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Published: 2012-04-30 13:21:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2821; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 49
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Description Lieutenant Viscous (first name Ardent) is an OC created to be in Star Bolt’s story

Ardent Viscous’ Profile
Name: Ardent Viscous
Aliases: Lieutenant Viscous
Species: Unicorn
Age: 18
Cutie Mark: Axe stuck in stump
Talent: Using her Magic to control her axe swing.
Birthplace: Trottinghame
Parents: Kara Viscous (Unicorn, Mother) Nathanial Viscous (Earth Pony, Father)
Siblings: none
Personality: Strong Willed, Meek, and Aggressive
Weapon of choice: Heavy Axe

Ardent viscous was born in the small woodland town of Trottingham located near the border of Equestria and the griffin Kingdoms, because of this she is very shy and nervous when approaching new ponies because griffin have the tendency to become offended is not approached properly.
she spent most of her foal hood helping her father with his job as a lumberjack, helping him clear forest so that the town could use the lumber for trading with the griffon kingdoms. With this kind of life style she became much stronger than most mares and was often criticized for not being filly-like like all the other mares and fillies in town.

When she was old enough to learn magic, she learned spells that allowed her to lift, move and maneuver heavy objects such as logs boulders and heavy axes. After a few years of practice, she was able to use this skill to its full potential by controlling her axe’s awing. She did so by controlling its power, direction, accuracy and even recovering from previous without throwing her bodyweight off or hurting herself. She doesn’t know when she received her cutie mark but one day after work, she discovered that she had received it without her noticing. (An Axe stuck in a stump).

With her stallion like strength and her brawny life style she often was mad fun of by the other mares of Trottingham so one day she couldn’t take it anymore so she packed the things and set out for Canterlot to find a new life. This was shortly after an eclipse covered the sun, and Equestria was ravaged by war. On her way to Canterlot, she met a charming stallion named Lieutenant Callous Drib. He explained to her that her talents can be very helpful if she where to join the nightmare legion and fought as an axe mare. Since the stallion was so helpful and kind she decided to take him up on that offer, and since then she has been with him throughout both their service in the nightmare legion, even after he was promoted to Captain.

She was just recently placed amongst Commander Bolt’s ranks and was assigned as the officer over the Pike ponies in his army. She is still shy about meeting new ponies, but now she has the confidence to fight through anything so long that Captain Drib is helping her.

Cutie Mark is my own design: fav.me/d4y48mj

Tears of a Fallen Star
Chapter 1: fav.me/d4w5ebv The Colt Wakes and Names Himself
Chapter 2: fav.me/d4w6vdr The Exam
Chapter 3: fav.me/d4we7si Commander Bolt’s Decision
Chapter 4: fav.me/d4x17cr The Friendly Foe and the Eclipsed Nightmare
Chapter 5: fav.me/d4xp4r8 Two Orphans, Celestia, And New Recruits
Chapter 6: fav.me/d4ynjjv Celestia's Stand, and Forgotten Foes
Chapter 7: fav.me/d4znl6f Peace in Death, Love in War, And Good in Evil
Chapter 8: fav.me/d50kgrs Confrontations between Nations
Chapter 9: fav.me/d51xoqq The Bolt That Cleared the Mist
Chapter 10: fav.me/d53tfvo The Fatal Funnel
Chapter 11: fav.me/d54h6dd Wounded Spiritually, Physically, and Emotionally
Chapter 12: fav.me/d55rfxx A Murder In Cloudsdale’s Shadow
Chapter 13: fav.me/d56edgz Past Wounds in Present Skies
Chapter 14: fav.me/d576517 Who I Am
Chapter 15: fav.me/d594aq2 My Home Front
Chapter 16: fav.me/d5apb0a The Enotions of War
Chapter 17: fav.me/d5bhdyt True Pain
Chapter 18: fav.me/d5di7hf Letter From a Mare in Love
Chapter 19: fav.me/d5e5mud A Meeting to End the War
Chapter 20: fav.me/d5eis0g By the Light of the Stars
Chapter 21: fav.me/d5eyn90 The Fallen Star
Chapter 22: fav.me/d5fhdeq A New Dawn

