HOME | DD

Priceless911 — Blade's Night out

Published: 2013-07-15 10:24:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1766; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 26
Redirect to original
Description Even Blade knows how to sneak a little fun into her work schedule.

~~~~

Completely turning herself around and diving back down, Blade flew back into the street then vanished into the shadows of a very dark and narrow alley. Storm tried to see her from above but the shadows were too dark in the alley, so he couldn’t see anything. As he flew, a few griffin soldiers approached and spoke, “Where is she pony?”
Storm stopped in front of them and spoke, “Quickly she went into that alley. Fly through that entrance there and chase her through, I'll curve around the end and stop her before she gets out the other side!”
Rather than arguing with the pegasus’s suggestion the two griffins flew around to the start of the alley entered the dark shadows. Meanwhile, Sergeant Major Storm flew around to the end of the narrow alley and waited for her to make her attempt to fly passed him.

As he waited there expecting the surrounded pony to make a run for her freedom, Sergeant Major Storm froze in place, when he heard a bloodcurdling scream followed by sounds of scraping metal, then dead silence. As he looked into the dark and mysterious shadow, Storm started to see something in the darkness, at first it looked like a crescent moon, but then it quickly turned into a glare on a long blade, as he continued to watch he then saw another blade appear in the shadows. Then something rolled out of the alley and hit Sergeant Major Storm on his hooves. When he looked down at the object that was tossed at him, he was horrified to find out it was the head of one of the griffins who entered the alley. As he looked at the severed head, the pegasus heard loud scraping as he looked up at the charging mercenary. Blade had a unique series of blades attached to the outside of her wings as she charged down the alley scraping the weapon against the narrow alley’s walls as she charged.

As Blade quickly flew towards him, Sergeant Major Storm already knew she was too close to dodge, and that there was no way he could escape her attack. Luckily right as her blade got close to his throat, Major Bolt flew out of nowhere and pushed him out of the way, before falling victim to her attack. Quickly reacting to Major Bolts surprise appearance, Blade turned around and kicked Storm away from them knocking him unconscious as she started making multiple attempts to dig her blades into Major Bolt’s flesh instead. With each passing swing Major Bolt managed to dodge the attacks, however her quick movements and precise swings left absolutely no time for him to return with a counter attack of his own. All he could do was step back with each of her attacks knowing that without his chance to fight back he wouldn’t survive this, and the fact that he was unarmed only made his situation even worse. Finally, Major Bolt lost his footing when he unexpectedly stepped into a hole. Quickly reacting to this opportunity, Blade turned her wing sideways and used the top of her weapon to bash Major Bolt across his head and knock him to the ground.

Major Bolt quickly tried to shuffle to his hooves but he was stopped when he felt the curve of her blade across his throat. Major Bolt slowly looked up at her as she smiled, “You’re pretty good colt. In the past ten minutes, you’ve surprised me with both swift flying, and quick reflexes… however, you’re out of your league. So I'll bide you a fond farewell.”
Major Bolt glared at her and replied, “I’d say the same about you… but I’ve heard of the Cutters before so I’d expect no less. Just do what you have to and end this already.”
Blade raised her weapon to drop on Major Bolt’s head but before she could, a number of griffins quickly surrounded them as their leader yelled, “STOP RIGHT THERE!!!!”
The deadly mare smiled as she replied, “Make me!”
The Mare then disregarded her actions and instead of finishing the defeated pony, she jumped into the air charging the griffins that were above her, blocking her escape. Closing one wing and using her weapon as a shield she was able to block the first griffins attack and counter with the other wing’s blade removing the griffins right wing and causing him to fall to the ground, screaming in pain. The next griffin tried to strike her with his spear but she parried the spear and ran both her blades into the griffin’s throat removing his head completely and giving her a perfect opening to escape, without any obstacles in her path.

