-03-04 00:20:14 +0000 UTC]
This is entirely different if you misinterprit the first scentence and are under the impression Death is the girl.
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Koronue [2009-02-20 23:12:03 +0000 UTC]
if thats how you get sick, i never ever wanna catch it!!
thats terrible
this was so long ago, i do hope that by now you are better
i love how you wrote this, bad that i find neat things in yer pain.... erm.... >_<
K
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Death-by-Candy [2009-02-09 09:49:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's brilliant. Nice imagery in the words .
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secret-soul [2009-02-08 22:28:40 +0000 UTC]
This is amazingly written. The emotion behind your words is quite surreal.
xx
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aestheticirony [2009-02-06 02:48:42 +0000 UTC]
it's very good. i love how you incorporated some sense of sensuality into it (or maybe i am just imagining this?). it's hard to describe the way you feel when you're reading this.
you are too good at this for your own good. even when you are sick, far too good.
and yes, i do know the feeling. i hope very much that you feel better, dear nirrimi.
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LilKirov [2009-02-05 07:06:58 +0000 UTC]
Nicely captured im sick all the time Dx. This speaks to me
*clap*
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112358clee [2009-02-04 15:41:35 +0000 UTC]
sounds like my last few days
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avalanchepark [2009-02-04 02:41:37 +0000 UTC]
riveting prose - a very dark image - I frankly didn't expect the subject to live
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wiccalaura [2009-02-03 22:48:39 +0000 UTC]
It's really cool... And I hope you get better soon
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dinosawrawr [2009-02-03 17:18:00 +0000 UTC]
i thought it was about a necrophiliac...my bad...
brilliant writing though!
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TomeiMikka [2009-02-03 07:16:27 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry this happened to you
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YouInventedMe [2009-02-03 01:59:09 +0000 UTC]
fantastic imagery
xo!
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SpamSp4mSpam [2009-02-02 23:20:59 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful. Way to make soemthing great out of shitty circumstances!
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brassteeth [2009-02-02 10:00:37 +0000 UTC]
great final line...
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entropy-herself [2009-02-02 06:41:51 +0000 UTC]
Grossly accurate. Haha. ^____^ This was me, as well... And I never get sick... But it finally happened. Still recovering. *koffkoff*
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Reizza [2009-02-02 06:19:53 +0000 UTC]
That sounds awful. I was pretty miserably sick last night as well though. So cold! Except for my head which was hot. Being sick suuuuucks. T_T
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PsychicSkitty [2009-02-02 04:02:20 +0000 UTC]
I think this is a very interesting poem that captures the feeling of being very sick in a very interesting way. I like it.
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