Other Characters in Tears of a Fallen Star
fav.me/d4ycees (Commander) Star Bolt
fav.me/d4xhjhe (Captain) Gem Stone
fav.me/d4xhz2s (Commander) Chrome Mist
fav.me/d4xlq9b (Captain) Frances Snow III
fav.me/d4y4xp6 (Captain) Callous Drib
fav.me/d54vlyb (Commander) Alfarinn Orem
fav.me/d54n8qv (General) Roza Neghvelskie
fav.me/d54n8pg (Chief) Jumb Rafi

image by: pony creator fav.me/d47efz4
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Comments: 19

ColeTrain4EVER [2012-07-29 19:31:37 +0000 UTC]

God, these ponies are so young....damn wars

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Priceless911 In reply to ColeTrain4EVER [2012-07-29 21:12:38 +0000 UTC]

yep when soldiers are needed that will be called in

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Daraniel1000 [2012-06-23 14:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Her tail look like Applejack's! Is Viscous her ancestor?

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Priceless911 In reply to Daraniel1000 [2012-06-24 02:12:56 +0000 UTC]

it very well could be. i dont want to give her conclusion becouse i have a very special chapter planed for the conclusion of the Nightmare Officers. but that is very possible with the conlusion that she will have.

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grimreeper2121 In reply to Priceless911 [2012-07-01 02:40:25 +0000 UTC]

spoilers spoilers lol

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Priceless911 In reply to grimreeper2121 [2012-07-01 02:50:27 +0000 UTC]

i know im too darn honest for my own good. lol

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grimreeper2121 In reply to Priceless911 [2012-07-01 03:34:40 +0000 UTC]

thats not a bad thing lol just dont reveal to much lol

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Priceless911 In reply to grimreeper2121 [2012-07-01 03:36:54 +0000 UTC]

i try not to.

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grimreeper2121 In reply to Priceless911 [2012-07-01 03:51:43 +0000 UTC]

good lol btw hows the cmc cutiemark contest going? anyone else come up with a good applebloom mark yet?

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Priceless911 In reply to grimreeper2121 [2012-07-01 04:06:40 +0000 UTC]

so far only one applebloome bloom idea thats about it.

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grimreeper2121 In reply to Priceless911 [2012-07-01 04:15:12 +0000 UTC]

sweet if im right i think thats my idea lol good luck with how that turns out

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Priceless911 In reply to grimreeper2121 [2012-07-01 04:32:22 +0000 UTC]

k ill start making them tomorrow

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grimreeper2121 In reply to Priceless911 [2012-07-01 05:23:02 +0000 UTC]

cool lol idc if its mine or not seeing the cmc with their marks will be cool

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ThatFerretOverThere [2012-05-19 18:02:12 +0000 UTC]

That's not a knife...
THIS is a knife.

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Priceless911 In reply to ThatFerretOverThere [2012-05-19 18:17:40 +0000 UTC]

I wanted a new type of soldier who wasn’t only the Tuff girl, but was unique in her own way. Even though she is, shy at the first impression. She is one axe mare you dint want to piss off. I also wanted to have another unicorn with a good talent that can be used in combat.

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yemto [2012-04-30 21:41:45 +0000 UTC]

How easily would she be able to cut through a think layer of steel?

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Priceless911 In reply to yemto [2012-04-30 21:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Good question, using her magic to increase the force of her swing could have a good effect even on steel, but I don’t think her axe can handle as much as her magic can dish out.

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ThatFerretOverThere In reply to Priceless911 [2012-05-19 18:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Kindly stop creating such magnificent characters, my mind will implode any second now xD

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Priceless911 In reply to ThatFerretOverThere [2012-05-19 18:20:10 +0000 UTC]

sad to say in the next chapter 3 more will apear but they wont be as much a part of the story as Star Bolts Officers

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