~~~

Art was made by (posted with permission)
Related content
Comments: 20

ChaosPhantom444 [2015-01-02 07:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Pretty and dangerous.  I like it!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Admiral-Thunder-Bolt [2013-08-02 20:05:12 +0000 UTC]

This guy is SOOOO not a pony based off of Black Beard!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Priceless911 In reply to Admiral-Thunder-Bolt [2013-08-02 21:11:41 +0000 UTC]

she isnt a male. Blade is wearing a dress. fav.me/d5x27g3

moments prior, she was attending a galla in the Griffin Royal palace that was celibrating the start of a war, (since the griffin kingdoms is a war mongering nation) yet she is a mercenary who was working for the enemy army, so she decided to make her intro, one to remember.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Admiral-Thunder-Bolt In reply to Priceless911 [2013-08-02 23:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh. I thought that the sparks comming off of the blades on HER dress were actualy fuses. Thats why I thought that the character was a ponyfied version of Black Bead. Sorry 'bout that.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Priceless911 In reply to Admiral-Thunder-Bolt [2013-08-03 04:42:09 +0000 UTC]

np  while she was in an alley she put on some special blades that attach to her wings. and the sparks where from the blades grinding against the alley walls

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Admiral-Thunder-Bolt In reply to Priceless911 [2013-08-03 12:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Thats why I thought they looked like fuses!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ShadowDancerBrony [2013-07-16 02:06:14 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Noble-Shield [2013-07-15 17:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Shoot..Noble isnt the only one with wing blades

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Priceless911 In reply to Noble-Shield [2013-07-16 04:27:02 +0000 UTC]

I've actually written a story on the wing blades, they were an experimental weapon developed by the griffin kingdoms but due to their weight and uncomfortable shape, no griffin could use them effectively in combat because of the decrease in mobility, and agility. however Blade has used them since she stole them at a young age so she was the first to fight effectively with them, and because of her devious beauty, the weapons where dubbed "The Cupid's Kiss" however this story is set about 1006 years ago, before Nightmare Moon's imprisonment.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Noble-Shield In reply to Priceless911 [2013-07-16 05:27:02 +0000 UTC]

You are now my new idol. I've been wanting to make stories like that and written that well for awhile now and that just blew my mind.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Priceless911 In reply to Noble-Shield [2013-07-16 10:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Thx, the way i see it, everything that play a role in the story has to have a history of its own. if its something you make up yourself then you should give it its own history.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Noble-Shield In reply to Priceless911 [2013-07-17 16:08:05 +0000 UTC]

whelp after this im realizing that if i want the main story i wanna write to be as good as i want it to be. I need to come up with a more casual story to practice on. I think thatd help me .

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Priceless911 In reply to Noble-Shield [2013-07-17 20:27:28 +0000 UTC]

i'll wish you luck. there isnt much advice i can give other then, choose something that interests you (comedy, action, adventure, drama ect.) the more interest you keep in the story, the better it will turn out for the readers. sometimes i find myself on the edge of my seat while i write just because while writing i may have a quick idea that throws a twist into the story and excites me for the next chapter. so dont always disregard these random ideas. even if you dont use it now, you can always fit it in later. Also find a good proofreader. id volunteer but im terrible even at my own work, lol. small things are understandable but the difference between Her and Here can always confuse the reader, and ruin a good moment in the story.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Noble-Shield In reply to Priceless911 [2013-07-19 10:58:53 +0000 UTC]

I can see how that would ruin, since Romance stories are really my main goal here lol. But really my main concern is the use of commas and the fact that my spaceing has been on the fritz lately

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Priceless911 In reply to Noble-Shield [2013-07-19 12:42:54 +0000 UTC]

just remember a comma is used for a slight pause, but if you want a longer pause then three periods "..." is best to used. for example pausing for dramatic effect, or when a character is heavily breathing (due to pain or exhaustion  or is hesitant on what to say next. This works very well in romance when the character is shy and worried he/she might say the wrong thing.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Noble-Shield In reply to Priceless911 [2013-07-20 01:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Ive noticed i nmy RPs then ive been using the three dots where the commas should be. lol i guess its a good thing i took up RPing again, the practice is really good. But thank you for that tip.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Priceless911 In reply to Noble-Shield [2013-07-20 04:00:55 +0000 UTC]

np 

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Dell-AD-productions [2013-07-15 17:48:28 +0000 UTC]

nice job

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Priceless911 In reply to Dell-AD-productions [2013-07-16 04:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Thx but it inst my art, i only created the character and wrote the scene that is being shown here.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Dell-AD-productions In reply to Priceless911 [2013-07-16 10:13:40 +0000 UTC]

still, I like it

👍: 0 ⏩: 0